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I think this should be appropriate to tie in with the short story that I've posted. Check it here:
https://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=207287535
Now I don't know if this can be accepted because this a form that one of characters can assume. If not, that's okay, because its still the same character, but with much more power.
Name: Fighting Boost Jared Williams
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: This form is similar to his original appearance, but it is an upgrade. His hair is blonde and the tips have red fades. His eyes are red. The jacket he wears is now red with black flame designs and flame-like extensions on the front shoulders, and his shoes are also red with the same extensions on the sides. The gloves bears red steel plates on the backhand and emblem on the jacket has changed into a black flaming fist that appears to be striking down.
Residential Universe: JTTU
Bio*: This is an upgraded form to his original appearance. Get used to it.
Powers*: This form has greatly increases his capabilities, being able to hit harder than Yang, run much faster than Ruby, etc. While on this form, his energy attacks have been augmented with the power of flame, greatly increasing his destructive abilities. However, it should be noted that while in this form, these upgrades are not suited for dealing with gods.
Weapons and Equipment*: The Fighting Boost Brace is the main transformation device. It has two side buttons that activate the transformation and its finisher. There are three buttons that are labelled '1', '2', and '3' that activates a specific attack, and there are also combinations as well.
1=Fire Punch
2=Fire Kick
3=Fireball
1+2=Seismic Shout
1+3=Seismic Clap
2+3=Double Attack
1+2+3=Fighting Finish Strike
In addition, if he presses either one of the side buttons, he can summon his weapon in the name of 'Fire Fist Sword'. As the name implies, this is a red double-edged sword that has a huge fist on the tip, making it look somewhat of a hammer. By pulling down the ring on the bottom of the handle, the fist opens up to reveal its boiling core that can fire streams of flames and perform slap attacks.
Other: This is his first form, not a new character. |
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Name: Olivia
Age: (As in level) 17.
Gender: Female
Species: Mawile
Appearance: She's a Mawile. Therefore, she looks like a Mawile. However, Olivia's an inch shorter than the regular Mawile.
Residential Universe: Pokemon Universe
Powers: (As in moves) Fairy Wind, Bite, Fake Tears, Iron Head.
Other: Not very strong. She's a bit gentler than the regular Mawile. She only uses her jaws on the back of her head for battle. |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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Sage is accepted, but missmass isn't, because lack of detail. |
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lol you didn't know that this is another form of Jared. |
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Jared:
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Talavera and Chojuna:
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Devonecia, Jena, and Deborah:
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Mikoto and Geas:
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Daniel:
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Clyde and Elza:
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Anna and Mizelka:
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And now for this guy:
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I have a question. Are you allowed to fix your CS or make a new character if your CS was not accepted? |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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Either choice is fine. |
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tommy7612Join Date: 2011-09-03
Post Count: 16 |
Name:Tommy
Age:14
Species: latios hybrid.
Appearance:Wears a purple hoodie with a rainbow scarf. Dark brown hair and eyes.
(Latios form) Appearance: Purple and white, Wears a Rainbow scarf.
Home town: Rogueport.
Weapons: Wooden hammer.
Level:1
Stats:hp:10 Fp:5
Bio:???
Powers: Bp:3 Zap tap-Will damage any one that touches him physically in battle.
Partners:Platinum-Mimikyu Lv:27 |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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Declined, not only poorly made, but it doesn't follow the original CS. |
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HenrypikaJoin Date: 2013-12-22
Post Count: 6727 |
-_- fill out the rest
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Species:
Appearance:
Residential Universe:
Bio*:
Powers*:
Weapons and Equipment*:
Other:
No one can hold your hand and lead you around forever you know. |
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Name: Fin Ronit (The Rival)
Age: Somewhere in his 600s
Gender: M
Species: Demiurge
Appearance: 9'6 heavily armor clad (think of the skyrim late game armor) he's got way more than any normal person should and like switching between them
Residential Universe: Earth 9,254,828
Bio*: Most people only know him as a villain, an antagonist. He is the demiurge spoken of by the gospel of angels, spoken in the song of the heavens as the forsaken, the fallen, the rival. (haha I like comma splicing!1!!!1!11) As the demiurge that is not destined to lead but rather to sabotage and destroy the kingdoms and fortresses that the "good people" have set up. He's naturally inclined to work without friends because fate has him leaning towards killing those who associate with him rather than befriending them.
post note wow I was asleep when I wrote this he's just a bad guy who likes being the BBEG ok
Powers*: omnimagical, epical plan creation, and the ability to watch 11 year old minecraft youtubers for more than 5 minutes
Weapons and Equipment*: "Andskoti", his sword which is regrettably less legendary than he is but the sword tries ok, and "Lah", his staff which he casts dank spells with (assuming dank means summoning chicken wings)
Other*:this is what happens when you write a CS on a trip on mobile during time you should be sleeping |
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acceptedcause ur luckee
yay go you!
now have fun in the crap that the voice is causing |
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Name: (Paladin) Eric Jus'elin
Age: 45
Gender:m
Species: human
Appearance: standing at 6' 5" Eric is the largest of Lythia's Order. Tanned, brown shirt cut hair. A well kept beard and mustache cover his lower face. Sea green eyes that have a haunted, sad look. The heavy Silver and Blue armor of the Order with the crossed paladin banner symbol over his chest in gold. The symbol of Lythia, A glowing tree on both arm guards.
Residential Universe: Corrupted Worlds
Bio: Eric Jus'elin was born and raised in the Order of Lythia. Trained and taught to be a Paladin he was anointed at the age of 18 with his birth brothers and sisters. He was embued with Lythias power and he was transformed into the Paladin he is. Years later Tenebris and his ######### his foremost human being Vosa, attacked their kingdom bringing with them death, corruption and darkness. As the order fell around him the High Preist and Preistess sent him through a portal to preserve the order and start anew on a new world.
Powers: Healing and protection magic, can invoke Lythia's name to invoke bravery in allies
Weapons and Equipment: A paladins war hammer, two dirks
Other: Only weapons blessed by Lythia can destroy Tenebris's stronger ######### Normal weapons and abilities can kill undead and lesser demons and avoid Warriors |
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"accepted cause ur luckee"
even though my CS is atf tier?
yay!!! |
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Name: Garett
Age: ???
Gender: Male
Species: The Research of his species has not been taken.
Appearance: Very ugly
Residential Universe: The Universe of the Unknown
Bio*: He is unknown by many, yet feared by the ones that know him. Though he is not really a threat, he is still quite powerful, and could hurt many things at once. He would not kill, but he would also not help someone else kill. He is too complicated to know the answer.
Powers*: Multi-Hit
Weapons and Equipment*: Just him, himself, and definitely not I.
Other: He doesn't show up for boss battles very often, he might hurt someone, as he fears feeling guilty (and being guilty in general). He might show up if not many others do. |
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gavin1109Join Date: 2012-02-28
Post Count: 14 |
Name: Gavin Morman
Age: 39
Residential Universe: The Fallout Universe
Story: A pre-war man, Gavin had a wife,and an infant son, Landon. When the bombs dropped, they scurried to a vault. They had no idea there were cryo pods, and they were going to be boxed up! They went into a cryostasis. 260 years later, Gavin awoke from his sleep, finding that his son was kidnapped. He went to the biggest city in the Commonwealth of Massachusetts, now just the Commonwealth. A detective named Nick Valentine was captured. He went out to find him, returning with Nick. Nick helped him find the kidnapper, Kellogg. When Gavin killed him, Kellogg was something called a synth, a human-like robot. A year later, he blew up the Commonwealths boogyman, The Institute. The Railroad accepted him into their ranks, and he is now the leader of the Railroad.
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: Brown hair, gash over his right eye, muscular appearance. Vault 111 jumpsuit.
Weapons: An automatic plasma rifle, # ### pistol.
Equipment: An armored vault 111 jumpsuit, with a holster on the chest,leg, and arm.
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gavin1109Join Date: 2012-02-28
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my secondary is a revolver |
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@Ethan:
Declined. It feels way too barebones, especially the Appearance. Elaborate more, please.
@Gavin:
Basically the Fallout 4 protagonist? Elaborate a li'l more on Appearance, too. Like eye color, height, maybe weight... that sorta stuff. Then you're free to go.
@Luckee:
Consider yourself "Luckee" you were accepted. (Totally no pun intended /s) |
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HenrypikaJoin Date: 2013-12-22
Post Count: 6727 |
Expecting Marc with Sans to appear outta nowhere. |
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@Faction
Garett is about the size of a human, and he frequently stays away from most human life (basically anything that isn't a plant), as he doesn't want to feel or be bad. He looks scary, ugly, and can attack everything in sight, but really, he is just misunderstood, and doesn't know how to get one to be friends with him. For that matter, no one knows his age, as he has been living for as long as the Dimension he came from has existed. Some say he doesn't even age.
Is that enough for ya? |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
Post Count: 25897 |
cepted |
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