Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
So,"The Art of Bloodbending" is a series made by me,about a boy called Peter,a boy that lives in the darkest future of the Earth:The Third World War...
So,this boy,after loosing hes mom,tries in many ways to fight against Russian soldiers,the country that started this war.But,in he's first try,he looses an eye,and a finger...So,he decides to try in other ways.So,he visits he's Grandpa,that was said he was a kind of wizard...And,so here it starts.whit the first Episode:
EPíSØDĘ 1:The Old Village(Part 1)
Soldier 1:SHOOT SHOOT SHOOOOOO....(Tziiiiiuuuuuuuuuuuhhhh!A bullet goes trough hes ear,and the next,trough he's chest.)Argghhhhh!
Soldier 2:O,gosh!!Josh,hurry,get up,we are going to the medic!
Soldier 1:No,Jack....Sorry......(Takes grenade,and get's out ring)
Soldier 2:Hey,did you heard that click?
Soldier 1:Seeya,Jack...(All base explodes,with all with the raiders that were raiding it)
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(Far away from the Russian exploded base...)
Peter:Ugghhh......Where am I....?(Wakes up on a red-brownish carpet)
Person:So,m'boy,don't you think you are a bit too theen for running on ruined of war streets like these?Jeez,only 17 years...
Peter:Hold on,can you tell me where am I?
Person:(Preparing a tea) 'course,you are at our little village,partially isolated of that war,Pamoran.Feel just like home...(Gives tea)
Peter:(Takes tea,and tastes it)Mmmm....Hmmm,but sir,can you tell me who you are?
Person:Jaggerson,Vilarian Jaggerson,or just Jagg.
Peter:(Is thinking deep in his mind)
Jagg:But anyway,where were you heading too?
Peter:Ohh,just finding my grandpa...He is in....Wait,what's the name of this Village?
Jagg:Pamoran?
Peter:(Catches by own head,and is very happy)God,here must be my grandfather!!!
Jagg:Hmmm,maybe I can help you find him.
Peter:Why not...
(They both quit the house,with 2 red eyes,in the dark,following how they walk away...)
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End of Part 1.
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
EPíSØDĘ 1:The Old Village(Part 2)
Jagg:So...
Peter:So...
Jagg:So,is this the house?
Peter:I think yes...Yes,this is it!(Knoks at door,and a rock almost falls in his head,but an interesting instict forces hem to move right before the rock falls,and a note falls with it)Woah!That was a close one!Hey,look... a Note...It says:
"Dear Peter,if you're head didn't got sliced in two,then,we are going to meet at this night,on the roof of Jagg's house.And if you ask me,I don't have a link close to him,but I watched you ALL the time...I will tell you more...
You're Royal gould of BloodBenders.
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Jagg:Bloodbenders...Ighh...
Peter:What are those?
Jagg:People that are bending blood...Some cheap wild hounds...
Peter:We should give them a change...But we must keep the guard up.
Jagg:I think so...What we do until night?
Peter:We will see....
(Far away,back at the Russian Base...)
Josh:Ughhh.....Auuugh.......What the.....Am I dead...?
???:No,but you will be,if you don't anser to our questions!!!
Josh:*In mind*Russian soldiers...Duh.....
???:So,let's start...
Josh:That's what she said...
???:You think it's funny,huh...?We will see how funny is IT!!!
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End of Episode 1. |
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xpomodzJoin Date: 2010-11-29 Post Count: 26 |
We are looking for members like you Arnold. We are a movie makeing group come to this link if you want in http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=231486 its your choice
You'd be a great script writer in our movie makeing group
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
Thanks,Pomo.I would like to.So,let's return to the Second Episode! |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
EPíSØDĘ 2:"The Blue Raven"
(After a long day,in wich Jagg showed Peter the Village,they returned home.)
(KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK)
(When Jagg answers,at the door,is only a little blue raven,with a note in her buck.When Jagg takes it,the raven flies away.)
Peter:A note?
Jagg:Yeah...It's for you!
Peter:Let me see....
"Peter,you MUST hurry up at the village center!Is the perfect moment to tell you what I got to say!"
You're Grandfather,Jimmson,
(The note slowly falls from Peter's hand,while he's hand is shaking)
Peter:Omg,I will finnaly meet hem!
Jagg(Prepared to open the door)So,whatcha waiting for?!
(After 15 mins)
(A guy in some black robes is drinking some whine,standing by a wall of a building)
Person:Hey,over here...(Peter and Jagg aprouch)
Peter:Grandpa Jimmson?
Jim:Peter!(Both hug,and keep like 2 seconds of silence.)
Jim:So,as the Prophecy said,you will join the Goul that you're dad was in,as I was in too....The gould of Bloodbenders...
Peter:So...I was supposed to be a...
Jagg:Yeah,a Bloodbender...
Peter and Jagg:...
Jim:So,welcome at the Bloodbenders,Peter....Or,may I call you...."The Blue Raven"?
(Back at the Russian Base...)
???:I ASK YOU AGAIN!!!(Yells the person)WHAT IS THE CODE FOR THE WEAPON LOCKER IN THE AREA 69 UNDERGROUND LAB?!?!!?
Josh:Never!
(Person slaps Josh,and then,stabs hand with a knife)
Josh:Argghhhh!I will never talk to you,you monster!!!
???:Again!What is the code?!
Josh:NEVAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
???:Know something?Talk next morning...I already got bored of you...No food for naughty kids...Hehe....(Get's out of the cell,and closes the door)
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End of Episode 2. |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
You an say what you think of it,or can send(IF YOU REALLY WANT) suggestions to me,by PMing!Posting every Weekends,and maybe rarely in weektime. |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
EPíSØDĘ 3:The First Lesson (Part 1)
Jim:(Yawn) Good morning,everybody...(Get's up)
Peter:(Is already making a tea,since he woke up way earlier)Want some tea?
Jim:Ok...(Takes the tea,and takes a swig.)So,are you ready?
Peter:For what?
Jim:You're first Bloodbending lesson,what else?
Peter:Uhuh....Well,why do I need to learn to Bloodbend?
Jim:Becouse the prophecy says that you are the boy,the Hero that will stop the Third World War.
Peter:Do you think so?
Jim:What do you mean?!You are THE CHOOSEN ONE!!!
Peter:Me?No,seriously,ME?!
Jim:Peter,I SWEAR I will teach you how to Bloodbend my best as I can!
Peter:But...I have some Issues to don't be sure I am the choosen one.
Jim:Well,only the time can answer you at this question...(Takes another swig)
(1 hour earlier,at the Russian base)
???: So,I hope you finaly learned you're lesson.Talk,slug!
Josh:Know what I learned?I learned what kind of Jerkish donkey you are!!!
???:(Slaps the soldier)YOU SHOULD BETTER TALK,SLUG!!!!!!!!!!
Josh:You can't get anything out of me!
???:Ok,then....(Prepares electric chair)Guard,here,NOW!
(Guard come,and put Josh on the Electric Chair)
???:Before I press the button,I ask you the last time that I show mercy:What is the code of the American Base?!
Josh:I AM NOT GOING TO TALK!!!(Kicks in "Eggs")
???:(Falls on ground,almost crying becouse of Pain)P-press the bu-button!N-Nnn-NOW!(Get's up,and closes the door of the torture room they were in,and before it totaly closes,a horible scream comes out of the room)
(Back,at ǷÅMƟRÄN)
Jim:So,are you ready?
Peter:I think yes....
Jim:We will use a puppet full of blood,to test you're skills.And now,the first move:Imagine you are catching the pupet,even if you are at like 2-3 meters of it.Catch....And push!No,not like that!Let me show you....Catch....AND PUSH!!!(Pupet explodes)You are going to start learning....Slowly,and sure...
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The end of Part 1 |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
EPíSØDĘ 3: The First Lesson(Part 2)
Jim:Goood...Let's see it again!Catch....(Puppet glides closer) AND PUSH!(Puppet explodes) Well done,Peter!Now let's try something a bit harder!Let's try something less lethal...This one is for weakening a person.You must feel like catching it's muscles from it's hand,and puttin daggers in it.He's hand won't be able to move of that pain.
Peter:Hmmm,sounds painful.
Jim:And it is.(Moves strangely fingers,and slowly,the hand of the puppet is becoming more and more tinny,and at the final,it almost breaks.)Like this.Use as much force as it is needed.No more.....Or not less!(Hand breaks)
(While they were practicing in the yard,a blue raven flies far away,to a dark,scary,and empty big field....There,it land near a black burned tree.)
Person in black robes:So,the boy already started practicing...Hmmmm.....Come on,Purple Bolt.Any other informations?(The Raven swings it head,like a "No")
Person in black:Thanks anyway...(Heads back,and then goes away,slowly vanishing in far away.)
(Back at Pamoran)
Jim:I remember that you,Peter,wanted to fight against the russian soldiers...But I understood it was personally.But why?
Peter:Recently,they took my dad,you know,Josh,and my Uncle,Jake...
Jim:JOSH?!MY JOSh WAS CAPTURED?!
Peter:I don't know.All I know it is that he went to take some secret informations at a Russian Base,but never came back...
Jim:M'boy,you know that I won't let you down when you will go to fight the Russians!It's not abut that you won't be ready,it's about that they TOOK MY SON!!!(Breaks puppet,punching just in the air)Peter,tomorow we go!
Jagg:What?No way!Peter's injuried,and he's injuries are still bleeding!Just look at his finger!Or where it was!
Peter;No,Jagg.They took my dad.in one close day,maybe right tomorow,me and Grandpa Jim will have revenge.
Jagg:Ok,then,I think I can't stop you...all I can to do is to tell you...Good...luck....
(At the night,Peter and Jim prepared their stuff for the long journey)
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End of Episode 3
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eijaJoin Date: 2009-06-01 Post Count: 250 |
EPíSØDĘ 3: The First Lesson(Part 2)
Jim:Goood...Let's see it again!Catch....(Puppet glides closer) AND PUSH!(Puppet explodes) Well done,Peter!Now let's try something a bit harder!Let's try something less lethal...This one is for weakening a person.You must feel like catching it's muscles from it's hand,and puttin daggers in it.He's hand won't be able to move of that pain.
Peter:Hmmm,sounds painful.
Jim:And it is.(Moves strangely fingers,and slowly,the hand of the puppet is becoming more and more tinny,and at the final,it almost breaks.)Like this.Use as much force as it is needed.No more.....Or not less!(Hand breaks)
(While they were practicing in the yard,a blue raven flies far away,to a dark,scary,and empty big field....There,it land near a black burned tree.)
Person in black robes:So,the boy already started practicing...Hmmmm.....Come on,Purple Bolt.Any other informations?(The Raven swings it head,like a "No")
Person in black:Thanks anyway...(Heads back,and then goes away,slowly vanishing in far away.)
(Back at Pamoran)
Jim:I remember that you,Peter,wanted to fight against the russian soldiers...But I understood it was personally.But why?
Peter:Recently,they took my dad,you know,Josh,and my Uncle,Jake...
Jim:JOSH?!MY JOSh WAS CAPTURED?!
Peter:I don't know.All I know it is that he went to take some secret informations at a Russian Base,but never came back...
Jim:M'boy,you know that I won't let you down when you will go to fight the Russians!It's not abut that you won't be ready,it's about that they TOOK MY SON!!!(Breaks puppet,punching just in the air)Peter,tomorow we go!
Jagg:What?No way!Peter's injuried,and he's injuries are still bleeding!Just look at his finger!Or where it was!
Peter;No,Jagg.They took my dad.in one close day,maybe right tomorow,me and Grandpa Jim will have revenge.
Jagg:Ok,then,I think I can't stop you...all I can to do is to tell you...Good...luck....
(At the night,Peter and Jim prepared their stuff for the long journey)
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i love dat part good good |
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xpomodzJoin Date: 2010-11-29 Post Count: 26 |
I need a script from you please Its about a war and you make the characters and all the other captions lines and everything |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
OK,Xmodz,I start working on it.
EPISØDĘ 4: Mass Breakout
Peter:Do we have more until there?
Jim:I don't know,we will see....
Peter:Awww.....Why didn't we took the bycicle?
Jim:Took what?
Peter:Are you kidding me?Oh,nevermind...
Jim:Hey,I already see the smoke from the factories!
(They continue walking,until they arrive at the Base)
Peter:Hey...I am feeling we are close to daddy...
Jim:Yes,this is a power of the Bloodbenders.Even blind,they can reconise a person.And yes,they can do it even while the person is miles away!
Peter:In this room!...D....Da....Dad?!
Josh:Peter?!(They both hug each other)
Peter;Dad,you have a injury on you're hand...It looks very bad...
Josh:No problem!While we have each other,we can escape.
(So,Peter,Josh and Jim are heading on the hall,finding Peter's uncle,Jake,and meanwhile,Peter is thinking...)
Peter:Awww,the poor prisoners...Why don't we try to do a mass breakout?
Josh:Ok...Ah,and the informations I need!
Jim:Ok,let's hurry then!
Josh:So,dad,what you done while I was in the war?
Jim:Hmmm,tried to stop it.But,failed.But now,that we have Peter,we can stop the war.
Josh:What...What do you mean?!
Jim:Peter is the most powerful Bloodbender.
Josh:Really?Peter?
Peter:I got no ideea.Grandpa Jim told me this only yesterday.
Josh:Ah,you,only you,dad,from 10 thousand people,only you can teach the son of you're son bloodbeding...But,eh,if this is his destiny...I can't say nothing,son...It's you're decision.Oh,I almost forget...Happy birthday!(Hands a little chocolate cake)
Peter:What...?O,yes!My birthday!I almost forget about it!And,today it should be my sister's birthday...Too bad she in the Russian Army.
Josh:Even worse,Peter...She was up to torture me,to get informations of the American Base.
Peter:(While is unlocking all the cells from the base)I promise,dad.When I will meet her once,it will end up with that messed up,named like that,"SISTER"!!!
Guard:Hey,what are you doing there?!
(Peter pushes the guard out of the room,and then closes the door)
(All the cells open,and a entire mess is found on the principal hall.)
General:Son of a....
???:Peter!
Peter:Uncle...?
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eijaJoin Date: 2009-06-01 Post Count: 250 |
hmmm....good good
3/5 |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
Eija,you came on roblox with 1 month and 24 days difference of me. |
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eijaJoin Date: 2009-06-01 Post Count: 250 |
o.o |
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eijaJoin Date: 2009-06-01 Post Count: 250 |
Yep good idea :D |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
Maybe...But,only one problem:I have more problems:1.I got other more important stuff!2.I got stuck in a INFINITE LOOP OF IDEEAS THAT I CAN'T PUT THEM IN ORDER!>.<
So,I need someone ELSE to continue this!All the person's that think can handle this,pw33z send me a PM saying that you want to continue my series.The next episodes will continue from the last,Episode 4(I think,or any episode it was the last).Before posting an episode,send me it,and I will corect it,if is needed.If not,well,then very good job!ATENSCHUN!!!Those who post an episode without my allowing will be INGORED!!! |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
Xmodz,I didn't got out of imagination or something,is just about the other stuff I got to do!Sorry,but you can still trust me with the scripts! |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
So,the so waited episode 5...came
EPíSØDĘ:5:Urania(Part 1)
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Jake:Peter...I am so happy to see you...(A little tear comes out of that cruel eyes,from those dry eyes,like they never touched water...or they never had feelings...)
Peter:Uncle Jake!(Hugs)You crying,right?(Sigh)
Jake:Yes,I do...you do aswell...
Peter:(Laughs a bit)
Jim:Awww,very touching...it...it really makes me....IT MAKES ME THROW UP!!!Let's get outta here before all the army will jump on us!
(They started running on the principal hall,but they are stopped by something...)
Peter:Urania...You...(Has a very angry face,like it just saw the Death that took her mother)
Urania:Pepe,you wasn't bright enouch to join to Winners?
Peter:I didn't becouse...BECOUSE I AM NOT A TRAITOR!!!
Urania:Seriously...?What about mom?I hope she yelled in pain while I was torturing her...she looked funny,but I was that focused on killing her,that I didn't heard her....
Peter:Gah!HOW YOU DAre.....?!
Urania:Woof woof,but where is the bitting?
Peter:Urania,I prevent you,that I am in a nasty mood,and you should flee back with your stupid russian army!
Urania:Aw,but I came to have a game!It's called:Loosers die,Winners survive.
Peter:Yeah,and how is that game...?
(Soldiers soround Jim,Jake,Josh,and Peter)
Urania:Something...like this...(Grins)Now,I gotta go...have fun...
Peter:(Looks around at all the soldiers)We are not going to make it)
(Suddenly,a Blue Ravem shows up,and attacks the circle of 24 Soldiers,and it takes them down by bitting their eyes out)
Jim&Josh:Omg,is this the Blue Raven?
Peter:Uncle Jim...With did you called me out there the Blue Raven?Do I have any aprouch to this Raven?
Jim:Every protector of our gould will be friend with the Blue Raven,also known as the Purple Bolt.This means that you got a powerful and little friend like near you.
Jake:Ok,we should hurry!Urania is escaping!
Peter:No,she is mine...(Runs with an incredible speed)(At the end of the hall,Urania turns back to Peter)
Urania:Was it supposed from the beggining to end up like this...?
Peter:I am sure it was...
(They are both prepared for fight)
Urania:Come on,Pepe,give up...
Peter:NEVER!!!(Tries to send her a wave,but Urania dodges)
Urania:Come on,Pepe,that's all you got?Too bad!!!(Does a frontflip over Peter,and stabs hem in the back)
Peter:Agh!(Pushes Urania into the metal wall)
Urania:See,brother?I was always better than you...
Peter:(Feeling dizzy,shaking,and barely keeping on own feet)No,Urania....this is not the end...
Urania:Good night,Pepe...I hope you will never wake again!
(Everything turns black for Peter)
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28 Post Count: 17612 |
"BloodBending"?
Hmmm...*flashbacks to "AVATAR: the last airbender"*
Yeah..........................! |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
Yep,right =/
I was inspired a really bit by Avatar,to be honest.But,who doesn't love Avatar:The last Airbender?! |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28 Post Count: 17612 |
I think that most people like the 2 out of the 3 existing famous "avatar"s.
I'm being one of them. |
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Arnold99Join Date: 2009-07-25 Post Count: 60 |
Don't get it,Dude... |
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sonic17THJoin Date: 2007-12-28 Post Count: 17612 |
There are 3 "Avatar"s in a video format:
-Avatar: The last airbender
-James Carmeon's Avatar
-The Last Airbender (Originally supposed to be called "Avatar")
I like the first 2 listed. |
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