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Sunburst1031
#45915855Thursday, April 21, 2011 9:32 PM GMT

The first 3 scenes of the feauture YouTube film. I get it's kinda bad, Rug437 did all the good parts. Posting rest soon. SCENE ONE-The Club (Seanna, Trent, and Ryan are dancing with several others. Allie is in the lounge drinking a Coke. Suddnely, the Dj stops the record) DJ (played by Vivian): Crap, the speakers and system broke....Everybody leave, ok? Its just stupid speakers! SEANNA: But I wanna party! ALLIE: (muttering to herself) Drama queen...it's just a nightlcub. RYAN: (bangs with drumsticks on speakers) Hm.... TRENT:Oh well ALLIE: Youc an go here again in a few days. SEANNA:But it's my darn birthday! RYAN: Let me entertain. (Ryan gets on stage and begins drumming) ALLIE: Hmm.. (gets up and plays bass) TRENT: (lightbulb above head gets on stage with guitar) ALLIE: All we need is a singer,,, SEANNA: (Steps up and belts a lnog note) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SONG-CAN YOU FEEL IT? (Written by Rug437) (SEANNA) Cant you feel it Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah Blah blah blah blah blah blah Yea yea yea yea yea yea yea yea yea Throw your hands up in the air Catch that feelin yea yea yea You talkin nonsense right here Fell it comin up the road (ALLIE) Cant you feel it oh yea (RYAN) Can't you feel it coming at you (TRENT) Can't you feel it catching on to you (SEANNA) Can't you feel that I'm in love with you oh yea Can't you feel that I'm so desperate Can't you feel that I so want you Can't you feel that there is something in the air Can't you feel it oh can't you feel it oh why don't you feel it ohhhhhhhh (ALLIE AND TRENT) Can't you feel I'm so desprite Can't you feel that I love you (SEANNA AND RYAN) Cant you feel my world revolving around you Can't you that I hate you for not knowing (ALL) Can't you feel it Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! (SEANNA) Cant you feel it oh why can't you feel it oh why don't you feel it don't you feel that I'm in love with you Oh yea if you lookin for something look right at me can't you feel there is something in the air it's revolving around so why just cant you feel it I'm so desprite please baby please feel it yea! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ (Everyone in the audience claps and the performers look happy) VIVIAN: Hey there. RYAN: Who are ya girl? VIVIAN: Vivian Marie Slater, CEO and producer of Slater Records. you guys were phenominal. Look here kiddos, we gotta get you a recording contract. i recorded the entire performance here (shows audio recorder) and we could make it a single. So you wanna be super stars? TRENT: oh my God! This is awesome! Luv to dude. SEANNA: A dream come true!!!!!!!! RYAN: Purple penguins with unicorn horns! :p Jk, Sure! ALLIE: Well, as long as I'm doing something I love, playing the bass. VIVIAN: Great! Now we gotta ask your folks about this, and I need to talk to the employees and commitees at Slater Records. So chill for a bit.(Vivian walks away) SEANNA: I'm psyched! Hell, is this real? Pinch me! RYAN:(pinches) SEANNA: WHY DID YOU PINCH ME? RYAN: (shrugs) TRENT: (Plays some notes on guitar) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ SCENE TWO-The Recording Studio VIVIAN: Ok guys, we hired you some background singers: Hayley and Quinn) HAYLEY: (Takes Vivian's Coke) Yum.... VIVIAN: Hey! QUINN: Be sophisticated Hayley! (gets in place behind the band) VIVIAN; We've been rehersing our sophmore single for weeks. We got "Can You Feel It?" To number 6 on the charts! We gotta get #1! HAYLEY:(Winks at Ryan) Hey...tiger RYAN: (Growls) Hi (hugs Hayley) ALLIE: >_> So cheesy. (Plays some bass notes) TRENT: :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE THREE-Break ALLIE: *Eats a lunch* TRENT: So...er...you're a really good bass player ALLIE: *hcewing* Uh huh. You're good at guitar. TRENT: Wanna hear my song? ALLIE: I guess *continues eating* TRENT; *Plays a calming long, romanctic melody) ALLIE: I like it! *smiles* TRENT: *Smiles* I wrote it for...a special lady. ALLIE: Who? There's plenty of young women in this world, and I bet according to this song, only one girl meets your expectations. She must be whimsical. TRENT: Yes, she's the only one I'll ever love. ALLIE; That's so sweet, yet cheesy ;) More sweet though. TRENT: I hope she was listening...she gotta get the message ALLIE: Who is she? TRENT; My love, obviously ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
rug437
#45916735Thursday, April 21, 2011 9:45 PM GMT

I love it should I make script 2 and if i should remind me what is happening there
Sunburst1031
#45917326Thursday, April 21, 2011 9:54 PM GMT

SCENE 4- THE STUDIO VIVIAN: Ok, places! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SONG-GOODBYE (Written by SUnburst1031) (Throughout the song, Quinn wil sing beautiful "oohs" Hayley do random obnoxious things) (SEANNA) So I thought that you're the only one for me. I fell into your romantic melody. I dreamed of our future, our ways, our own, But I relized your love ain't a home. So goodbye baby, kick you down on the streets tonight don't need you anymore Found a hot new boy that fit my tastes, my oh my isn't he perfection! You are a nightmare my dork, so leave me out of your silly old life Run for your life boy, run for your life boy, forget our love, this is goodbye ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------VIVIAN: Cut! Hayley what are you doing? HAYLEY: *STanding posh and prety* Quinn wanted me to be Sophisticated. VIVIAN; You drank my coke, stole Trent's hat, and went "NAAAAH!!!!" QUINN: Miss. Slater, I apologize for this. Hayley's my younger stepsister, that's all. And it's just that Hayley's dad.... HAYLEY:*Sighing, and whispers "Better be mature girl"* Well my dad was sent to Afganistan a while ago, and yesterday, I learned Daddy ain't...ain't ..ain't *starts to cry* QUINN: Her father is dead, and that's how she lets out her emotions VIVIAN: By going crazy? QUINN: No, she's trying to forget about it. She always does that. HAYLEY: I'm crazy...*sniff* QUINN: No you arn't You're a swee,t awesome girl. VIVIAN: *sad* I apologize for allo this you went through. I will give you the break *gives Hayley and Quinn big bear hugs as the stepsisters leave the room* VIVIAN: Ok Seanna, continue from 2nd verse. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SONG-GOODBYE(REPRISE) By Sunburst1031 (SEANNA) So I think that you're a bad man for me You cheat anf lie, that outghta be crazy And I'm thinking "What the heck is wrong with him" I better boy, better keep my reasons slim. So goodbye baby, kick you down on the streets tonight don't need you anymore Found a hot new boy that fit my tastes, my oh my isn't he perfection! You are a nightmare my dork, so leave me out of your silly old life Run for your life boy, run for your life boy, forget our love, this is goodbye (ALL) I'll fight and write and try till I get my revenge. Ooohooo I'l keep you outta my heart and mind for a lend. Ooohooo (SEANNA) Oh! I can't take it take it take it take it take it take it!!!! (TRENT) *Guitar solo* (ALL) So goodbye baby, kick you down on the streets tonight don't need you anymore Found a hot new boy that fit my tastes, my oh my isn't he perfection! You are a nightmare my dork, so leave me out of your silly old life Run for your life boy, run for your life boy, forget our love, this is goodbye (SEANNA) Goodbye. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SEANNA: That was epic. Just cut out Trent, Allie, and Ryan. VIVIAN: We might have to autotune it...Well good enough for now. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 5-The Garden JAMES: *waits for Seanna in the garden, holding flowers* SEANNA: Hi Jamie! *pecks cheek* JAMES: I bought you these. They remind me...of you. SEANNA: *gasping for a long time like she;s happy* THEY SMELL LIKE SALMON! I remind you of gross rotten SALMON? JAMES: *sniffs* They smell like you, you're Vanilla-Berry perfume and all. They reflect your eyes with the blue color, make me dream about you all the time! SEANNA: Wait...how do you know I use Vanilla-Berry perfume? JAMES: *Shrugs* SEANNA; YOU WERE LOOKING IN MY DRAWER! You must have my new green blouse! JAMES: No mam... SEANNA: That's it! That's..it! It's all done James, All done! JAMES; *looks at her with charming eyes* SEANNA: Well, for reputational reasons. *holds James hand* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Posting more soon.
TylArak
#45919452Thursday, April 21, 2011 10:23 PM GMT

I like most of it. On the 2nd part from the end either be both of the girls or just Seanna? Cuz it doesn't make much sense for a dude to be singin bout having a hot dude bf.
rug437
#45927031Friday, April 22, 2011 12:17 AM GMT

Well Now can i try script 3 and remind me what is happening then
purple513
#45929931Friday, April 22, 2011 12:58 AM GMT

sienna plz
rug437
#45930019Friday, April 22, 2011 12:59 AM GMT

@purple This is the script of the movie she is already taken and all you can be is a parent
purple513
#45931753Friday, April 22, 2011 1:24 AM GMT

oh but great script
Sunburst1031
#45953094Friday, April 22, 2011 12:57 PM GMT

Thanks :) I'm adding two new characters by the way.Purple you can have the girl... CATHERINE (KATE): A sweet, energetic girl, can be a diva, a fabulous dancer. MARK: James' best friend, but Seanna dates Mark and James at the same time.
Sunburst1031
#45965774Friday, April 22, 2011 5:02 PM GMT

The dramatic romantic, scene's 6 and 7! Scene 6-The Lounge (Seanna, Trent, and Allie are chilling out, chatting about random stuff in their personal lounge when a young techie, Catherine, enters) CATHERINE: So... I heard ya'll are comin gout with an album! I love those two songs...Can You feel it! And Goodbye! (hums goodbye) RYAN; Thanks! Xmon, take a seat! CATHERINE: *Sits and hears a "fart" noise: Whoopie cusion* Hey! That was uncalled for! *laughs RYAN: I see you like pranks too, don't ya? CATHERINE: I have a b,oyfrie,nd, don't ask me out. ALLIE: So Trent, is Catherine that "girl?" TRENT: Follow me Allie! ALLIE: Why? TRENT: Because!!!! SEANNA: Oooh! Little hot lovebirds that have no talent! Nice! ALLIE: *rolls eyes as the two leave the room* SEANNA: So wanan hear my song Catherine, Ryan? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SONG-TURN IT UP- Writen by Sunburst1031 (SEANNA) (Rapping like Ke$ha) Hey hey hey you there on the floor, strutting your stuff all hot and gallore. You think you got it all, but hey you don't know, you don't know my show! (SEANNA) (Singing) Turn it up turn it up, hey there Mr. DJ I gotta show my stuff and rock out the night Turn it up turn it up, hey there Mr. DJ I got it all under control, heck yeah! (CATHERINE) (mimicing funnily) You really suck you really suck, hey there Seanna You're always so pushy and sassy and upright You really suck you really suck, hey there Seanna You don't have it under control, yeah! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SEANNA: *furious* YOU reall suck Catherine! CATHERINE: Then why are you such a diva? SEANNA: I'm a born superstar, unlike you RYAN: I like gingersnap cheesecake. By the way Seanna, that was a horrible comback. SEANNA: *rolls eyes* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 6-Garden QUINN: oh Ryan, don't you love this garden? RYAN: Yeah, it makes me think deeply about...you. RYAN: *Kiss.es quickly on cheek* RYAN: We've been together for a long time. Today's our 6 month anniversery. QUINN: Well, I got you this (shows Comedy movie) RYAN: Oh Quinnie... QUINN: Oh, I got you something, hold on a sec RYAN: kk HAYLEY: *enters* Hi Ryan! RYAN+HAYLEY: *K.iss* RYAN: I'm so sorry about your dad... HAYLEY: *eyes get watery* Oh, well.... RYAN: It's ok, it's fine. I'm here for you. HAYLEY+RYAN: *K.isses passionatly* HAYLEY: So...wanna come to Brickton's Resturaunt for a date 2nite? RYAN: Yes. HAYLEY: Oh, gotta go! *runs off* QUINN: *Enters* Here it is Ryan! *gives chocolates and movie tickets* RYAN: A date eh? QUINN: Yeah! Tommorow night! You told me you were free a few days ago! RYAN:...I guess QUINN: Great! (Ryan and Quinn leave, hand in hand) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 7-Closet ALLIE+TRENT: *Runs in* TRENT: *Takes deep breath* I've always thought of this... ALLIE: Though of... TRENT: Kissing her...*Kis.sess Allie passionatly, hugging her* ALLIE:*Squirms a bit,then relaxes during the long kiss* TRENT; *stops kissing and dashes off* ALLIE: Wait! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
SuperCNK12
#45968527Friday, April 22, 2011 5:46 PM GMT

Hey so Iwas reading these lyrics, not bad, but you'll happy to know I've bben a Singer/Songwriter for 4 years plz message me if you would like me to write a song. just tell me what you need it to be about.
Sunburst1031
#45969070Friday, April 22, 2011 5:54 PM GMT

K
TylArak
#45997382Saturday, April 23, 2011 1:05 AM GMT

BUMP
Sunburst1031
#45998886Saturday, April 23, 2011 1:28 AM GMT

SCENE 8-Studio VIVIAN: Well anyways, We gotta come up with a band name before our debut album's released. RYAN: I know! STAR! VIVIAN: Why Star? RYAN: "S" is for Seanna, "T" is for Trent, "A" is for Allie, and "R" is for me, Ryan! It spells out Star. TRENT: Four star? RYAN: Yes!!! VIVIAN: Ok, problem solved! Self titled debut album, here we come! We have one more song to record, Forever Love, 5 6 7 8! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SONG-FOREVER LOVE-By Sunburst1031 (SEANNA) You got that special zing in your heart that makes me feel like flying It's that forever love, yeah baby, you ain't even trying Out of every one i attempted a romance, you're really satisfying Hey I can't let you go I feel so odd, I'm going crazy, only one who can nurish my heart Every other lover crushed it down to pieces but hey you got the start When you k.issed me I knew it was true, I have nothing better than you You got that special zing in your heart that makes me feel like flying It's that forever love, yeah baby, you ain't even trying Out of every one i attempted a romance, you're really satisfying Hey I can't let you go I feel so beloved, i'm going happy, only one who can nurish my heart Every other lover didn't care about me but hey you got tthe start When you're with me I know it is true, I have nothing betetr than you You got that special zing in your heart that makes me feel like flying It's that forever love, yeah baby, you ain't even trying Out of every one i attempted a romance, you're really satisfying Hey I can't let you gooooooooooooooooooooo (TRENT) *Guitar solo* You got that special zing in your heart that makes me feel like flying It's that forever love, yeah baby, you ain't even trying Out of every one i attempted a romance, you're really satisfying Hey I can't let you go ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 9-The Lounge ( Allie and Trent d.ate) ALLIE: You know, I really underestimated you, Trent TRENT: :) I...I love you ALLIE: *Kisses quickly, then plays some bass notes* TRENT: *Plays gutiar with her* SEaNNA: James, I don't want to be your girl.friend EVER! JAMES: Well, if you're always this crazy about it, then we should never be dating! SEANNA: Well, duh, you loser! (Content deleted) JAMES: But please...Seanna! Don't leave! I need you...to...be popu... SEANNA: What? You were USING me to be popular!!!!!???? JAMES: *SIGHS AND RUNS OFF* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ SCENE 10-The Bloxing Resturaunt HAYLEY: Where the h.ell is Ryan? HAYLEY: *Sighs* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 11- The Movie theatre (The movie jsut ended) QUINN: Why didn't Ryan come? Why? Ryan? QUINN: I don't know why..is he cheating on me? I feel insane!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 12-A few weeks later in the garden, Quinn and Hayley meet up) QUINN: Hey Hayley HAYLEY: Hey. RYAN: Hi girls... HAYLEY: Why didin't you come on my date? QUINN: Why didn't you go on my date? HAYLEY+QUINN: *gasp* You made Ryan cheat on me! QUINN: I loved Ryan first! HAYLEY: Doesn't matter, I'm his true love! QUINN: Ryan wants ME! HAYLEY+QUINN: *keep fighting* RYAN: Look guys...you two both asked me out and I couldn't say no..so I dated both of you at the same time, and I can't take it. I think Quinn, you are not my girlfriend. It's over. Same with Hayley. I...don't want a girl right now.I dropped from your dates so I wouldn't hurt either of you by learning and thinking... HAYLEY: I hate you Ryan! QUINN: I hate you Ryan! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 13-The lounge. The album has just reached #1, it's been 4 months since the incident with Hayley and Quinn. VIVIAN: Hey guys, we're going on tour! SEANNA: Hey Vivian, I KNOW YOU LOSER! ALLIE: That's not a nice way to talk to our manager. SEANNA: *Rolls eyes* RYAN: What a diva. TRENT: Well, we're going on tour? VIVIAN: SUrely. our first stop is the LA oncert in a few months. You'll rock the stage like real heavy metal rockers! TRENT: Epic! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
TylArak
#45999785Saturday, April 23, 2011 1:42 AM GMT

Nice job. BTW if you want to see the music video I made my YT channel is shock6912.
SuperCNK12
#46017323Saturday, April 23, 2011 11:46 AM GMT

hey I did a recording of forever love on my site, but to ge there follow my link at my YT channel which is singerkid12.
Sunburst1031
#46019855Saturday, April 23, 2011 1:21 PM GMT

@Super: We arn't filming yet. DON'T RECORD ANYTHING!
Sunburst1031
#46022284Saturday, April 23, 2011 2:22 PM GMT

SCENE 14-THE MOVIES JAMES: *Sits in horror movie and watches, looking a bit scared* SEANNAl: *Enters, and ironically behind James, and throws popcoron at him* JAMES: What the h.ell- SEANNA: HA! That's for you using me and being a bad b.f! JAMES: *Throws his popcorn at Seanna* SEANNA: Hey!!!! JAMES+SEANNA: *Get into a popcorn fight for a long bit* JAMES: But Seanna! *grabs Seanna* Look, I did use you, but I noticed something...I think, we could be friends. Not dating, just friends. SEANNA: I'm not sure JAMES: Look SEANNA: *rolls eyes* That would never work James JAMES: Please.... SEANNA: ...We'll see. JAMES: Famous last words... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 15-The Studio ALLIE: Vivian, how's our album doing on ETunes? (Changed name for copyright reasons) VIVIAN: We're....number 2! ALLIE: Perfect! *takes out CD titled "Buried in Lies"* We are very sucsessful, arn't we? I'm not sure how to handle paprazzi, any advice? VIVIAN: STrut like you mean it and give them s.exy looks. ALLIE: Er... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 16-Savannah and Ian (Fictional Talk Show) SAVANNAH: (Played by Quinn) Hello, we're back, and live! Tonight's guests are the young, heavy metal, rock group that came out with a #1 debut album, here. Is. 4 Star!!! IAN: Performing there hit singles "Can You Feel It" and their new single, Fortune'N'Fame, here's 4 STAR! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SONG-CAN YOU FEEL IT? (Reprise) Writen by Rug Cant you feel it Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah Blah blah blah blah blah blah Yea yea yea yea yea yea yea yea yea Throw your hands up in the air Catch that feelin yea yea yea You talkin nonsense right here Fell it comin up the road (ALLIE) Cant you feel it oh yea (RYAN) Can't you feel it coming at you (TRENT) Can't you feel it catching on to you (SEANNA) Can't you feel that I'm in love with you oh yea Can't you feel that I'm so desperate Can't you feel that I so want you Can't you feel that there is something in the air Can't you feel it oh can't you feel it oh why don't you feel it ohhhhhhhh (ALLIE AND TRENT) Can't you feel I'm so desprite Can't you feel that I love you (SEANNA AND RYAN) Cant you feel my world revolving around you Can't you that I hate you for not knowing (ALL) Can't you feel it Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! Nah nah nah nah nah nah nah hey! (SEANNA) Cant you feel it oh why can't you feel it oh why don't you feel it don't you feel that I'm in love with you Oh yea if you lookin for something look right at me can't you feel there is something in the air it's revolving around so why just cant you feel it I'm so desprite please baby please feel it yea ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SONG-FORTUNE'N'FAME Writen by Sunburst1031 (SEANNA) Everyone dreams about being superstars. Everyone screams, about making it far. Everyone wishes for a chance at fame Eh, eh, what can I say. I wanted to be a celebtrity all my life, Well hey my friends, look at me now! Fortune'N'Fame Fortune'N'Fame Fortune'N'Fame Fortune'N'Fame Fortune'N'Fame Fortune'N'Fame Fortune'N'Fame Fortune'N'Fame You got the skills, to reach that Fortune'N'Fame!!!!!!!! *Steven Tyler Scream* (ALLIE) *Begins bass solo, but SEANNA continues going 'NAH NAH NAH!" (TRENT) *Begins guitar solo with ALLIE, but SEANNA goes NAH NAH NAH!" (SEANNA) *Kicks Allie down, than Trent) (ALL) *Music stops and they all start fighting Then music plays again* (SEANNA) NAH NAH NAH NAH NAH NAH NAH NAH NAH (SEANNA (To RYAN) I wanna solo career! (RYAN) *Singing* I don't need a band, I can make it myself (ALLIE) *Singing* Same here, I have more talent than Seanna anyway (TRENT) *Singing* Playing guitar is my life, we always fight in this darn band (RYAN, ALLIE, TRENT, SEANNA) FOUR STAR! GET OUTTA MY LIFE! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*Audience remains silent* SEANNA: You guys all suck! RYAN: We shouldn't have even started this band! ALLIE: Ryan, it's your fault, you came up with the dumb idea! SEANNA: Actually, Allie, it your, Ryan, and Tretn's faults! TRENT: Shut up people! ALLIE: It wasn't Trent's fault! *grabs to Trent in a hug* SEANNA: Well... *kisses Trent* ALLIE: *Gasps* RYAN: I can't take this.... TRENT: Me neither. I...wanna go home ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SCENE 17-Packing up in the Lounge RYAN: I'm going back to Kentucky TRENT: Well, Allie, this is goodbye...you'll be in Delaware, I'll be Arizona ALLIE: I thought what we had was special... TRENT: *Kisses a final time* If we were meant to be... TRENT+ALLIE: Fate will bring us back together. SEANNA: Bye, suckers! VIVIANl *Comes in solemn* Guys, I'm disappointed in you... ALLIE: I think...I think we have to at least finish the tour... VIVIAN: Great! I'll tell the media that we apologize and you guys will be together forever! TRENT: ? We're staying... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ SCENE 18-The LA Concert. ALLIE: How do I look? TRENT: Beautiful. SEANNA: Ok everybody, places! RYAN: ok, Miss. Popularity. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SONG-BURIED IN LIES- By Sunburst1031 (TRENT) *Guitar solo* (SEANNA) Wake up at 6:00am, wondering why you left me I thought you were perfection, never met a masculine like you hoo hoo! It makes me wanna scream and pound my feet forever more You drive me insane-What the h.ell! Now there I was on my knees, beggin' ya to stay with your girl Now I know, you just buried me in lies! Yeah yeah yeah, always cruel, you buried me in lies until I sufficated Yeah yeah yeah, I'm kinda glad you left me Yeah yeah I wonder, how I was able to withstand A man, a man, a man, a man like you (ALLIE) *Bass solo* (SEANNA) Staying up till 2:00am, partying like crazy now that your gone You were like a different dimesnsion, so exotic, so odd Now there I was on my knees, beggin' ya to stay with your girl Now I know, you just buried me in lies! Yeah yeah yeah, always cruel, you buried me in lies until I sufficated Yeah yeah yeah, I'm kinda glad you left me Yeah yeah I wonder, how I was able to withstand A man, a man, a man, a man like you (RYAN) *Drum solo* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------CROWD: *Cheers rapidly* BAND: *Bows* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A few more scenes coming...it's almost done!
TylArak
#46022579Saturday, April 23, 2011 2:28 PM GMT

I couldn't find the recording on your site. I saw Forever Love (4-star, original demo) but couldn't find the app to play it.
rug437
#46025076Saturday, April 23, 2011 3:14 PM GMT

I saw the place it's really good now the one thing I'm worried about is how will they get the songs they are pretty long
TylArak
#46043035Saturday, April 23, 2011 8:01 PM GMT

Do you think we can start filiming next week? If you don't have a camera person I can do it.
Gamergirl9000
#46048968Saturday, April 23, 2011 9:33 PM GMT

Guess what sunburst your in my movie! Y'know the Vampire 1?
TylArak
#46143119Monday, April 25, 2011 3:20 AM GMT

So is there going to be more than 6 episodes or is that it. Cause since you pulled this off on and off in like a day or two I think you could probably do more than 6. Not my desicision to make though do what you want. Also is this just the first episode?
Sunburst1031
#46240303Tuesday, April 26, 2011 11:30 PM GMT

@Shock:XxPlaygirlxX is going to be filming. Also, we're making it a movie. writing rest of script soon. @Other person: I never posted anything on a website about the song...
pizza102
#46241320Tuesday, April 26, 2011 11:43 PM GMT

you can never leave out the episode where one of the band members gets kidnapped by a crazy fan

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