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TheUnknownMan117
#105372826Sunday, July 14, 2013 3:34 AM GMT

I see you every time I close my eyes I only wish you could know how I feel inside When I’m around you I get that nervous shaking The smell of you is intoxicating And I see you standing there The way the wind blows through your hair And I only wish I only wish Chorus: I just wish I could tell you The way that I feel for you And all those things that you always do When I’m standing there next to you I wish you could know I can never tell you though But I can wish And in my dreams at night I see you standing in the pale moonlight And in my dreams we’re together And I’ll make that true even if it takes forever Whenever I see you I want to make my dreams true But a beautiful woman like you would never love someone like me Even though I know this I know I have to see And when I wake I know it all was fake And I lay my head against the wall And feel as though I’m about to fall Because you are My life My world My love! Chorus: And I just wish I could tell you The way that I feel for you And all those things that you always do When I’m standing there next to you I wish you could know I can never tell you though But I can wish for you And I can follow you
TheUnknownMan117
#105374142Sunday, July 14, 2013 3:47 AM GMT

Please post your feedback, positive or negative, I could use it.
RobTheHobo
#105376628Sunday, July 14, 2013 4:10 AM GMT

I wish I could tell you it was good.
TheUnknownMan117
#105378840Sunday, July 14, 2013 4:32 AM GMT

You don't have to, just say the truth.
shonyshon
#105387735Sunday, July 14, 2013 6:17 AM GMT

I read this in my mind as if it was a classic rock song. It's not that bad.
TheUnknownMan117
#105551326Monday, July 15, 2013 6:15 PM GMT

Well thanks. Truthfully, I don't know what genre this would be :P
RobTheHobo
#105616799Tuesday, July 16, 2013 4:12 AM GMT

You want the truth from me? Okay. It sucked so badly even a gorilla that got its head stuck up a baby's as could do better.
JohnnyBravo
#105620845Tuesday, July 16, 2013 4:53 AM GMT

Not bad. But, bro, this type of lovey-dovey "wish I was with you forevarr" stuff makes me roll my eyes a bit, especially since I know exactly who this song is about.
TheUnknownMan117
#105634308Tuesday, July 16, 2013 8:00 AM GMT

"You want the truth from me? Okay. It sucked so badly even a gorilla that got its head stuck up a baby's as could do better." _________________________________________________________ -_-.... a bit rude, but thanks for telling how you really feel... _________________________________________________________ "Not bad. But, bro, this type of lovey-dovey "wish I was with you forevarr" stuff makes me roll my eyes a bit, especially since I know exactly who this song is about." _________________________________________________________ :P
SupGuest
#105636785Tuesday, July 16, 2013 9:20 AM GMT

Can't fully read because it actually hurts my heart to feel the lyrics
coolguy9110
#105637657Tuesday, July 16, 2013 9:46 AM GMT

9/10
TheUnknownMan117
#105666985Tuesday, July 16, 2013 5:21 PM GMT

"9/10" ________________________________ The most positive feedback I've gotten on this song :D, thanks.
RobTheHobo
#105739710Wednesday, July 17, 2013 3:20 AM GMT

You asked for my opinion, so I gave you my opinion.
TheUnknownMan117
#105741317Wednesday, July 17, 2013 3:33 AM GMT

Well thank you for posting how you feel.

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