The Devil - Roblox Forum Archive

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#105457679Sunday, July 14, 2013 9:52 PM GMT

How can your eyes be so enticing When you walk by Your smile catches every girl in the street I wonder why But you choose me The lonely A girl to get her hopes up So when I looked up My fire lit up To see an angel at my door I though you were an angel To save me To save me from my loneliness But when you knew I fell for you You grew a tail Some horns To reveal the devil Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh... How was I such a foolish target To raise your bow I thought you had white feathery wings And a pure golden halo But I loved you That I'd do Anything for you But from the sweet start We should've been apart Before you broke my heart I though you were an angel To save me To save me from my loneliness But when you knew I fell for you You grew a tail Some horns To reveal the devil Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh... Why oh why did I fall for you And your angelic looks But you crushed me Broke me And left me shattered on the ground Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I thought you were an angel To save me Top save me from my loneliness But when you knew I fell for you You grew a tail Some horns To reveal the devil Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh... The Devil Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh... The Devil Marks out of 10? This is my second song btw >.< cx COMMENTS l \/

lazydyke

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#105458040Sunday, July 14, 2013 9:56 PM GMT

3/10

fizzyrainbowbubbles

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#105458503Sunday, July 14, 2013 10:00 PM GMT

I guess I'm not really cut out for song writing but I wanna keep on trying...

robthehobo3

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#105473953Monday, July 15, 2013 12:25 AM GMT

By the name of Jesus Christ, I comandeth you to leave MT. Begone demon.

Yalx

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#105474182Monday, July 15, 2013 12:27 AM GMT

... Why did you write a whole song.

fizzyrainbowbubbles

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#105508260Monday, July 15, 2013 5:38 AM GMT

robthehobo - That's just plain mean Yalx - I wanted to write a full song so I can try and write music to it

PlutonianShore

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#105508409Monday, July 15, 2013 5:40 AM GMT

This is truly abismal, no, seriously, this is lacking in every sense of the word and you should feel ashamed of writing such rubbish.

Jared343

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#105508717Monday, July 15, 2013 5:44 AM GMT

0/10 wouldn't read again.

LouisThomas11

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#105508806Monday, July 15, 2013 5:45 AM GMT

0/10 why

fizzyrainbowbubbles

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#105510178Monday, July 15, 2013 6:03 AM GMT

D':

JohnnyBravo

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#105512145Monday, July 15, 2013 6:37 AM GMT

People are being a little too harsh. I kind of liked it. 6/10.

GodsTemplar

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#105512572Monday, July 15, 2013 6:45 AM GMT

Don't let your critics be too harsh.

PlutonianShore

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#105513031Monday, July 15, 2013 6:53 AM GMT

It's our opinion. She can't or can let us be harsh. Goof'd up, mang. It doesn't change the fact this is just terrifyingly horrendous.

robthehobo3

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#105530700Monday, July 15, 2013 2:27 PM GMT

"robthehobo - That's just plain mean" Hey, don't blame me, your the one who mentioned the devil.

RulerOfHeaven

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#105530712Monday, July 15, 2013 2:27 PM GMT

is bad 0/10 would not recommend

roblox22478

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#105530790Monday, July 15, 2013 2:28 PM GMT

OP is obviously ODer.

robthehobo3

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#105530891Monday, July 15, 2013 2:30 PM GMT

Yep.

roblox22478

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#105531031Monday, July 15, 2013 2:32 PM GMT

0/10 My mind is corrupted since I read this.

modq

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#105532965Monday, July 15, 2013 3:00 PM GMT

Your mind? My Flashdrive is corrupted now! - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7AnhjdmrUmU -

fizzyrainbowbubbles

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#105539008Monday, July 15, 2013 4:09 PM GMT

To people who are being really kind...thanks !!!! If you do think it's bad then put it less harsh and maybe say what's bad about the song the cx

roblox22478

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#105539406Monday, July 15, 2013 4:14 PM GMT

Gtfo fizzy.

fizzyrainbowbubbles

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#105541161Monday, July 15, 2013 4:33 PM GMT

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Duncanbishop

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#105554003Monday, July 15, 2013 6:41 PM GMT

Aren't you people being a bit rude? Not every song is the greatest thing in the world, and to be honest, this is better than some modern songs... 7/10.

Crash6351

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#105567767Monday, July 15, 2013 8:46 PM GMT

"Aren't you people being a bit rude? Not every song is the greatest thing in the world, and to be honest, this is better than some modern songs... 7/10." Criticism is the most evillll thing in the world!

Duncanbishop

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#105569233Monday, July 15, 2013 9:00 PM GMT

"Criticism is the most evillll thing in the world!" _______________________________________ That's why there's this thing called "Constructive Criticism", you say what could be done to improve, and not that they need to leave, or just calling it bad.