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rakstern
#10938468Saturday, July 11, 2009 2:19 PM GMT

that is not a simple task
RyanTheGreat
#10943194Saturday, July 11, 2009 4:19 PM GMT

Yeah Clay can be in it! Yay!
squidman
#10943303Saturday, July 11, 2009 4:21 PM GMT

tis a good story
iLiKeJaAm
#10955388Saturday, July 11, 2009 8:06 PM GMT

Please, make me funny "Comic Relief", unless it would ruin the story.
RyanTheGreat
#10996636Sunday, July 12, 2009 2:50 PM GMT

I'm done with the 10th chapter but I need help with the 9th. I need an idea of how haloguy123 gets out of the tree surrounded by snipers.
RyanTheGreat
#11001449Sunday, July 12, 2009 4:44 PM GMT

A little help please?
leofox81
#11001820Sunday, July 12, 2009 4:51 PM GMT

he chops down the tree with my lazor pistol it falls on one guy that guy shoots his gun and it kills the other guy then he shoots the other guy
UltimateClay
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#11001841Sunday, July 12, 2009 4:51 PM GMT

You can have..MAH BIG GAI DANCE
RyanTheGreat
#11002618Sunday, July 12, 2009 5:05 PM GMT

Chapter 9 ________ Haloguy123 and iLiKeJaAm were still in the trees. Then iLiKeJaAm had a brilliant idea. He asked if he could have some last words with halo. He whispered in his ear, “Spit your gum in the barrel of one of the guns!” Halo barely hit but when the guard fired his sniper blew up and it was enough of a diversion to get out of there. That’s when iLiKeJaAm saw the explosions in the distance. He said, “Let’s run.” It was longer than they expected but from about 50,000 studs away they could hear the screams. Then they came across some spammers patrolling. “Who are you you you?” asked the spammer. “I am a spammer too too too.” said iLiKeJaAm in a spam like tone. “Ok die then.” said the guard. He threw the double bladed axe covered in bluesteel towards halo. Halo caught it in midair and threw a green brick into the air. Thousands of little antigravity shards rained down on the guard and he flew up and didn’t come back down. While holding the red brick iLiKeJaAm collected the pieces. They took the guard’s axe and made a break for the fighting. They couldn’t believe they fell for that trap. Then they ran into a pack of what looked like normal teddy bears. They threw a rock at one of them and it blew up. “Teddy traps…” they both said at once. Then they saw they were surrounded by TNT in the trees. They were lit; the exploding teddy bears lit them. “RUN!” screamed halo and they ran. They came to the top of a hill and they could see the horror of the battle. Then they saw someone who looked like that person in the picture of the card in the stalagmite. They found RyanTheGreat! Then they started running down the hill.
RyanTheGreat
#11002657Sunday, July 12, 2009 5:06 PM GMT

Chapter 10 _________ When Roblox was under attack by spammers, one hero rose up from the semi-forgotten, and his name was trewq. He was fighting for the life of Robloxia, even in the worst medical condition there is. He was fighting. Millions of people died fighting against the spammers because they well, spammed. RyanTheGreat, kirby57, trewq, and one other person were the only survivors of the first attack. The other person could do almost anything, for he could make gear appear at his will, make his own, and every single one was double the power and speed of the normal one. His name was UltimateClay. He appeared out of nowhere one day, and he has been training ever since. Kirby57 was still surviving because he found out he could control bluesteel. He has been armoring the fort since. Now back to the story… Ryan was working with kirby57 in-between one of the battles on the fort, when zapx himself came across the field, alone, unarmed, to talk. Or so we thought. Trewq was standing on the giant rock behind the fort. Over ¾ of his humanoid infected. He has been the biggest part of the war, the hero. Zapx stopped by the electric walls. He just lifted his arm and pointed towards trewq. “You have a limit, you’re about to meet it!” yelled zapx. Then zapx teleported away. Then Ryan heard yelling, Haloguy123 and iLiKeJaAm came rushing out the hill behind them.
RyanTheGreat
#11002708Sunday, July 12, 2009 5:07 PM GMT

The next 2 chapters are out! YAY! Go gum! Oh and the 11th chapter probally won't come out today...
caramel1212
#11003645Sunday, July 12, 2009 5:26 PM GMT

Can i be in?
RyanTheGreat
#11006772Sunday, July 12, 2009 6:20 PM GMT

Um, I can't add any more people. the story's almost over. I'll put you in the 2nt book though
gosman
#11027663Monday, July 13, 2009 1:06 AM GMT

If you need quotes, I have one for me, JaAm.
gosman
#11031723Monday, July 13, 2009 2:20 AM GMT

mean IlIkEJaAm, he's my alt XD.
RyanTheGreat
#11107254Tuesday, July 14, 2009 2:57 PM GMT

Um, I'll try
Alex645ca
#11108965Tuesday, July 14, 2009 3:38 PM GMT

This is a crazy story O_o; >_>;
mariomaster1
#11126707Tuesday, July 14, 2009 8:50 PM GMT

Ok ryan you keep saying im gonna be in the next chapter but im not...
wii600
#11126901Tuesday, July 14, 2009 8:53 PM GMT

actully "Builderman " Created the spam At the end Notice the space.
mariobro123587
#11205598Thursday, July 16, 2009 3:18 AM GMT

oooooo epic story! can i please be in it?
RyanTheGreat
#11243840Thursday, July 16, 2009 10:26 PM GMT

I forgot about this story, sorry. The 1st book is almost over, I've been in collage for the whole week and I have no free time. I can't make anymore this weekend because I an going to six flags. Post ideas of a cliff-hanger that happens at the end of the 1st book.
mariobro123587
#11479311Tuesday, July 21, 2009 1:59 AM GMT

BUMP! I WANT MOAR STORY! MOAR! MOAR! MOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRR!

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