Hide and seek (My New song)

Join Date: 2012-09-22
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#108483476Monday, August 05, 2013 1:04 PM GMT

Hide and seek ---------------- This Game, Im playing right now Never gettin caught and people ask how Yep, I am a total freak Just winning this game of hide and seek (Yeah!) Trying to never get found Im not gonna turn back now Cause Im so close to winning Im gonna fight until I win this thing Im not a cheat I aint gonna peek Cause Life is just a game of Hide and seek Im spending my life running twisted paths Trying to avoid the life set traps I know that I should be more cautious But I am no longer stuck in lifes fortress No Im not a gaming geek This is not a game, Its life, Its hide and seek I may be a looser so it seems I wish to be a winner and this is my dream Not gonna spend my time giving up Im gonna be a winner till my time is up A winner not a quitter And you'll see This is my dream Yeah Im writing Lyrics about a game So what, Im totally lame Yeah, You may think im weak But this is all a game of hide and seek Im spending my life running twisted paths Trying to avoid the life set traps I know that I should be more cautious But I am no longer stuck in lifes fortress No Im not a gaming geek This is not a game, Its life, Its hide and seek I may be a looser so it seems I wish to be a winner and this is my dream Don't bother trying to win Seek Me, Cause Im gonna win this thing All you gotta do is tag me like that My friends would do it to stab me in the back But I dont care what people say Im so gonna win this game im gonna play Im gonna win this even if means Hiding from now till May So Theres a point of giving up Hun Hide and Seek will always be fun (Life is full of Suprises) Im spending my life running twisted paths Trying to avoid the life set traps I know that I should be more cautious But I am no longer stuck in lifes fortress No Im not a gaming geek This is not a game, Its life, Its hide and seek I may be a looser so it seems I wish to be a winner and this is my dream Yeah, We're all winners Even if seems like a heavy load to heave In order to win you just gotta believe <3 Im just trying to get a point across Enjoy? :/ Hide and seek by Rachelwastaken1

bobrules1111

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#108499286Monday, August 05, 2013 3:59 PM GMT

Ain't nobody got time to read dat.

bobrules1111

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#108499549Monday, August 05, 2013 4:02 PM GMT

Moo.

Grendezvous

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#108499922Monday, August 05, 2013 4:05 PM GMT

??? lol

GodsTemplar

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#108499984Monday, August 05, 2013 4:06 PM GMT

It was ok. 8/10

japandroid

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#108502013Monday, August 05, 2013 4:25 PM GMT

#deep

pickle099223

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#108518303Monday, August 05, 2013 6:40 PM GMT

For a kids single I'd give it a 89% For a reg single I'd give it a 55%

MaximumMinimizer

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#108520727Monday, August 05, 2013 6:58 PM GMT

This is my dream Yeah Im writing Lyrics about a game So what, Im totally lame ---------------------------- yeah you are totally lame and so is your song 4/10

Rachelwastaken1

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#108570061Tuesday, August 06, 2013 1:12 AM GMT

Okay idc

ninja7285

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#108605265Tuesday, August 06, 2013 6:02 AM GMT

"Cause Im so close to winning Im gonna fight until I win this thing" Don't use the same word twice before a rhyme. Other then that good.

crissiewoowoo

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#108614399Tuesday, August 06, 2013 8:07 AM GMT

I think I actually liked it. :o