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zevenon
#125228363Sunday, February 09, 2014 2:54 AM GMT

So, I am in the process of making a really good novel. It has a lot of characters and really draws the attention of a reader. Q. What's it about? A. There is an elf by the name of Viton Rilson who lives by a riverbank of a small town. There is a picking of ten people from the five towns of Feion (small country). Viton unfortunately is one of them, but he learns he belongs to this kind of life, and he learns his importance and how much the journey needs him. Q. How much have you wrote? A. I have almost six chapters. Each chapter is around 4-7 pages in a book, or 1 and one third to three pages on a typing program on the computer. The following is a piece taken out of the first chapter: Viton wakes up to hear the sound of a trumpet. He gets out of bed, puts on his clothes, his jacket, and his shoes, and he walks outside to see a muscular dwarf on a pony. His neighbors look as confused as he is. He is just about to ask what is going on, when he turns around to see the whole town to be standing there, looking at this dwarf. He stands still, while the dwarf finishes his blowing. ... This is right before Viton is picked for the journey. Tell me what you think of the idea, and if you would love to read it some day! Any questions? Comment them!
insanity100000
#125244706Sunday, February 09, 2014 5:56 AM GMT

'to see a muscular dwarf on a pony' Fabio on Twilight sparkle.
HorizontalSphere
#125247633Sunday, February 09, 2014 6:45 AM GMT

i don't know what u were fishing for, but i'm not hooked.
insanity100000
#125247837Sunday, February 09, 2014 6:49 AM GMT

I don't understand. Do you mean you want to marry zevenon? Very strange....
zevenon
#125260799Sunday, February 09, 2014 1:12 PM GMT

Insanity100000 -- That was a piece of the book- of course you don't know what's going on.
LordTinTin
#125266286Sunday, February 09, 2014 2:58 PM GMT

It was Pretty good
insanity100000
#125269118Sunday, February 09, 2014 3:40 PM GMT

Sorry I did't read it all just the pony part. I thought you wrote it... but if someone other than you did then shouldn't you be less offended??? I'm confused...
zevenon
#125269582Sunday, February 09, 2014 3:46 PM GMT

I wrote it.
insanity100000
#125269886Sunday, February 09, 2014 3:50 PM GMT

You said it came from a book... even more confusing >.<
Gaara12368
#125292385Sunday, February 09, 2014 8:01 PM GMT

He meant it came from a part of the book he wrote.
dralion
#125312785Sunday, February 09, 2014 11:22 PM GMT

"There is a picking of ten people from the five towns of Feion (small country). Viton unfortunately is one of them..." you don't tell what the "picking" is. what are they being "picked" for? "...but he learns he belongs to this kind of life, and he learns his importance and how much the journey needs him." what kind of life? what
dralion
#125312842Sunday, February 09, 2014 11:23 PM GMT

-what journey?
AznIsBack
#125313144Sunday, February 09, 2014 11:26 PM GMT

It is a pretty good written novel.
zevenon
#125403999Tuesday, February 11, 2014 1:42 AM GMT

Read the book to find out the journey! -_-
Saj1000
#125474330Wednesday, February 12, 2014 1:34 AM GMT

Oh, another zombie story
zevenon
#125688226Friday, February 14, 2014 7:36 PM GMT

nothing to do with zombies :P

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