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CoreyKamamoto

Join Date: 2008-07-07
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snazzell

Join Date: 2008-09-13
Post Count: 5693

#128402605Tuesday, March 18, 2014 10:34 PM GMT

The mastering could be better but not bad.

Darkmastor5059

Join Date: 2010-04-15
Post Count: 1027

#128402662Tuesday, March 18, 2014 10:34 PM GMT

Decent flow once you get past that kinda awkward intro, I'd recommend putting more force and emotion into your words, you have potential.

FL1PP3D

Join Date: 2013-05-20
Post Count: 3772

#128403014Tuesday, March 18, 2014 10:38 PM GMT

great job, 10/10 keep up the work

japandroid

Join Date: 2011-01-28
Post Count: 9061

#128403569Tuesday, March 18, 2014 10:45 PM GMT

pretty good for an amateur, especially someone who started on roblox support [2WC / ND]

Darkmastor5059

Join Date: 2010-04-15
Post Count: 1027

#128403705Tuesday, March 18, 2014 10:47 PM GMT

As I said- if you put more emotion into it, more power behind each word, alot of potential.

japandroid

Join Date: 2011-01-28
Post Count: 9061

#128404010Tuesday, March 18, 2014 10:50 PM GMT

i wasnt really a fan of the hook btw, if youre going to use the voice mods layer more words/lyrics into it. I promise itll sound better but yeah kurshak is right about the emotion too as i said before though #support [2WC / ND]

japandroid

Join Date: 2011-01-28
Post Count: 9061

#128404149Tuesday, March 18, 2014 10:51 PM GMT

also im curious of what program you used [2WC / ND]

drake17dude

Join Date: 2011-10-27
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#128409802Tuesday, March 18, 2014 11:50 PM GMT

Dope

DeshaunRayban

Join Date: 2010-12-21
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#128420946Wednesday, March 19, 2014 1:37 AM GMT

#Basedwekkless

ProfitOrange

Join Date: 2009-06-26
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#128421816Wednesday, March 19, 2014 1:45 AM GMT

Actually pretty bad

shonyshon

Join Date: 2008-02-23
Post Count: 8192

#128425252Wednesday, March 19, 2014 2:26 AM GMT

since my nga based wekk is rapping now ima drop a verse in time too #support

japandroid

Join Date: 2011-01-28
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#128426253Wednesday, March 19, 2014 2:39 AM GMT

pierce, you cant really discredit a ro-musician when youve never recorded anything yourself all you can do is support, unless you're actually better [2WC / ND]

snazzell

Join Date: 2008-09-13
Post Count: 5693

#128430137Wednesday, March 19, 2014 3:33 AM GMT

Sure it's mediocre but he's a beginner. You can't pick up skills right away.

CoreyKamamoto

Join Date: 2008-07-07
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#128442477Wednesday, March 19, 2014 11:09 AM GMT

thanks for support!

EvilNoobKitty123

Join Date: 2010-09-23
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#128443758Wednesday, March 19, 2014 12:06 PM GMT

I was about to leave this song until I actually heard rapping :I lucky foo

JunJoe

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#128445573Wednesday, March 19, 2014 1:34 PM GMT

pierce, you cant really discredit a ro-musician when youve never recorded anything yourself ______________ THIS JUST IN: you can't have opinions on any artist according to 20wavecaps, unless you are an artist yourself

shonyshon

Join Date: 2008-02-23
Post Count: 8192

#128457971Wednesday, March 19, 2014 7:21 PM GMT

yet when i say hopsin is bad and back it up with proof you call me edgy and change the subject of the conversation because you know im r.i.t.e. #swearve

JunJoe

Join Date: 2013-04-01
Post Count: 5259

#128458050Wednesday, March 19, 2014 7:22 PM GMT

back it up with proof ______ I never defended hop, I said lyrically wise, it makes more sense (in a nutshell). You still are edgy, because you act exactly like tyler does.