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MINARD734's COLLECTION OF STORIES AND POEMS!!!

MINARD777
#15627788Tuesday, October 20, 2009 12:04 AM GMT

um... sorry for a few mispells... like i did here instead of hear lol oops
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MINARD777
#15628117Tuesday, October 20, 2009 12:10 AM GMT

random fact: "save me from myself" was actually written around august. It's release was delayed because it was going to be a song for my friend's band but he is not doing a band now so i released it to you guys finally
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joechamp2
#15677234Wednesday, October 21, 2009 4:19 PM GMT

I just LUV these =D GO MINARDEY!!!!!!!
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MINARD777
#15678313Wednesday, October 21, 2009 5:24 PM GMT

LOL HAHA!
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Switchmoo
#15679447Wednesday, October 21, 2009 6:32 PM GMT

A regular Edgar Allen Poe. You're going to the SF too aren't you?
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MINARD777
#15679868Wednesday, October 21, 2009 6:50 PM GMT

a lil ya!
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MINARD777
#15960539Wednesday, October 28, 2009 12:04 PM GMT

Time for... THE NEW SERIES! The series is called - SCRIBBLINGS OF A MAD MAN! -=--=Scribblings of A Mad Man=--=- Hello. I can here the whispers in my ear. Every single word I hear. Losing the battle is my fear. Can't you see the dripping tear? I've lost all I once held dear. I am losing my mind it does apear. Oh. I can see the fallen in my sight. Their rotting flesh causes fright. Someone please turn on the light. Something I'm seeing is just not right. You. You evil ones look into My eyes. Your tantalization is all but lies. Oh the insanity... Painful cries. In the abyss... Far beyond the skies! No! You can't tell me what my life is for. I know that it's for so much more. More than a shutting door. God tell me there's got to be MORE! I am... A madman. This was not... My plan. Help! I need to escape this dreadful place. YES! I'm losing the long long race. I'm far away from time and space. Lord God give grace... ... Before I'm gone without a trace. I'm the last person I want to face. My heart is running away. Farther from my body every day. After the world it does run... Looking for a reason? I CAN'T FIND ONE! I am... A madman. This was not... My plan. What is this you find in your hand? ...As your reaching out for land. These are... ... THE SCRIBBLINGS OF A MAD MAN! -0]=Hanging From The Ceiling=[0- Hanging from the ceiling. Looking for you. Won't you stop hiding. There's nothing you can do. My servants obey my orders. They die for me. They go beyond the borders... ...of villainous territory. They'll bring you to the ground. In this place of darkness you'll be found. WE ARE WATCHING. WATCHING ALL AROUND! We, the shadows lurking in the night. We fill our victims with so much fright. We are... Creeping. Shadows... Leaping. Through the cracks leaking. Watching you when you're sleeping! Because we're hanging from the ceiling! The night riders fly so fast. Forgetting what they are already past. Killing every soul to the very last. WE ARE COMING! You better run. Look at the damage we've already done. Can you see the eclipse of the shattered sun? Darkness spreads across the land. The stars pulled away by your worst enemy's hand. Hanging from the ceiling. Looking for you. Won't you stop hiding. There's nothing you can do. -=Reflectance=- [Takes place in an old attic] [Voice from the mirror] Hello! It's me, the one you're seeing in the mirror. Wipe away the dust to see me clearer Wipe away the grime. Unveil your brutal crime. You've arrived just in time. Can you see my face at last? Does it remind you of the past? Doesn't time go on by so fast? It is me. It is you. This isn't a story. It's all true. Look into my eyes. There's nothing you can do. [Main Character] This is over. You are dead. I need to get these thoughts out of my head. I'm building up pressure laying in my bed. I've got to say what's got to be said! You were defeated JUST LAST YEAR! So long to you. Don't want to ever see you here. I don't have a reason to fear. -=Fiery Night=- In the dead of the night. I see a flickering light. It shines so bright. A terrifying sight.. It fills my soul with SO MUCH fright. The light fades away. The eyes of the phantom turn to grey. I've got to escape this. IS THERE ANY WAY? Can you tell me why? Why did you shatter the sky? You made the fallen cry. A cry of anger. A cry so bitter. I won't listen any longer. TO YOU! YES YOU! I finally realize what I've done. I finally see a rising sun. ...I am the phantom of the night! OH! Fiery night. Painful sight. OH! Shine so bright. You're the light. Wait... HOW CAN THIS BE? The shadows I hide from are cast by me. I'm shredding my cloak beneath the tree. ...Because I finally see. ...LORD SET ME FREE! I can't take it in the fiery night! I need you to be my light! -=From The Start=- -Verse 1- HELLO! Is there anyone out there? I'm in need. Does anyone care? I NEED TO BE FREED! I feel like you've left me stranded. Such a heavy burden I've been handed. On this lonely island I have landed. Why have you abandoned me? Why have you forgotten me? Lord, can this be? -Verse 2- NO! I can't do this on my own. Oh Lord, I should have known. In this pit of sin I've been thrown. YOU would never forget me. YOU would never abandon me. YOU are so good to me. So, I'm asking you to take my bloody hand. Pull me, once more, onto land! I did it wrong and I need you now. I need to turn back around but how? -Verse 3- Because you loved me from the start. My name was ingraved on your heart. You will never leave me in my dark time. Even when I've done SUCH A CRIME! I feel like I've wasted every single dime. I'm in a world filled with grime. I'VE WASTED SO MUCH TIME! ...BUT YOU... You loved me from the start. So pull out the poison dart. PULL IT FROM MY HEART! I made decisions that weren't so smart. ... BUT I'LL NEVER FORGET YOU LOVED ME FROM THE START! -Verse 4- I reach the end. I breath my last. Time is passing by so fast. I'm remembering the times of the past. You never left me all my days. You cared for me in all ways. ... And now here my body lays! I HAVE REACHED THE END OF MY DAYS! A LIGHT SO BRIGHT. It takes away my sight. ... But I'm no longer in fright. ... Because you are the light! Because you loved me from the start. My name was engraved on your heart. From the beginning, to the end of time. You erased all my crime. You were the one to cleanse the grime. THE ONLY ONE to crush my sin. THE ONLY ONE that lives within. COME LET MY NEW LIFE BEGIN! -=Maze of Mirrors=- I'm walking through the maze. In the mirror I do gaze. The reflections, they amaze. I walk on further, can't see what's ahead. Can't hear what's next to be said. All I see is the reflection of what is past. I keep running oh so fast. The mirrors shatter. A DEAFENING BLAST! I can see my destiny at last! The broken bones healing in a cast. The glass hits my eye. I can see that what you tell me is just a lie. I will try and try. I will cry the battle cry. Today is the day enemy shall die. You will be my light. The one who gives me sight. Make the path oh so bright. Help me fight the brutal fight! The maze of mirrors. It's okay! Because you guide me. ... DAY BY DAY! The maze of mirrors. I will pray... ...That you will guide me. ... DAY BY DAY! =[Falling On The Floor]= I am falling on the floor. Shutting, again, the door. I CAN'T LIVE LIKE THIS ANY MORE! It's on my back. An empty sack... ... But somehow in weighs me down. ...Gives me the feeling that I will drown. Oh! This eternal cry I cry to thee. WHOA! This is too much insanity! NO! Won't take it any more... ... Although... I need to tread on longer. Got to be a thousand times stronger. You! You who knows my name! Make the beast so wild, tame! It's for you... NOT FOR ME! ... But in you... I AM FREE! -[Fight For Me]- I've lost all hope in myself today. I realize that your the only way. I see the sun and the sky fade away. The wind blows against my hair. I need your help. Only you care! The glass shatters in my hand. Can you see the pieces land? I've lost the battle raging within. The battle was won by my sin. Can you let the real war begin? Come! Fight for me. Please! Set me free. Don't... ...Let me be! FIGHT... FOR... ME! Come! Fight for me. Please! Set me free. Don't... ...Let me be! FIGHT... FOR... ME! I'm begging on my knees. Fight for me! -[Straining Forward]- far beneath the ground I go. Where I'm going? I don't know. The bottom of it all seems to consistently grow. The end of the pit is unbelievably low. The cries of the fallen shout to me. There's a whole in my heart. CAN IT BE? I'm falling apart. CAN'T YOU SEE! I've got to restart. SET ME FREE! Lord, my God, tell me what I need. Tell me where I must plant the seed. WILL YOU HELP ME OVERCOME MY GREED? OH PLEASE, Choke out the fire that I feed. There's a weight in my sack. I'm Carrying the load on my back. All the time I've spent like this, I CAN'T KEEP TRACK! Strength like this IS SOMETHING THAT I LACK! SO I NEED YOU if I wanna make it to the end. YES I NEED YOU. Is there any help you can lend? Because I just keep training forward. Don't know where to go. Which one's the right path? ONLY YOU KNOW! Take my hand. Guide me to land. Your love so grand. -[The Man Of Two Faces]- The man of two faces. He's in two places. To the very end his evil side races. He's slipping away. Every single day. Hanging by a thread. Filled with dread. He is so near to being dead. From his heart he has bled. He runs so far beyond the sun. Running from all he's done. The dark ages have now begun. The man of two faces is alive. To the depths, a fiery dive! A battle rages on within. A battle between love and sin. A new age, soon to begin. LORD! Take this empty tomb of a heart. Turn the torn up canvas into a work of art! +!!!MY OWN WORST ENEMY!!!+ Is it me? MY OWN WORST ENEMY! I don't wanna be... ... MY OWN WORST ENEMY! The worst of evils... ... LIVES INSIDE OF ME! That's why I'm... ... MY OWN WORST ENEMY! I'm sitting here with my head down. In this bloody sea of sin I let myself drown. OH! I fell away. It seems like yesterday. Now the skies are grey. I have lost everything from my anger. I never realized I POSSESSED SUCH DANGER! So LORD take these bloody wrists. Hold them now, inside clenched fists. Because I'm... ... MY OWN WORST ENEMY! ... And I'm so glad.... ... YOU LIVE INSIDE OF ME! I... am... MY OWN WORST ENEMY! -=!!ENEMY!!=- I am here on my bed. Tonight I'm feeling so dead. The tears drip down, I raise my head. Into this trap I've been lead. ... AND IT'S ALL MY FAULT! I am your enemy. ... But I need you inside of me. I don't want you to let me be. ... BUT I'M YOUR ENEMY! I watch as your blood pours down. I see you bearing a mocking crown. In that sea of blood let all my sin drown. I don't want to be... Your enemy. I need you inside of me. .-=[''-Midnight Walk-'']=-. I'm taking a walk on a starless night. Trying to find my way without a light. I hear a scream and it fills me with fright. I take a step and I fall into abyss. I grab for the ledges but I always seem to miss. I am at the end. What is all this? I hit the bottom and something is amiss. I rise once more. I'm in the middle of a raging war. What is this all for? On the horizon I see a glowing door. I reach for the handle. It's so dark, I light a candle. A cold win blows from the inside. The shadows run amuck and I hide. They're running oh so far and oh so wide. They grab onto my back, taking me for a wild ride. I shall cry more than I've ever cried. Walking at midnight. Walking without moonlight. The darkness is filling me with fright. The shadows choke out my sight. You come in, to my delight. Help me fight the endless fight. Won't you unvail the sun for me. Light the skies for all to see. I don't want to be who I used to be. Walking in your love so true. It's the only thing I'll ever. Live my life... ALL FOR YOU! Never going to go on a midnight walk... AGAIN!
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MINARD777
#16108877Sunday, November 01, 2009 1:09 AM GMT

i need some comments
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dog00
#16165467Monday, November 02, 2009 12:40 AM GMT

Nice ones as always..
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MINARD777
#16165537Monday, November 02, 2009 12:41 AM GMT

thanks man
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dog00
#16165545Monday, November 02, 2009 12:41 AM GMT

When do you get time to write these? There really good. Also, do you write them down on paper or on wordpad? And then post them here so we can all enjoy them!
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dog00
#16165588Monday, November 02, 2009 12:42 AM GMT

These are good..I like the SPO00OCKY ONES!!!
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MINARD777
#16165652Monday, November 02, 2009 12:43 AM GMT

yeah. I actually write them on a mobile divce with a stylus. I do it at random times.. idk how i have the time. When im sort of lonely or bored I do it.
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dog00
#16165712Monday, November 02, 2009 12:44 AM GMT

I write Poems, too. Just not as good as these.
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MINARD777
#16181690Monday, November 02, 2009 12:39 PM GMT

put then online
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AgentGorgos
#16537946Wednesday, November 11, 2009 1:58 AM GMT

Your Stories/Poems are AWSOME!!!
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MINARD777
#16752204Monday, November 16, 2009 8:25 PM GMT

TIME for the NEW series... AGE OF ABYSS! =AGE OF ABYSS=- [I - The Man In The Mirror] The moon shatters at the sight of the man in the mirror. Is he me? How can such a nightmare be? Break these chains and make me free! Blasphemy does he speak. Where's prize that he does seek? In the halls of evil do I creep. Over the lake of fire I take a faithless leap. I'm falling down a pit so deep. IS IT ME? How can it be? A truth so cold I could never see. Such a horror I'd never believe. Such fiction no mind could ever conceive. ... BUT IT'S TRUE! ... And there's not a single thing I can do! Sorrow of the deepest kind. Such a broken heart you'll never bind. A lost son you'll never find. I'm so helpless without you. When you're gone there's nothing I can do. The skies now grey used to be so blue. Tonight I feel alone. The feeling of depression is eating me to the bone. [II- False Desire- Whitewashed Tombs] In my heart there burns a fire. Flames of sin and false desire. I try to escape but the flames jump higher. I am the worst of sinners. I'M A LIER! SO WON'T YOU HELP ME ESCAPE THE FIRE! Whispers. Can you hear them in the night. Eternal portals sucking out the light. Darkness comes from left and right. My names corruption. It's my thing. Born to sin... ... AT JUST ABOUT EVERYTHING! IT'S ALL A LIE. A great illusion forming in the sky. A bitter wrong that causes my heart to die. Why? Why is this world so tempting while it is just a lie! Look to the deteriorated sky. Won't you tell me just why? Sugarcoated words, they may please. ... But they are truly such a desease. Such a monster that I can't seize. I run to whitewashed tombs in the night. It's quite obvious. I'm losing the fight. I finally realize and it fills me with fright. Lord won't you turn on the light. HELP! Conquer the satanic forces of the night. Shatter darkness and shed some light. Get my evils out of sight. Fire in my eyes. Burn away! Burn away! Cloudy skies. The final day! The final day! Reveal the lies! THE ONLY WAY! THE ONLY WAY! YOU... Are the one to crush my sin. In the darkest hour you'll come in. FIGHT THE BATTLE THAT I CAN'T WIN! The battle that is raging on within. [III- Washed Away] OH! The sun is getting oh so dim. The future I know must be grim. THERE HAS TO BE ANOTHER WAY! Lord. Forgive me of all my sin. Won't you cleanse me of the evil within. Aid me in the battle that I can't win. Save me from the monster underneath my skin. I was saved by your blood. My sin just trickled down into the mud. DYING ON THAT PLANK OF WOOD. Taking the curse for our good. Lord. Forgive me of all my sin. Won't you cleanse me of the evil within. Aid me in the battle that I can't win. Save me from the monster underneath my skin. Kill the man of yesterday. Because I just need to get away. YESTERDAY! [IV Age of War] Swords. They are colliding in the night. People dying left and right. Whether we live or die, WE MUST FIGHT! Shatter the Myst and turn on the light. Tonight we're filling the enemy with fright! Evil and greed is all that's in sight. WAR! Slashing, stabbing, blood and gore. Don't you know what this is for? As the blood pours down from my enemy's head. The reddest fountain ever bled. He falls over and he is dead. It fills my heart with so much dread. I CAN'T WIN! Because of my sin! Some will live. Some will die. Some will fall. Some will rise on high. Some will fail and some will try. WAR! FIGHT! Fill our enemies with fright. FIGHT! Shine so bright. IN THE DEAD OF THE NIGHT! THE SUN SHALL RISE! The sun shall fall. ... But we will ram into this wall. Until l it falls on the kingdom of the enemy. Until there's not a bit of strength inside of me. Until the evil king is dead and evermore shall be! UNTIL WE CONQUER THIS TERRITORY! NO! We will not give in. We are not deceived by the devil's grin. FIGHT THE FIGHT! Rise on high. Shed some light... ... DOWN FROM THE SKY! ... THIS... IS... WAR! [V- PRIDE] Stormy seas. Terrorizing breeze. Waves. Their crashing against the walls of stone. The acid burns straight to the bone. Revealing to me, more than I've ever known. Seas of blood. Seas of sin. Waves of anger... ... Building up within. Scream. The mountains shaking at my sight. I come stomping in but have no right. I'm so blind. Lord give me sight. Stormy seas. Terrorizing breeze. Seas of serpents. Seas of fire. The waves are rising oh so high. Rising far beyond the night sky. I feel like I'm going to die. WHY OH WHY? To you I cry. Seas of serpents. Seas of fire. Let the flames of hate bounce no higher. Stormy seas. Terrorizing breeze. [VI- STAND TOGETHER] STAND YOUR GROUND. Even when you're shackled. EVEN WHEN YOU'RE BOUND. Even when you're tackled. EVEN WHEN YOU JUST MIGHT NEVER BE FOUND. Stand together. Through the stormy weather. STAND TOGETHER! TURN AROUND! Face the enemy. Face the monster inside of me. Leave the shadows, leave them be! This battle we ourselves cannot win. This battle between love and sin. The fire raging deep within. FIGHT! FIGHT! Stand together. Through the stormy weather For when our savior comes we will prevail. The toxic fumes of the devil we must avoid to inhale. The secret of ages begins to unveil. OH RISE THE KING ALL HAIL! STAND... STAND... STAND... TOGETHER! [VII- The One] ... THERE'S A HOPE! A spark. A light. A lone star on a pitch black Night. Such a blessing in a world fright. A flame so majestic. A FLAME SO BRIGHT! In your eyes I see love. I can see the light above. THE CROSS! It's where you shattered the demonic reflection of my heart. It's where you turned this crumbling statue into a work of art. DYING ON THAT PLANK OF WOOD. Taking the curse for our good. Lord. Forgive me of all my sin. Won't you cleanse me of the evil within. Aid me in the battle that I can't win. Save me from the monster underneath my skin. Kill the man of yesterday. Because I just need to get away. NO LONGER IN THE AGE OF ABYSS! A time so dark I'll never even miss. I feel alive. NO LONGER AMISS! AGE OF ABYSS! DYING ON THAT PLANK OF WOOD. Taking the curse for our good. I AM EVIL. You are pure. Oh such pain that you endure. As the blood dripped down... FROM THE THORNY CROWN! ... You broke the curse! -=Nowhereland=- [I- DRAGON] Blood is dripping from the claws. A circle of protection the monster draws. Fire spewing from the eyes. Telling me to believe the lies. Finally do I realize. He has the ability to hypnotize. From the grave I see him rise. Cries of fright the victim cries. The creature is crawling through the night. Filling all our souls with so much fright. Causing us to lose all sight. From the mouth I see a flame. Burning away whatever you can name. Maybe I'm the one to blame. Tell me this is just a game. Please tell me we're not the same! I sail the seas of sin looking for the light. I run through the darkness of the night. I climb the mountains of glorious height. I wonder the graveyard in so much fright. [II- LOST] I'm so lost in the endless realms of Nowhere Land. There's no difference between air and land. I can't see your helping hand... ... Reaching out for me today. ... But I can't see it, because It's Never day. Lord won't you take it all away? The dark clouds rolling past. Rolling by oh so fast. Nearing the very end at last. Shattering my heart with a deafening blast. A flicker on the distance. A spark on the horizon. I see it coming at me today. [III- No Hope] There's no hope for me. I'm growing old and I can't see. I'm left for dead. leave me be! I'm just a prisoner. Never to be free. I need savior to escape condemnation. I don't want eternal damnation. I need your glorious blood to wash me clean. Wash my mind of all I've seen. Plummet to the depths. I can see the deaths. Endlessly and consistently I fall. Can you hear my helpless call? From the very top of the shadowy wall. I fell from a tower oh so tall. I bowed down before my idols every day... ... When the very best idea was to stay away. I chased temptation for all the years past. I just kept on falling unbelievably fast. Until I came to edge at last. I now know there's little time to spare. Finally I see the bloody tear.. I'm being pulled towards the edge. I'm being thrown off the ledge. Death is my only fear. Cries of terror is all I hear. Can you see the bloody tear? HELP! I need a rope to real me in. HELP! I need a savior for all my sin. HELP! I need to be cleansed within ... Save me from the plummet to the depths! SAVE ME FROM THE ENDLESS REALMS OF NOWHERELAND! [IV- Saved From The Fire] Dragon of the night. Monster of fright. Won't you stay way out of sight I'm so ready to turn on the light. I'm so ready to fight the fight. I gaze in the mirror. I see what's true. I see much clearer. I know I need you. Take it away! Turn these eyes of night to day. Take it away! Make a gem out of stone so grey. Take it away! Cleanse my soul of so much grime. A heart of sin, and selfish mind. I wish I could just rewind. This is what I've been dying to find! HOW COULD YOU BE SO KIND? [V- Adopted] I have a hope and it is you. Because you love me in a way that's so true. In your grasp forever I'll stay. Take it away! You've adopted me today. Why? Why would you adopt me? What's your reason? I can't see! ALL I KNOW IS NOW I AM FREE! _/\[[=]The Splintery Cross=]]/\_ In the center of my life one thing stands. The splintery cross and your bloody hands. ... And here such a bitter truth lands. It was me that caused you to die. Now, at last, I see the world's lie. So here I sit here kneeling over and I cry. My soul is what your blood was meant to buy. Why? Why was it me that was chosen to be your child. Why was it me to be saved from a fire so wild. On your back, the burden of my sin, it was piled. ... Yet you surprisingly smiled. I'm so glad your love's so true. There's nothing in return that I can do... ... But live my life ALL FOR YOU! ALL FOR YOU! In the center of my life one thing stands. The splintery cross and your bloody hands. The rugged cross stands on high. What a humble way to die! Why oh why? We're the reason you were sent to die. =[[[Castle Halls]]]= Wandering through the halls of the realms of fear. The ocean of the bloody red tear. The horizon I see is far from clear. The kings of times of old I see today. Wondering the halls of dull dull grey. I ask them to leave but they stay. They need revenge they always seem to say. Blood dripping from their eyes. From all the terrible lies. Seeing all who once lived lives. Hearing all their painful cries. Waiting for the day the enemy dies. The monster wanders the dungeon below. I hear the footsteps and I know. Finally the time has come. I must go. CASTLE HALLS! Bloody walls. Deceptive monsters reeling you in. Building up so much rage within. Building up bitter sin. STAY AWAY! I need you to save me. I need you to die for me. ... BECAUSE... IT'S ALL A LIE. A great illusion forming in the sky. A bitter wrong that causes my heart to die. -[!!!ETERNAL FIRE!!!]- In the dead of the night. Without the stars for a light. I engage in battle with the wolves of the night. They're pulling me down, down, down into ETERNAL FIRE! I try to fight the beasts but the flames jump higher. I ask one question of you! Is there something I must do? I am falling. YES IT'S TRUE! ETERNAL FIRE! I must get away. THE FLAMES JUMP HIGHER... ... In the skies of grey. OH YOU'RE HELLHOUND! Get away. YOU ARE HELBOUND! The night has turned to day. FALLING TO THE GROUND! I know this is the way. WAITING TO BE FOUND. ETERNAL FIRE! I must get away. THE FLAMES JUMP HIGHER... ... In the skies of grey. ...[-]...-!!!!WHAT A LIE!!!!-...[-]... I look in the mirror, I am pleased When truly my face is so deseased. WHAT A LIE! Why oh why? JUST A LIE! WHY OH WHY? God is the judge, yes that's true. He is the one that sees us through. Beauty is in the eyes of God the father. He sees us from the inside out. Can you hear the worldly shout? They act so confident but there filled with doubt! Don't you listen to the message of the world so vile. Can you see their fake fake smile. It's been a lie all the while. WHAT A LIE! Why oh why? JUST A LIE! WHY OH WHY? -=Sea of Fire=- Sea of fire. The tongue of a lair. Flames jump higher. Eyes of sin. Evil dwells within. OH BROTHER where have you been? You were brother but not through blood... ... BUT THAT'S NO REASON TO LEAVE ME DYING IN THE MUD. Fallen brother it is I. All the world has told you is a lie. Don't you know that this will make you die. I ask you, brother, please don't make me cry. I ask a simple question. WHY OH WHY? You slipped away in the night. Venturing off into world of fright. What a devastating sight. Sea of fire. The tongue of a lair. Flames jump higher. You fell into a sea of fire. Brother, what is wrong? You can't resist the enemy so strong. You need an escape. Can't you see the demons under the gatekeeper's cape. Fly away. The time is near. Night and day... ... you're in fear. Corruption. It's in your eyes. Can you hear the demon's cries? Can you see the rain cloud in the skies? You're Blinded by the darkness of your sin. You are deteriorating within. When did the corruption begin? The sky is grey. Fly away! FALLEN BROTHER in the lord. You have joined the enemy's horde. Why did you forget the word? How could you? How could you betray your family. Hope you're coming back to join me. You were my brother all through the war. ... But you're not my brother any more. You're infected by disease. Your only breath is but a wheeze. Why? Why? Why? By this barrier we've been divided Come back. You're invited. TURN AROUND. The time has come. Transform what you've become. The future doesn't have to be so glum. Time to remove the heavy sack. Take the burden off your back. Rise again from the crack. -=Confrontation Within=- You tell me I'm defeated. Sadly it's true. You're mission is completed. There's Nothing I can do. You're in my face. Won't you give me some space. Why is this a confrontation? What a false declaration. I am living in a fallen nation. I'm amongst this dead generation. How high is the expectation... ... That I will win this confrontation? Confrontation. Get out of my face! Your false generation. GIVE ME SOME SPACE! Why is it that when I look into your eyes... ... ALL I EVER SEE IS LIES! ... But you know how to hypnotize. Even when your the one I most despise. I can't escape you because I have to look in the mirror. I'm in disbelief... I've got to see clearer. Is that me? I have to get nearer. You have to tell me that it's not me. Because tonight I'm the only one I see. Oh how, oh how, oh how can it be? How can I despise my flesh I hold so dear? How can I run but still be near? Why can't I escape this great, great fear? THERE MUST BE A WAY! Who is that I see on the distance. The one always to be in existence. I can't beat the resistance. I need you more than oxygen. So will you tell me your name again? Jesus, take this hand so bloody right now. Lord, penetrate this heart of stone somehow. This is a confrontation within. A battle to defeat my filthy sin. _=+-\\Walls//-+=_ [][][][][][][][][][][] I can't seem to climb the wall. Everytime I near the top, I fall. I need help to reach the end. Is there any help you can lend. Walls of sin. Building up so high within. Such a hideous, evil grin. WALLS OF SIN! I can't climb them. Their so high. Building up. Far past the sky. I'm always falling. Why oh why? From the top of an endless wall... ... I think hear a distant call. You above, catch me before I fall. Falling down terribly fast. Not even knowing what I've past. Until the time comes at last. I hit the ground. By my savior I am found. Finally, I the prisoner come unbound. I can hear the trumpet sound. I'm leaving nowhere land. I'm taking hold of your hand. -[Running Away]- [I- Discontent] [Son] OH! Everything you're telling me to do. How dare treat me as a slave to you? I'm running away. I'm running away YES TODAY! I use to be your son. Well now I'm not. Just look what you've done. Your heart is filled with rot. You say you pay for me to live... ... With every penny that you give. WHY SHOULD I WORK FOR YOU... ... When I've got better stuff to do! [Father] Oh my son I'd give my life for you right now. I wish I could change your mind somehow. I understand that life is tough. But it really is never going to seem "good enough". But life is a blessing. So be content. This bad decision... ... Is something you can prevent. But that's your choice my son. Just look at what is about to be done. BUT IN THE END... ... I will always love you. There's nothing you can do. [Son] TOO LATE FOR YOU! I'm running away. Farewell to you. See you some other day! [II- A Step Into The world] [Son] Hello stranger. What is your name. How much danger... ... Lies within this game? [Stranger] No worries young child. Nothing is at stake. This life so wonderful... ... MIGHT AS WELL BE FAKE! Listen to your desire. The world belongs to you. A love seemingly fake is NOW SO TRUE! OH! After the world you must run. They are watching you, SO HAVE SOME FUN! Spend your money on selfish gain. This world is filled with treasures I could never explain. LISTEN TO YOURSELF. Please do not restrain. For the flame inside of you is something you can't contain. [Son] I'll take a step into the world because I'm prepared. I'm taking the step. I'm no longer scared. [People of the world] TAKE THE STEP! Take it now. Before your desire please take a bow! OH! OH! OH! BOW! [III- seemingly beautiful] Rising high. Towers graceful rising in the sky. Towers of silver, TOWERS OF GOLD! Towers monumental, TOWERS BOLD! Snow is falling, somehow delightfully cold. Seemingly beautiful. LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT! But I'm telling you... ... SOMETHING ISN'T RIGHT! Behind the walls of gold the corpses lie. Behind the walls of silver fallen souls die. I MUST TURN AROUND! I try to survive but instead become a slave. I become a wanderer in this endless grave. I feast in the slop for the pigs. I sleep where an animal digs. OH! I need my father more than I thought. I'm losing the battle so far fought. [IV- Journey home] I turn around... ... But I'm chained to my false desire. I pour out water but the flames jump higher. I run away from the city. But it keeps reeling me... IN! IN! INTO THE DARKNESS! I break the chains. I turn around. I walk on shaky ground. Just wanting to be found. I tell wanderers what the world can do to them. THEY WON'T LISTEN! SORROW! It comes at me like a thief in the night. Filling my deceived soul with so much fright. I feel dead but I still must fight. THIS ROAD SEEMS ENDLESS! I am left again in darkness. Wandering without a light. [V- Home At Last] THE PATH IGNITES. The way revealed. I'm running home. Wanting to be healed. I come to the doorstep. I open the door. [Son] What was my rebellion for? Such an unnecessary war. [Father] OH MY SON! I forgive you of all you've done. I'll be here to the end. I'll be at your side helping you defend. OH MY SON! It's time for the feast. It's time to tame the wild beast. YOU ARE HOME!
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dog00
#16752317Monday, November 16, 2009 8:28 PM GMT

How his father says: "Its time for the feast." Really makes it fell like ThanksGiving to me.
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MINARD777
#16752359Monday, November 16, 2009 8:30 PM GMT

lol hahahha
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MINARD777
#16865392Friday, November 20, 2009 12:20 PM GMT

share your opinion on my poems
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MINARD777
#17246980Sunday, November 29, 2009 11:32 PM GMT

-[The Open Door]- [I- Lost In The Realms of Fear] A shadow is cast upon the path. The shadow comes to life and unleashes it's wrath. I'm walking forward but falling behind. All of my mistakes! I WISH I COULD REWIND! A stranger on my path... I thought I'd never find. BUT HOW COULD A STRANGER BE SO KIND? He says to me, "You're so lost! I'll show you the way! I'll be your guide all night and day!" I REJECT HIM. The light goes dim. Walking on shaking ground. I turn around... ... AND I'M HELL BOUND! OH!!!!! I'm so lost... IN THE REALMS OF FEAR! There is nothing... LEFT IN HERE! Can you see... THE DRIPPING TEAR? OH OH OH! Lost... In the realms of fear. OH!!!!! DARKNESS... spreads across the land! [II- Dark Times Arise- Hypnotic Lies] DARK TIMES ARISE! Can you hear such sorrowful cries? DARK TIMES ARISE! Collapsing towers and stormy skies. DARK TIMES ARISE! Evil ones who hypnotize. DARK TIMES ARISE! I've heard plenty of BITTER LIES! DARK... TIMES... ARISE! OH! ELEVEN DAYS OF RAIN! OH! THE FIRST ELEVEN DAYS OF THE DARK ONES REIGN! OH!!!!! What's this mystical tool in the palm of my hand? I'm lost at sea. Can't find my way back to land. OH OH OH! I stare into your eyes. Somehow you cover up the lies. I didn't know that you could hypnotize! Oh... The sky has Crumbled in depression. I have learned so much in this dire lesson! HYPNOTIC LIES! Oh how you... HYPNOTIZE! HYPNOTIC LIES! Oh the trickery in your eyes! DARK TIMES ARISE! HYPNOTIC LIES! [III- THE DOOR] In the middle of my path I see a door. What's this shining portal for? Is it an escape from the whelming war? ENTER THE DOOR! It's the only way! ENTER THE DOOR! And get away! ENTER THE DOOR! ENTER THE DAY and leave the night! LEAVE THE SKIES OF GREY and no longer be in fright! DROP DOWN THE SWORD to win the fight! ENTER THE WORD and dwell in the light! SALVATION! Saved by blood. Condemnation... DRIPS INTO THE MUD! ENTER THE DOOR! THE OPEN DOOR! -[Duel With The Dark One]- [I- The Tomb] I'm taking a walk in wilderness. The mountains so high, so glorious. I come across a tomb. I open the door and step inside. ... And suddenly I'm in for a wild ride. I fall down a pit The pathway ignites... My pathway is lit. The darkest of dreams meets reality. The feeling of despair remains inside of me. I come to a wall. A wall of ice. It says for me to roll the dice. The dice of chance. The flames still dance. Roll the dice and reveal your destiny. Break the ice and rule with me. BREAK THE ICE! ... And you will see. BREAK THE ICE! It has to be. BREAK THE ICE AND RULE WITH ME! I break the ice and free the beast. So he prepares the celebration feast. He says, "Oh my servant it is I! The dark ruler of the mountains high!" I take a step and let my soul die. [II- Inferno] Fire spewing from his eyes. In the heart of the man The Dark One lies! From too much self-praise he became a creature. Not a single human feature. Inferno! Hades! BURNING IN HIS DULL GREY EYES! Sheer deception and evil lies! A horrible growl The Dark One Cries. Fiery furnaces from below. Revealing such darkness I thought I'd never know. I REALIZE THE TRUTH! We are one. ... And on my own this battle can't be won. [III- The Duel] Raise the silver sword. Strike the dark lord. Don't join the monster's horde. Fighting the beast within. Fighting off my evil sin. Running from the devil's grin. THE DUEL ON THE HEIGHTS! THE FIGHT OF FIGHTS! ... NEVER SEEN SUCH TERRIFYING SIGHTS! I fall to the ground. By chains of weakness I am bound. FIGHT FOR ME FOR! I'M TO WEAK! YOUR GREAT POWER IS ALL I SEEK! Slay the monster. Wear the crown. You are the master. So cast me down. Because in this sea of pride... ... I'M LEFT TO DROWN! SAVE ME! SAVE ME! LORD SAVE ME! -[Land of Forever]- [Verse 1] I'm on this bed. Waiting to be dead. Bleeding from my heart more than I've ever bled. So many things I wish I never said. OH! ON THIS DEATHBED! OH! I'll breath my last. Leaving the past. Time went fast. BREATH MY LAST! The final breath. BREATH MY LAST! New life in this death. BREATH MY LAST! THIS IS MY... Final breath! [Chorus] Heaven's gates so glorious. Trumpet sounds VICTORIOUS! At the end of the path so laborious. THE GATE! It's just ahead. THE GATE! I'm almost dead. THE GATE! I'm on my deathbed. [Verse 2] Heaven's gates so glorious. Trumpet sounds VICTORIOUS! At the end of the path so laborious. I open the gate. I see the light. The sun is shinning... Oh so bright! I TAKE A STEP INTO PARADISE! I take a step onto the ground of ice. No word can describe the sight I'm seeing now! I'm taking a step into the land of forever. Never turning back no never. ETERNITY! Never ending celebration. The final step in sanctification. Now it's time for glorification. I'm taking a step into the land of forever. -=[Dead of The Night]=- [Verse 1] In the dead of the night. Evil comes into my sight. OH! All that ever seemed right to me seems so wrong. What now is weak used to seem so strong. My eyes were closed for a thousand years. Pointless cries. A million tears. Faithlessness is the only word for all my fears. [CHORUS] DARKNESS! The dead of the night. DARKNESS! Fight the fight. DARKNESS! Lord help me tonight! Never felt so terrible. Never felt so horrible. My heart is so vulnerable. SO HELP ME! LORD HELP ME! [Verse 2] OH! The villains rise. All what I once saw is but lies. We worship the men with faces of villainy. I rise on high with nothing good inside of me. I claim this as my own territory. I'm so blind. I WISH I COULD SEE! I'm a slave to darkness. WON'T YOU SET ME FREE? [CHORUS 2] RISE! I'm giving my life to you. RISE! Resting my sorrow in your love so true. RISE! Wash away my sin through and through. SO SAVE ME! LORD SAVE ME! [Verse 3] DARKNESS! The dead of the night. DARKNESS! FIGHT THE FIGHT! OH! Lord help me. LORD SAVE ME! ... When day has turned to night. You will rise and fight the fight. Choke out the darkness and TURN ON THE LIGHT! You died for me. So I will live for you. You let me see... ... ALL THAT'S TRUE! -[Queen of Shadows]- [I- The Bitter Truth] In the murky night. The bats are out for a midnight fight. From the cloud of bats there descended a woman. Seemingly beautiful at first sight. BUT SOMETHINGS ISN'T RIGHT! You can see the evil in the moonlight. HER EYES OF FIRE SHINE SO BRIGHT! I fell under the trance... ... At the very first glance. QUEEN OF SHADOWS. OH! In her presence it's never day. Temptation in every word she has to say. ... BUT... Her golden hair just fades away. Her smile is rotting with decay. I CAN'T TURN AROUND! I'm in the abyss waiting to be found. So help Me. LORD HELP ME! BECAUSE I'M HELL BOUND! [II- DARKNESS] NO! It just can't be! She's blinded my eyes so I can't see. I've tasted the fruit of the forbidden tree. She bound me in chains SO LORD SET ME FREE! AHHHHHHH!!!!!! Echoes. Calling loud in the dead of the night. Millions of souls crying out in fright. The many people losing the fight. THE TRUTH HAS COME INTO MY SIGHT! OH! THE QUEEN OF SHADOWS! [III- FLEE] NO! It just can't be! She's blinded my eyes so I couldn't see. I've tasted the fruit of the forbidden tree. She bound me in chains SO LORD SET ME FREE! OH BUT I REALIZE IT'S ALL INSIDE OF ME! SO I MUST RUN WAY, I MUST FLEE! ...OH! ... it's all my fault. This is what's been on my mind. How can so much evil seem so kind. I'm losing the race and falling behind. [IV- Bloodbath] When the blood poured down. I cast down my FILTHY CROWN! And I let my sin drown... ... IN THE BLOODBATH DRIPPING FROM THE CROSS! All my treasures I now count loss! SLAVERY! The old me. The true me. IT'S ALL GONE! Saved from the depths. You held out your hand. You pulled me onto land. Pulled me onto the beach of sand. I let my sin drown... ... IN THE BLOODBATH DRIPPING FROM THE CROSS! BECAUSE! ... OH OH OH OH! YOUR BLOOD! Remaining in darkness my heart will never be. You've opened my eyes so I can see! -[The Game]- [I- City of Lies] I take a step into this world of gold. The ancient city of times of old. Towers rising oh so high. Rising far beyond the sky. Leave the city? Tell me one reason why! I step into the palace, I see what's true. A darkness never before seen. A DARKNESS SO NEW! A darkness choking out the skies of blue. ... AND THERE'S NOTHING I CAN DO! CITY OF LIES! Sorrowful cries. CITY OF LIES! My sorrowful soul dies. CITY OF LIES! Countless tries... CITY OF LIES! ALL BUT LIES! CITY... OF... LIES!!!!! Oh. Oh. OH!!!!! CITY OF LIES! Can you hear the cries? I walk forward but end up where I began. I have tried every single ridiculous plan. Every time I rise I fall. Every time I reach the top there's another wall. There's an endless echo when I call. My voice just keeps getting louder. Grinding my bones into a powder. OH! There must be a way out. I'm stuck inside an endless loop. AHHHHH!!!!! ENDLESS CIRCLES! ETERNAL PORTALS! All lead back to where I am. [II- The Great Abyss] Ahead I see a door. In this world of abyss no more! I ENTER IN... ... TO WHAT I WILL NEVER WIN! OH! THIS GAME! I am the one to blame. SADLY IT IS TRUE. I'm killing myself in everything I do. I can't get to the next level. OH! THE NEXT LEVEL! YEAH! Fate has brought me to the abyss. This world so vast used to be so bliss. NOW THE FEELING IS AMISS! What has become of THIS? THE GREAT ABYSS! The uncharted territory. There's Nothing left in me. I can't fight the enemy. [III- ESCAPE] Frozen in time. I have wasted every dime. MY LIFE IS SUCH A CRIME! Six billion players cast in this game. All we seem to do is continuously blame. Blaming every factor anyone could name. THERE'S A WAY OUT! A way to escape the eternal drought. So no longer live in doubt. There's an escape from the great abyss. A place that I'll never miss. I see the light. A light that's shining oh so bright. No longer shall I live in fright! Into the day and out of the night! FOR YOU HAVE WON THE FIGHT... For me!
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MINARD777
#17247130Sunday, November 29, 2009 11:35 PM GMT

that was my new series "the open door"
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dog00
#17271245Monday, November 30, 2009 8:57 PM GMT

"I'm stuck in an endless loop" That was a cool add-on.
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MINARD777
#17298456Tuesday, December 01, 2009 1:50 PM GMT

thanks man
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dog00
#17302679Tuesday, December 01, 2009 7:40 PM GMT

I like "Save me from myself" Thats nice.
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