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I was going to try MTVB first because I thought this forum would work, but, apparently, no. I thought of trying Off Topic, but that'd probably be even worse.
I might as well just post my poems on MTVB and try to avoid as much hate as possible, and still attempt to gain support on my S&I thread...
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Thanks. I won a poetry contest at school with this poem, so it is one of my favorites.
I'm going to start posting some of my poems on MTVB, and I'll put a link to every one that I post on my S&I thread.
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Fine? You want real feedback? It's bloody terrible. It's poorly put together, the choice of subject matter is cliché and overused, it is uninteresting to read and feels far to much like a child's attempt to sound deep. Thus ending up sounding ridiculously terrible. [2] |
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@Usu
Get out.
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mageofpowerTop 100 PosterJoin Date: 2009-02-01
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Get out.
No. You need to learn to accept that not everyone will like what you create. You either need to accept that or stop making poems this very instant. |
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@Mage
No, you need to understand there are reasons I told him to get out. Quit assuming things that you don't know.
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mageofpowerTop 100 PosterJoin Date: 2009-02-01
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No, you need to understand there are reasons I told him to get out.
And what are those reasons? You didn't give any. You merely said told him to get out after he gave reasonable criticisms. |
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get out
CHEERIO CHEERIO CHEERIO! |
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mageofpowerTop 100 PosterJoin Date: 2009-02-01
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So what, you've had disagreements before so that instantly means he isn't allowed to participate in any of your threads?
Grow up, kid. |
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@Mage
You grow up. Quit complaining and being a critic of everything. I've seen your posts on MTVB, and I haven't found a post yet where you weren't complaining or being a critic.
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mageofpowerTop 100 PosterJoin Date: 2009-02-01
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You grow up. Quit complaining and being a critic of everything. I've seen your posts on MTVB, and I haven't found a post yet where you weren't complaining or being a critic.
And? I'm a very critical person. What does that have to do with anything? I at the very least have enough manners to not attempt to throw people out of my threads when they disagree with me. |
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I gave you feedback
And you treat me with no respect.
Either wise up or get out. |
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Well Barge, here's the thing: People aren't criticizing you because they want to make you angry for no reason, which seems to be what you think.
They are criticizing you because the poem is bad, and poorly written.
You asked for real feedback, we gave you some.
Also don't explain your own symbolism in the poem. It ruins the point of it.
And here's a third one:
Roses are red,
My name is Dave,
Violets aren't blue,
Microwave. |
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Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
You're an idiot,
Mage is one too.
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'm not going to flame
And you shouldn't too |
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Roses are red. Violets are blue. If you dont like me, I dont like you.
"I would love to insult you, but you wouldn't understand."
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