MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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I'll continue this if people like it.
ROBLOX: Revenge of Umbrella
Prologue
It was midday of August 30, 2013. X-101st had been eliminated by the minor clan uprising two years ago. It has been seven years since the previous Umbrella had fallen. Who had knew on that ordinary day one of ROBLOXia's greatest clans will re-awaken. It was the day that Umbrella rises again.
Chapter 1: Strange Events.
It was an ordinary day in ROBLOX. People were usually playing games, some building and some posting on the forums. Suddenly, the evil pink banner was shown on the site. But now it had an odd flaming decal and pictures of Umbrella Corp. It read: "Thus repent for thy clan will crush thee". Then suddenly, random flaming umbrellas fell from the skybox and exploding on impact, pwning thousands. No one knew what the strange events ment except for one person. It was one of the legendary drewsomeB's descendants, the elite wing admiral DrewsomeD. He was the new leader of Elite Wing. He knew Umbrella had awaken. But how..
Chapter 2: Red Alert.
DrewsomeD decided to arrange an urgent meeting tommorow about these events. Then one of the elite wing officers came in his room and said "Sir, I think you need to see this." They entered the comms room, which was full of mechanical gadgets and hologram figures showing his nightmare. Umbrella tanks and infantry was swarming every place in ROBLOX. Recruitment Centers are blown to small blocks. Clan vehicles burned to a crisp. They were setting up a full-scale invasion... |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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I'll be making chapter 3 in a while..
But for now post what you think about it. |
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ZzztopsJoin Date: 2008-09-27
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Lol nice story, I remember when the UC was the strongest clan in Roblox... |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Thanks for the comment, lol.
I might become one of the best writers on ROBLOX. |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Keeltool was making a spy thrilla.
UNRELATED. |
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Chapter 3: All out rebellion.
Two days have passed since the invasion. Streets have been covered in flames.
Cars have been slashed to halves. People hide in derelict buildings that could almost collapse. The sky is full of smoke. The united clans of robloxia had decided to stop with the offensive and hope to get more survivors in the battlefield. 80% of the clans have been wiped out. Places are filled with fighting.
Some have been converted to camps and makeshift hospitals. All drewsomeD could do was hope for the best... |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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O EM GEE.
COMPETITION. >_>
Must has story twist. |
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"Cars have been slashed to halves. "
OH NOES! *Car gets slashed and turns into a giant ' 1/2 ' made of concrete.*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! XD |
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CatmandoJoin Date: 2008-11-24
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Why are the chapters so short? |
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DevixJoin Date: 2008-01-09
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Why are the chapters so short?
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Because they suck badly and are copied. |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Chapter 4: Radiation Restriction
After weeks of pwning rebels and fighting-for-freedom scum, Umbrella unleashes one of their hidden weapons. An odd invisible script that consumes life from ROBLOXians from at least 2 minutes of exposure.
The players drop. Umbrella captures bases with ease. The R.E.F. plan to make a full-scale assault on Umbrella's hard earned territory.
On the other hand, DrewsomeD and the Elite Wing are restocking on weapons to eliminate Umbrella once and for all. DrewsomeD authorizes the construction of an orbital strike laser sattelite, which can swiftly clean 1000000000 studs off a map, and also begin making a vaccine where troops can be immune to the script. They begin forming the "ROBLOXian Freedom Pact" where they all ally to help save ROBLOX from Umbrella's reign. |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Devix, thanks for the comment.
I'll make mah chapters longer. |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Imma starting on a really long chapter..
Frickin draft. |
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DevixJoin Date: 2008-01-09
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Devix, thanks for the comment.
I'll make mah chapters longer.
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This is a copied story, And if you continue, I will report you for plagurism |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Copied story?
From where? |
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DevixJoin Date: 2008-01-09
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Copied story?
From where?
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I don't have to tell you, You already know! |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Keeltoll again?
It was about some spy named trace and his robot rescuer.
Cant see the similarity.
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"I might become one of the best writers on ROBLOX."
Bull and crud.
Youll never top me.
Ive written 3 REAL books, neither i have published YET, both full length. |
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@jam
Might be. Still need some practice.
Im a newb to writing. |
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@Devix
If you'd kindly post me the link to this so-called original thread...
I will stop writing. |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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Oh yea, If you saw the bloody draft in the Roleplaying forum, that was mine.
I felt it just didn't belong there. |
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KimboSanJoin Date: 2009-06-17
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Do you realize that I made that shirt in January on an account named Igottaplan32, and named it "KUSO Digi camo"
The camo was stolen by SgtMossey many times, which is the reason so many clans use it today. |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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I know.
SgtMossey stole alot of shirts and pants, claiming it to be his.
Anyway, I LOVE YOUR SHIRTS KIMBO! |
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MECHABOTJoin Date: 2007-11-08
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If you guys want chapter5...
I'll post it. But if you hate me, I won't. |
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