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RT Fanfic part 8: Invasion

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#141453323Friday, July 25, 2014 2:02 AM GMT

The group was plummeting into the city streets. Rockit flailed his arms. "Quazino, what exactly are you planing?!" Quazino kept his gaze on the ground below, holding the staff tightly in his hands. "Just wait..." "We don't have time to wait!" "Now!" Quazino pointed his staff at the ground, and the group began to descend gently. Anikinis was spinning in the air "Wh-what is this?" Quazino put his staff back onto his back strap. "Just something i was working on. I told you we would make it." It was silent for a moment. *CRASH* The windows to the building were suddenly reflecting red. They began to shatter from the top to botton, propelling the group forward. BigC gagged. "Woooahh!" The group was spiraling into the ground. Parker pointed downward. "Look, were gonan hit wat-" The group rocketed into a lake. Rockit came up first, and the others followed. "Phew. That was too close." BigC snickered. "We just keep lucking out, don't we." Rockit shrugged "Everyone dies one day." "Not the time for pessimism you scrub." "Don't call me a scrub!" "I'm not gonna lie!" "You just did!" Quazino pinched his brow. "You two need to chill out." Anikinis pointed to the east. An army was approaching the city. "Uh oh.." chk chk boom

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#141453385Friday, July 25, 2014 2:03 AM GMT

forgot part 7 http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=141408608 chk chk boom

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#141453499Friday, July 25, 2014 2:04 AM GMT

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#141453502Friday, July 25, 2014 2:04 AM GMT

the only problem i have with your writing style is how it feels more like a play transcript instead of an actual story. there's nothing to visualize.

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#141453586Friday, July 25, 2014 2:05 AM GMT

@Keel yeah, im working on that. i just cant get that right chk chk boom

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#141453647Friday, July 25, 2014 2:06 AM GMT

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#141453914Friday, July 25, 2014 2:09 AM GMT

idk i just forgot to make you talk im a bad writer chk chk boom

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#141454087Friday, July 25, 2014 2:11 AM GMT

aaa chk chk boom

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#141454202Friday, July 25, 2014 2:12 AM GMT

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#141549444Friday, July 25, 2014 10:54 PM GMT

just bumping chk chk boom

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#141552788Friday, July 25, 2014 11:18 PM GMT

This one felt short, but cool.

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#141555275Friday, July 25, 2014 11:40 PM GMT

michael bay

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#141555404Friday, July 25, 2014 11:41 PM GMT

rip me 1 dayer and bad luck in story :( Thanks for making my day 76.342% stupider | Follow me on Twitter @rockitbro_RBLX

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#141555678Friday, July 25, 2014 11:43 PM GMT

I like the direction I'm taking

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#141559185Saturday, July 26, 2014 12:19 AM GMT

I'm leading it, aren't I? tee hee

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#141566044Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:29 AM GMT

well duh you can stop bothering me now chk chk boom

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#141566162Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:30 AM GMT

omy gudgud can i be in

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#141566272Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:31 AM GMT

pt 9 pls ~ generic oder quote ~

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#141566285Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:31 AM GMT

May I be in this?! It seems cool.

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#141566339Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:32 AM GMT

i might work on part 9 tomorrow. chk chk boom

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#141566557Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:34 AM GMT

Where is my part?

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#141566741Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:35 AM GMT

or tonight if people want it bad enough chk chk boom

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#141566821Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:36 AM GMT

part 9 or riot

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#141566911Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:37 AM GMT

can i be in it phase spooky ©

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#141567398Saturday, July 26, 2014 1:42 AM GMT

ok i geuss youll waitg until tomorrow chk chk boom