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kitkatie
#14602633Friday, September 25, 2009 2:34 PM GMT

Do not fear us, we mean no harm, we are just here to offer you peace. We can see you weeping every night before you sleep. Pain so great should be healed, so listen please to our deal, give up pain and worry deep, and we shall wake you from your endless sleep. In return, life as you know it must end. But believe me, it shall be worth it, my friend. No more aging, no more pain, no more loneliness ever again. Make a choice, do not be long, trust yourself, you wont be wrong. Sleep now beauty, we shall return. Then your gift will be earned. It has started, let's begin. Release your sorrow, embrace your sin. Endless nights, burning desire and eyes that glow like scarlet fire. Embrace the darkness, reject the light. It shall all begin with just one bite, sharp teeth and punctured skin, your life extended into the ebony night. Life now over eternity begins, the blood is the life, that burns within. ___________________________________________________________________________ This is originally a normal vampire song, but I thought it was inspiring an evil story. Peacemakers come to unsures' rooms at night and offer them friendship, but they really only become dark minions. Peace makers rule over vampires, and the vampires are trying to stop them. The underworld has become a dictatorship. If you are a peacemaker you have all kinds of power over any vampire. Unsure: You think peace makers are friends, and might want to give into their offer. Peacemakers: Go to children's houses to try to turn them into peacemakers. They are evil workers. Normal vampires: Try to stop the peace-makers. Unsure: Name: Age(6-16): Gender: Appearance: Bio: Reason for wanting to be converted: Peacemakers: Name: Age(any): Gender: Appearance: Bio: How you became a peacemaker: Vampires: Name: Age(13-25): Gender: Appearance: Bio: Reason for trying to stop peacemakers:
kitkatie
#14602689Friday, September 25, 2009 2:38 PM GMT

Vampires: Name: Jillian Age(13-25): 16 Gender: F Appearance: Gaunt, pale, red lips, silky black hair, clothes like my robloxian. Bio: I am the leader of the vampire rebellion. Reason for trying to stop peacemakers: They took my little sister as their first official victim.
kitkatie
#14602713Friday, September 25, 2009 2:40 PM GMT

I get pushed down randomly by a peace maker. Peace maker: Laughs. I rub the scar on my eye I got yesterday. I'm the most hated vampire. I scowl at him and stand up only to be pushed down again. I crawl away then stand up.
kitkatie
#14602806Friday, September 25, 2009 2:46 PM GMT

On every screen in town there's a picture of the lead peace maker's face. I get pushed down again. "WATCH IT!!" I lash out at him and he cuts my wrist with a knife. I grab my wrist, falling to the ground. "Ugggh." I run away into my dirty apartment.
rachetandclank2
#14602840Friday, September 25, 2009 2:48 PM GMT

Name:Syphon Tyko. Age(13-25):15 Gender: F Appearance:My robloxian with the Vampire things. Bio:Jillians friend. (Just trying to put a bond between character :O) Reason for trying to stop peacemakers:Umm... They got sombodyy from my family.
rachetandclank2
#14602878Friday, September 25, 2009 2:50 PM GMT

I was wondering where Jillian was. I began to got suspicious. I grabbed a few knifes and a Air gun. I loaded the airgun with some knifes and set out to find her.
kitkatie
#14602973Friday, September 25, 2009 2:55 PM GMT

I waited out in the apartment and walked outside, where I was caught by surprise and two peacemakers threw me into the mud.
rachetandclank2
#14603018Friday, September 25, 2009 2:57 PM GMT

I found Jillian and shot the two peace makers in the back. They both fell to the ground.
kitkatie
#14603040Friday, September 25, 2009 2:58 PM GMT

I stood up and was, again, pushed down. I was forced to crawl through the mud, then stand up. My clothes were even dirtier than before.
kitkatie
#14603055Friday, September 25, 2009 2:58 PM GMT

(Late post) "Thanks...their gonna be chasing us now....any ideas?"
rachetandclank2
#14603105Friday, September 25, 2009 3:01 PM GMT

"No. Nothing. All we can do is stay hidden."I say to Jillian. This was worse than I thought.
kitkatie
#14603158Friday, September 25, 2009 3:03 PM GMT

"Well, unless we get some back up we're doomed. But seems like we're the only vampires here." I duck into an empty trach can as two peacemakers pass.
rachetandclank2
#14603218Friday, September 25, 2009 3:05 PM GMT

"Yeah. We really need to get someone."I say to Jillian. I hide behind a trashcan.
kitkatie
#14603280Friday, September 25, 2009 3:08 PM GMT

"And we can't get help from the unsures, they'll probably turn against us too if we try to tell them what peacemakers really are." I jump out of the trash can and think about what they did to my sister and how they lured her in. "Impossible."
kitkatie
#14603401Friday, September 25, 2009 3:14 PM GMT

I sigh. "We're hopeless."
rachetandclank2
#14603593Friday, September 25, 2009 3:22 PM GMT

"Unless..."I say to myself chucking a pill into the air. "I use this."
kitkatie
#14603607Friday, September 25, 2009 3:23 PM GMT

"What is it?" I look at it closely.
rachetandclank2
#14603709Friday, September 25, 2009 3:27 PM GMT

" 'Gree Pill." I say to her. "Makes the person who uses it agree to everything you say. They can still pick there own actions though."
kitkatie
#14604150Friday, September 25, 2009 3:53 PM GMT

"So if I feed it to a peacemaker they'll listen to me?"
rachetandclank2
#14604187Friday, September 25, 2009 3:55 PM GMT

"True."I Reply
su3353
#14604197Friday, September 25, 2009 3:55 PM GMT

(can i be a vampire hunter?)
kitkatie
#14604227Friday, September 25, 2009 3:57 PM GMT

(All the vampire hunters are on the peace makers team, considered as guard peacemakers. They have to listen to the lead peacemaker though.)
su3353
#14604234Friday, September 25, 2009 3:57 PM GMT

(k)
kitkatie
#14604237Friday, September 25, 2009 3:58 PM GMT

"Interesting...." I tuck it in my pocket.
su3353
#14604271Friday, September 25, 2009 3:59 PM GMT

Name:mark Age(any):19 Gender:male Appearance:black jacket and blue jeans pale skin Bio:is a guard peacemaker,try's to make people beg to be converted How you became a peacemaker:i gave in....

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