Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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something along the lines of...
are you serious? you? you're my next contender?
my rhymes will tear your clan apart - call it dismembered
lines so clever that they leave your brains splattered
you're insecure cause your girl said size doesn't matter
your day is looking blue, why don't I lay you down my queen?
i'll wake you up in november, now your Day is looking Green
you're like the titanic - you brag a lot but you still sink
my lines can lead your girl to water AND can make her drink
i'm on the brink of something greater than me, call me a detective
or you can call me what you want but what you say is all reflective
of course it would have a few extra lines and modifications that reference the challenger's rap to make it feel more personal, but you get the point
*sigh* none of you got slaughtered tonight... |
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RaethyrJoin Date: 2008-03-08
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RoDuck3DJoin Date: 2011-09-24
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>i'll wake you up in november, now your Day is looking Green
nice green day reference |
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SUGERDEWJoin Date: 2011-10-20
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how is my day looking green an insult |
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EckuJoin Date: 2014-09-07
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This is more of a poem. Plus it is average, anyone with a thesaurus and rhymedictionary (website) could make this.
I am interested in your features though.
"Local artists"
Would like to hear your sound, flow, etc. |
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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@suger
it's a green day reference, not an insult |
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em write a verse as if you're going against me
i want to see it |
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SUGERDEWJoin Date: 2011-10-20
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so basically u just made a rap up and planned to use this on anyone without it even having relevance to the person |
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How long did that take to write?
Two-months?
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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"anyone with a thesaurus and rhymedictionary (website) could make this"
thesauri and rhyme dictionaries don't tell you how to include references, it's not that simple
it's not really hard but most people can't do it so w/e
i don't really to share my features because the production makes me cringe
it was bad enough that it messed up my flow a little bit
it's not usb quality but the beat is 4 piano notes and the slowest muffled bass drum... it's just not something i'm proud of
we DID make the hottest trap song of 2014 though
it legit went international
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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@suger
read the bottom please :)
@hardcor
no like 20 minutes lol
it's not that hard |
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link to this "hottest song"? |
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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@rune
no lol it's so bad
it's a joke song that we made to cook one of the people we featured on another song with
but the scottish exchange students we were with liked it enough to show their friends back home so now there's a group of like 50 scots that jam to it #international |
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EckuJoin Date: 2014-09-07
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Figures you are into trap. |
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rap battle me noob
I'll take off this shower cap and whup yo ass |
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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@ecku
lmao that was ignorant
i never said i was into trap
i only 'listen' to trap at parties
it's bad for anything other than a bunch of drunk teenagers
like i said, it was a joke song
the guy who was helping produce is had made an actually pretty decent beat, but it was a trap beat
but the guy we were there to record with originally was taking too long to show up, so me and the other guy who we were recording with fooled around and did a one take freestyle over it, and it blew up into this really awful yet catchy song
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EckuJoin Date: 2014-09-07
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You can call me Bulq, BRO.
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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oh ur bulq
no wonder ur annoying |
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"you're insecure cause your girl said size doesn't matter "
what girl....
i'm ME |
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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@faux
im giving them the benefit of the doubt
when in doubt, your mother will suffice |
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EckuJoin Date: 2014-09-07
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You just can't accept you aren't as great as you think.
A socially awkward poet who thinks he is some hot shot and posts mediocre rhymes on a game called ROBLOX. |
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im bad at anything i do but whatever here i do
Look at you, your so damn shook
You try to cover it up by acting crook.
Son sit your ass down before you get dropped
I bet your international flopped
Flopped harder than when you were dropped on your head as a baby
Thats why you must be cranky
Why am I even doing this, its obvious that i'm better
hell, ill spell it out letter by letter
B-E-T-T- screw the spelling bee
now scurry off and go get the D
(this took like 2 mins LOL)
I'll take off this shower cap and whup yo ass |
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Apoc3005Join Date: 2014-06-16
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i don't think i'm great at all
i think i'm better than people on a game called roblox
cause, you know, it's roblox. not too hard.
doesn't change the fact that you're annoying lol
i like how you just throw out a bunch of insults and hope that one sticks though. it's cute.
would work a bit better if i was in middle school though |
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apoc respond to me kid..........
I'll take off this shower cap and whup yo ass |
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EckuJoin Date: 2014-09-07
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Unable to give a decent rebuttal.
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