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JubrilMD
#147395903Sunday, October 05, 2014 7:48 PM GMT

[Hook:Indiella] Opened my eyes and looked in the mirror Cleared the foggy glass, I can finally see clearer Not the same girl who you used to call inferior Oh, oh, oh, oh You always told me that I couldn't do it, "You're never gonna win it so don't put your mind to it" Now I'm on the throne, it's time to admit it Oh, oh, oh oh I'm standing on top of the world, World's my oyster, I'm the pearl We did it, We did it We're standing on top of the world [Verse 1:RandyMD] This is for the rap kids who say "Randy Can I get signed?" Some think Rap is all about words that rhyme And if they some questions, I stop and give them my time I'd like to pave a path for the next generation MTers put you down, stealing lyrics is the temptation Nevermind them, to be yourself takes dedication Most of them forget stardom takes patience Wont ever understand how they think everything they do is good Want to start [S] then act like it's all good Thats when they rap its nothing but lies I swear I heard the same words bout a thousand of times I do it for the game I try to make a change I try to switch it up so its not the same Ro-Rap is going soft, guess I'm to blame Try to make it picture perfect, still need a frame Let's burn it up now, got a new flame [Hook:Indiella] Opened my eyes and looked in the mirror Cleared the foggy glass, I can finally see clearer Not the same girl who you used to call inferior Oh, oh, oh, oh You always told me that I couldn't do it, "You're never gonna win it so don't put your mind to it" Now I'm on the throne, it's time to admit it Oh, oh, oh oh I'm standing on top of the world, World's my oyster, I'm the pearl We did it, We did it We're standing on top of the world [Verse 2:RandyMD] This is for the haters who just fill you with doubts They say your songs are poetry, but thats what Raps about Artist be up all night, thinking of what of to write Uploading songs but still dont get no likes Wanna leave the game but they not packed up May be feeling down but they always get back up I mean this world is for the people who like to think they're in control But control is overrated, thats why MT is ran by trolls And im not really living life until I've reached my life goals Until then, imma be me. Just do myself and try to be free From the world that we live in, we live the life we lead Even though we were cursed from the begining because of the apple on the tree [Hook:Indiella] Opened my eyes and looked in the mirror Cleared the foggy glass, I can finally see clearer Not the same girl who you used to call inferior Oh, oh, oh, oh You always told me that I couldn't do it, "You're never gonna win it so don't put your mind to it" Now I'm on the throne, it's time to admit it Oh, oh, oh oh I'm standing on top of the world, World's my oyster, I'm the pearl We did it, We did it We're standing on top of the world [Verse 2:ChanelG] I remember dreamin when I was little girl That on stage I had power, I was on top of the world Getting standing ovations, letter recommendations, It was a whole new sensation, it's a high destination But I will still make it, given the chance I will take it I keep it real don't mistake it, Don't have the patience? Then brake it I don't reach for the stars, I reach for the heavens Every success is a present, I always count my blessings Young girl keep ya' head up, your tiara's falling Watch out for the traps, you'll start slippin and fall in Imma do the same, and I won't quit, won't stop, Not until I find my name spit and polished on top. [Hook:Indiella] Opened my eyes and looked in the mirror Cleared the foggy glass, I can finally see clearer Not the same girl who you used to call inferior Oh, oh, oh, oh You always told me that I couldn't do it, "You're never gonna win it so don't put your mind to it" Now I'm on the throne, it's time to admit it Oh, oh, oh oh I'm standing on top of the world, World's my oyster, I'm the pearl We did it, We did it We're standing on top of the world
kenzie12345555
#147396865Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:01 PM GMT

fk outta here
wildwolfkilla
#147396944Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:02 PM GMT

Indiella: 7.5/10 Randy: 8/10 Chanel: 8.5/10
JubrilMD
#147397024Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:03 PM GMT

Kenzie put out a song... wait.. who are you...?
kenzie12345555
#147397523Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:09 PM GMT

KingRoseXI Aka Snoop Clutch Aka The guy that won 3 awards in 1 year Aka Snoopy And "Top Of The World" More like "Top of the hill at the playground"
Indiella
#147397749Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:12 PM GMT

:)
kenzie12345555
#147397804Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:13 PM GMT

Indiellas verse wasn't bad Randy I expect more from you Chanel.. I didn't even think you'd stoop this low.
Wobull
#147398041Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:16 PM GMT

generic lyrics 7/10
JubrilMD
#147398623Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:23 PM GMT

Wait... wereny ou the one who dissed yourself... Dont insult the song if you dont understand it. I apologize if I ddint make it clear enough for you, but the concept of the song was about People over coming their struggle and achieving what they want or need to be at in life- On top Of the world.
ChanelG
#147398686Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:24 PM GMT

Thank you Wild & Wobull, and thanks Kenzie for the very "helpful" feedback.
Wobull
#147398957Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:28 PM GMT

try something different, it's usually the same topic a lot of times
ChanelG
#147399046Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:29 PM GMT

Will do, tyvm.
master0691
#147399365Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:33 PM GMT

I like this. I really do. 8/10 Is this the first single off Randy's Album?
kenzie12345555
#147399556Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:36 PM GMT

I understand the song its just fking ew.
minniem
#147400100Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:44 PM GMT

I agree with Wobull...generic but there's not many topics you could actually DO here, so I won't take points off for that. I've heard a song very similar to this, Idk if this was a remix or not but I'm just ASSUMING it has the same flow as it. Let me know if I'm mistaken. Indiella- 7.5/10, I suggest not putting "oh" because it just seems awkward XD, otherwise that was a very well written hook. RandyMD- 7/10, It looks like you were in some sort of a hurry imo, but I still liked your verses. I have the same question as Master btw. Chanel G- 8/10, TBH...I feel like your verse should've been a little bit longer. Good verse, but not up to the full potential I know you have. OVERALL though I'd rate this a decent 7.5/10. Keep working at it, guys. =)
Indiella
#147400496Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:50 PM GMT

Jubril didn't mention that the song was to a specific beat. Here's the link y'all: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PAz9eXI4wds The "oh oh oh oh" part flows with the remix if ya listen. :) Thanks for the ratings guys btw.
minniem
#147400804Sunday, October 05, 2014 8:54 PM GMT

^ That's the song I was talking about! Okay, that makes things better xD.
streetfighter919
#147406073Sunday, October 05, 2014 10:16 PM GMT

Luve it 10/10!!
XxLionblazexX
#147415749Monday, October 06, 2014 12:38 AM GMT

It's been a long time since I've read a rap. I'm glad these three collaborated and put their minds together to create what they feel. Randy: Rhymes are perfect, and what you are trying to say doesn't quickly commit, but it makes you think until later on. I love how you put the emotions in this. Inspirational. Thumbs up, man. Indie: I love it, I love it, I love it. The way you worded and made it the perfect length. I miss working with you, and I know you are working so hard on your raps, keep up the great work. Respect. Nelly: Chanel, your verses are more than exceptionally amazing. You used yourself to drag in the rhymes, and it was well-matched. Perfect. Overall, you guys did a great job. I have a friendship with all of you. 9.5/10
Indiella
#158885847Sunday, March 29, 2015 4:45 PM GMT

Bump.
XYoungTygaX
#158886115Sunday, March 29, 2015 4:48 PM GMT

8.8/10! Superb I loved it
pringesarenotchips
#158887060Sunday, March 29, 2015 4:57 PM GMT

Thanks for the cancer, Richardwad.
TheUnknownZodiac
#158892994Sunday, March 29, 2015 6:04 PM GMT

Thanks for the cancer, Richardwad.[2] ~Or.gy Maker that's also a drug dealer and a goat.
KinqNovaXL
#158895863Sunday, March 29, 2015 6:38 PM GMT

Smh Chanel is been 2* month's Still waiting on my verse
RainbowPancakess
#159064448Tuesday, March 31, 2015 11:07 PM GMT

Props for remembering what rap (and music in general) is supposed to be about. It's so much more than just stringing together a bunch of words or trying to come up with the sickest diss. You all did a fantastic job with what you wrote. Kept the theme the same throughout everyone's different parts and even though it's a common theme you still made it your own. 8/10

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