WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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Hook:
I put the trap to every name in the game
They try to stand out but they all the same
There ain't no culture, it's what they want you to be
This is what you think when you're W-Trappy
Verse 1:
Trapped in a virtual world where people don't even like me
Where I left my physical connections in agony
Don't know how I'm made up, I need to study anatomy
And now tipping to the side like I'm on the balcony
They keep telling me I need improvement when they ain't better
Guess it's just another pretty boy movement and he's the trend setter
If I don't make it out alive, see that I sent some letters
Made some sacrifices but the prize is an overused rhyme lecture
I'm starting my own legacy, not just another cheap name
Some vacancy so now the domain I've never claimed I take the blame
For the wrong doings we the people together should attain
I'd have to pretend to be a certain person to have me sustained
Now can I compare just a simple game to reality
Did I pay for the fare, no I just tried to have originality
I'm a different person now maybe not a similarity
Getting off of the maze, but I'm just taking a rest temporarily
So extraordinare that they look at me a lil' ordinary
Hook:
I put the trap to every name in the game
They try to stand out but they all the same
There ain't no culture, it's what they want you to be
This is what you think when you're W-Trappy
Verse 2:
I don't have to be lyrical cause you people wouldn't notice
But ain't being modest, I'm just stating the diagnosis
These so called strongest is actually one of the damn lowest
Can't do nothing like when promised he'd be a soloist
I'd rather fall out cause no one's gonna pick me up
Sorry to interrupt but it was just abrupt
Then I can't rhyme because I'm half asleep and half f[ked
Sorry mom but I got a B in my conduct
Excuse me to disrupt, fitting to my relocation
Trying to reconstruct, we should start a corroboration
This ain't no constellation, this is real propagation
They're trying to assimilate me and my population
Y'all are now getting wounded knees cause this a massacre
You'd be doomed history, jot it down your calendar
A tomb mystery, they'd be crying rivers of misery
This my last stand, maybe even my last victory
Outro:
Last victory, heh. Only if I ever won. |
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"I'm starting my own legacy, not just another cheap name" Heard this before, just that line.. |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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I'm sorry if you don't like it, because this is obviously not for good rates.
Just trying to put words out of my mind. |
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even so, I still give this thing a 9.5/10 |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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Dev, I haven't, but where did you find it?
Thanks, though, M4. |
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I think i heard it from Snoop..like week ago, he quoted someone, oh and i give it 8/10. :) |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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I don't think so, I read all of Snoopy's ro-raps. |
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He said it in game, not in song, he was quoting some rorapper/rapper.. :) |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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So, someone alreadt had that line on a song? |
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Maye, idk, i think it was ro-rapper Legacy. |
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TruH4WK13Join Date: 2013-12-21
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I thought it was a sneak diss to Legacy...
9/10 |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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Thanks.
Anymore rates/suggestions?
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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C'mon, anyone?
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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Thanks. |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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Rates? |
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Verse 1 felt more on track
"I'm starting my own legacy, not just another cheap name
Some vacancy so now the domain I've never claimed" is probably the best line
91/100 |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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It was a little wordplay |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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I feel like you used rhyme dictionary for this.. |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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Nah, it's words from my History vocabulary
They're not really big words, but give me an example. |
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If I would too make raps it would be from you inspiring me to do so with your lyrics -claps 9/10 |
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IndiellaJoin Date: 2011-07-15
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"corroboration"
I just feel like a 12 year old wouldn't know what this meant. |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
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I'm taking advanced classes |
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WobullJoin Date: 2014-04-07
Post Count: 8168 |
Bump |
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