CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
Welcome to Codename: Snake unit,
here's the back story:
a war rages on in the Middle East as more and more acsualties, and more soldiers dying and less joining the army. As a last resort the government kidnaps some of the worlds smartest minds and forces them to fight. They also take elite soldiers to fight with them. These men and women are the called: The Snakes. Now, in 2016 you must fight for your life.
Rules:
Ill say if you get shot
You can say YOU get shot but no one else
The Almighty Character Sheet :D
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Elite or Kidnapped:
Bio:
Appearance: (Hair Color, Skin Color, Eye Color, Height)
Ill do example
Name: Erik Richardson
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Elite Soldier
Bio: Applied for army in 2011, ranked up and is expert with Sub-Machine Gun and Grenade
Apprentice: Black Hair, Tanned Skin from desert sun, Bluish Green Eyes, 6,9
@Cheeto accepted |
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
I walk into the commander's office where I was told to go.
"Men, we have some new men and women for you in battle. They are some of the smartest alive and will help you or they will be killed."
(If you are Elite you spawn in this office)
(If you are kidnapped you spawn in a locked room with a coffee machine) |
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
Its a roleplay -______- -.- |
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... and why would they put some high school math teacher on the battlefield?
Add ~650 to my post count. |
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
No its not some average high school math teacher, its some of the smartest people on earth, capable of figuring out intense situation.
Like the guy that invented algebra, not the guy who teaches it. |
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TrudoJoin Date: 2011-12-31 Post Count: 479 |
so he is teaching high school? |
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romuluzJoin Date: 2010-04-12 Post Count: 18124 |
For everyone saying "why would they but a high school teacher in the army".
Show a little respect please? My 8th grade history teacher served as special forces in the 60s and 70s and my senior year science teacher served as a marine during the gulf war.
You can find veterans everywhere my friend.
Now off to the rp. I love the middle eastern setting but the premise is a wee bit generic and the story isn't really all that developed.
I'd suggest leaving out the whole "elite unit" or at the very least try to rename it and put a little less generic back story to it.
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
Ok
Elite Unit: Ok Ill change it to... hmmm... Unit B7: Elite Forces?
Better?
Now about it being generic, this is supposed to be something that is happening in our modern day world, so yes its a bit generic.
The War on Terrorism is still raging on and California, Oregon, and Washington state are destroyed. Less and less people want to be soldiers, and too many are dying, o the military captures the smartest people alive and forces them to use their skills to save america.
That's where you come in as Unit B7: Elite Forcs or "The Snakes"About your teacher, my Language Arts Teacher was in the military too, Expert with a rifle and pistol. He wanted to become a teacher at the Great American Teach-In
Hope you join the rp romuluz
Sincerely, CheetoGo |
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Riku1257Join Date: 2011-08-15 Post Count: 10066 |
wtf is this piece of clart
~2spoopy2liv, 2creppy2di |
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Rom, My uncle served in 'Nam.
Also, my grandmum's two brother's served in Korea and WW2.
One was a mechanic. |
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idunwannaJoin Date: 2014-08-07 Post Count: 3625 |
i have a great uncle who served in D-Day with a flamethrower and won the medal of honor and got onto the show "Sons of Guns" im pretty sure you can google sons of guns flamethrower and see it
WHO WINS NOW? |
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
That's all cool guys, really cool, but is anyone going to join!? |
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
-_- |
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1. Lack of plot
That right there is enough said. |
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
The thing about this roleplay is more plot is revealed during the rp. So join for more plot, but i don't see what else you want. |
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But still
It's basically saying:
"TOO LAZY TO COME UP WITH BCKSTORY"
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CheetoGoJoin Date: 2013-09-25 Post Count: 848 |
(Ok time for backstory if you want more)
Its January 26th, 2015. Johnathan Solano (i know Im using different guy, just pay attention) drove across the Golden Gate Bridge. Meanwhile ISIS had invented an ultimate fog machine and blew up the kiddle of the bridge with no one knowing they were driving off the edge. They then set off a Nuclear Bomb in San Diego. The Nuke wiped out Washington State, Oregon, California, and western Nevada.
To be continued tomorrow I have to go... |
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Rom, My uncle served in 'Nam. - The war that caused everyone to be depressed.
Also, my grandmum's two brother's served in Korea and WW2. - Congratulations.
One was a mechanic. - Why do I care?
My cousin is currently serving in the Military in Afghan, my other cousin did serve. Another cousin served in the military, I don't know about wars. My grandpa served in the Navy.
I don't know the rest. |
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I put the last bit to add on to roms statement about people being vets or something. |
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