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Prometheus laughs yet again, slowly getting used to the current gravity levels as his arm's flamethrower began to morph into a Jackhammer Melee Ranged shotgun, small sensory equipment beginning to form on and in the back of his neck, the pain causing him to grit his teeth and grin, chuckling. . .
The guitar had fully formed in Kerry's hand as a faint glow becomes visible under Anna's jacket, on the upper arm and shoulder areas. The clones with the DJ machines and the accordion both come into view besides Anna, having just rematerialised. Anna began to grit her teeth a little, but she tries to make it not noticeable. |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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I look at Anna.
"So do I start now?" |
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artyummJoin Date: 2012-08-09
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"Sure!" She said happily, her clones nodding.
Prometheus began to scan the entire block for Kerry's position,, beginning to head his way. . .
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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"Alright thne."
I began to strum the guitar, as I hope for more money to come raining in. |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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(Buuuump...) |
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Anna and the clones began to play on their instruments, but Anna stops midway through the playing, looking at the distance with suspicion, thinking she heard a laugh from that direction. . .
Prometheus would be closing in on Kerry's position, chuckling. . . |
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Kerry continued to play, as he got closer to Anna. |
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Name: Mya Picone
Age: 16
Gender:female
Appearance: brown hair in a pony tail peach with skin and freckles, she wears glasses, a green shirt
Abilities: she is smart, she has good memory (is that what you meant by abilities)
Power(s):Telepathy(doing things to other peoples minds(mind control, giving headaches, Ext), Telekinesis(moving things with you mind)(is standing on things and lifting them with telekinesis, picking you up, referred as flight)
Bio/History: She was in high school when she has the experiment happen, she didn't care what happened to her. She was hated by about everyone. when she heard about the experience she just volunteered. When figuring out she could do things with her mind she knew what to do...use it...she didn't do the experiment to be "special", she did it to hoping something would go wrong...nothing did. Besides the powers.
Other: SuperHuman
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CoriandrJoin Date: 2014-06-25
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Declined.
First and foremost, not to be rude, but to be honest, you're writing just sucks. Improve upon it; more grammar, punctuation, etc., more detail; "a green shirt"? She always wears a green shirt? It's just a bit meh overall.
Secondly, telekinesis is acceptable, while telepathy is not. It's just too OP, somebody already tried to take it and I turned them down as well.
And, thirdly, - not really a reason not to accept, but rather a question, - what is this "experiment" you're talking about?
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artyummJoin Date: 2012-08-09
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Anna Doesn't take notice of Kerry moving towards her as she continues to look down the street, "Hnn. . ."
Prometheus would be visible as he began to sprint through the streets, grinning as he shouts, "HERE COMES THE PAIN TRAIIIIIN!!!" |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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Kerry saw the bodybuilder with oversized muscles coming at him. What should he sacrifice? Himself? Or Anna? He decided to drop his acoustic guitar and run away at the direction that bodybuilder is moving at. |
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Name: Mya Picone
Age: 16
Gender:Female
Appearance: Brown hair in a pony tail peach with skin and freckles, she wears glasses, a green Shirt with a blue skirt and black slippers
Abilities: she is smart, she has good memory (is that what you meant by abilities)
Power(s): Telekinesis(moving things with you mind)(is standing on things and lifting them with telekinesis, picking you up, referred as flight).
Bio/History: She was in high school when she has the experiment happen. She didn't care what happened to her. She was hated by about everyone. When she heard about the experiment she just volunteered. When figuring out she could lift things with her mind she knew what to do...Use it...She didn't do the experiment to be "special". She did it to hoping something would go wrong...Nothing did. Besides the powers...
Other: Superhuman, I will try to improve my writing, and by the experiment I meant when people were tested with the radiation. |
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CoriandrJoin Date: 2014-06-25
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Nobody has been tested with the radiation. All the radiation was a freak accident, nobody was experimented on.
Anyway, -ish accepted, I guess. Maybe try to add a little more detail, take some in-direct advice(As in, not specifically stated) from some of us.
Oh, and best trait to a good roleplayer: Accept criticism. Any form, as long as it's not obviously a troll.
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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(Alright. Is it time for the Rinny plot arc?) |
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CoriandrJoin Date: 2014-06-25
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Maybz
Wait until tomorrow, I gotta go to bed.
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simsf1Join Date: 2009-12-27
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((So is Prometheus still near the bank?)) |
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artyummJoin Date: 2012-08-09
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(Nope, at least 3-5 blocks away at this point I believe. . .)
Prometheus runs past Anna as she looks at him curiously, going for Kerry instead. |
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Kerry lowered his gravity to 0 He began to rise in the air and airswam into the clouds. |
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artyummJoin Date: 2012-08-09
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He stops far below Kerry, staring up to the sky as he tries to scan for his location in the air using his SONAR Implant. . . |
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Aeron has been following the criminal. The Aerokinetic's presence might show on Prometheus's SONAR, but Aeron has no idea about this. McLaughin stays quietly to the side, waiting for him to act. |
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Kerry gasped and airswam faster into the clouds. A few seconds later, he was already on top of the clouds. |
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He began to laugh loudly, another, weaker but longer ranged auto-shotgun shooting out of Prometheus's augmented arm as he catches it, suddenly firing a hail of shotgun pellets at Aeron, Anna going in front of him and blocks the blasts using a focused aether shield, gritting her teeth hard, mumbling, "Why can't you just run saga way already?!" |
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'Well,' Aeron figured, 'at least I didn't strike first.'
The following transition might have seemed instant to the naked eye, as Aeron propelled himself over the two and repeated his kinetic air-flick, providing a powerful, focused force into Prometheus's side. |
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marc12267Join Date: 2008-11-25
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Kerry heard distant fighting, which is coming from below. He knew it. Which person to lower the gravity? Anna? Or that stereotype? |
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simsf1Join Date: 2009-12-27
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((I do not think the word 'stereotype' means what you think it means.)) |
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