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GrandHarbinger
#152192184Monday, December 22, 2014 8:12 PM GMT

The Scouts Of Halmar – Episode 1 When Halmar began there was no need for spies or scouts because of the infinite peace radiating around them, but as time grew on more and more uprisings happened and that is when they were first formed. South Shore was under siege and the guards were unprepared for such an attack great trebuchets wheeled in and bombarded the towers where the archers and watchmen where sending them toppling over the walls any supplies and reinforcements were at least a day away and Lord Malakheim was getting worried if his defence failed now them Halmar would be lost forever in the grips of the enemy. Though Reidus Malakheim thought he would loose he was a smart man and decided that since he couldn’t stay within he had better get outside of the walls and disable the trebuchets so he started his attack with just a singular group of swords men all fine Cecirs, Bloodingnitors and all in between he was sure this attack would win and they charged at the foes screaming the most deafening noises at his enemies what more could he ask for as this was not even his full army he looked away smirking then suddenly heard another rattle shake the castle he looked outside and saw a smashed head of his leader in that attack flung over his walls he looked upon where the trebuchets should have been destroyed instead he found an army of dead soldiers from his side all lying dead on the floor that was when he saw an army five times the size of his own standing in a defensive position by the trebuchet. Reidus being born in the forest was also a man of stealth and decided upon finding the stealthiest of all his men he started with Ragnar Örjansgård best bowman in Halmar and a good spy and tactician as well as a few others. Over night he and his men crossed the border and stole enemy uniforms and pretended to be within their ranks then had the trebuchet aim at the enemies men after that they ran and told the enemy guards camp that they were going to open up the gates which they did. Suddenly the enemies cheered and fired the trebuchet which landed in the centre of their army destroying the largest amount of it so the Halmarians flooded in and took the scene and had a nice lot of prisoners. The next day the reinforcements arrived and the Lord asked if they would rather stop being the scouts and live normally but of course the scouts hated that idea and became a loyal special division of Halmar.
zoako
#152192739Monday, December 22, 2014 8:20 PM GMT

cool story bro
Ulrond
#152239350Tuesday, December 23, 2014 9:39 AM GMT

Not bad William, but you could work on adding paragraphs and sentence structure.

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