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Zawie
#152933076Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:03 PM GMT

It's a 2D game and I only have about the first 8 levels done. It's singleplayer but we will stay in a party. I just need an opinion and some ideas. This game can be frustrating bc the commentator is lieing to you http://www.roblox.com/Victums-Escape-WIP-place?id=197020211 I'll remove the price thing when I get like 3 people in a party then we'll go Post if you want in ^.^
LegendaryAccount
#152933214Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:05 PM GMT

I was going to then I seen the price then naw no price or no help
Zawie
#152933293Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:06 PM GMT

lol read the end? I send no price once i get enough testers which is like three >.<
Zawie
#152933370Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:07 PM GMT

ugh nvm that's confusing just i removed the price
LegendaryAccount
#152933797Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:11 PM GMT

the game breaks at space to jump
Zawie
#152933962Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:13 PM GMT

Nada. Get the clue? You gotta press J It's hinted it goes Press space bar to J (like 1 second) ump
DeepBlueNoSpace
#152934321Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:17 PM GMT

It's Victims
Zawie
#152934850Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:23 PM GMT

nuh Victum's Escape Victum is latin for prisoner
GodShowsTheWay
#152935191Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:27 PM GMT

what language are you speaking????
FauxSundew
#152935546Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:31 PM GMT

I like the story, cool game
Zawie
#152935895Wednesday, December 31, 2014 11:34 PM GMT

Thanks :D I'm go ahead and add like another 30 level ^.^
Zerio920
#152941848Thursday, January 01, 2015 12:47 AM GMT

Glitch, sometimes the beginning gate doesn't open after moving around. Also, the controls are pretty confusing. For one thing, the voice talking to you gives you false information, and while that's probably the theme of the game, there's nothing in game that hints you that this guy is spreading lies. So some players might just be left clueless.
Zerio920
#152942261Thursday, January 01, 2015 12:52 AM GMT

For some suggestions, the voice shouldn't tell you that you're doing something wrong until after you disobey it. When you explode after doing what it tells you to do, the voice will still ask you why you're disobeying it and why you're not doing what it's saying even after you do everything it tells you to. I suggest having the dialogue skip to the next line when you press a key or do something it doesn't tell you to do instead of being on a timer.
Zerio920
#152942542Thursday, January 01, 2015 12:56 AM GMT

Also, in the bit where you're trapped in the cage and the voice tells you it's the end, he tells you to go right, which ends up being the right way to go. That seems to be the only instance in which the voice actually ends up helping you, which is pretty confusing. Consistency is a game's best friend.
Zawie
#152945423Thursday, January 01, 2015 1:31 AM GMT

@Zerio Ah great Idea. I don't know why i didn't thing of that >.< I implented your Idea to like 1,3 and 7 and other direction stuffs Pretty much i made it so that if you press WASD on level one after he says arrow keys he'lll be like "I SAID ARROW KEYS FOOL" and 3 (With the jump thing) if you press J he says "WHAT? I SAID SPACE BAR!" Thanks for the idea :3

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