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Prolouge
I sat on the street,ripped clothes,watching people pass me by."What do,what to do.."I stood up and walk to the woods."Hmm"A black shadow appeared,a red X in its chest."What the..The shadow leaped at me,i took out a wooden stick from a tree.
As I grabbed the stick,its turned into a key."What the...."I slammed the thing with the key,and it faded away.."How in the .....?"
More of the things jumped out,and I just swiped at them. |
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Please rate and if you want,join,i will post the main story line after atleast one rating. |
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justin44Join Date: 2008-05-26
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UBERLY AWSEOM and can i join the epicness |
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Orlly??? XD yea,couple more peeps |
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justin44Join Date: 2008-05-26
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um....Zahq |
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Kay
Chapter 1: Finding Hope.
I wonder through town,thinking about what happend in the woods.I bump into the some kid about the same as me."Hey! Watch it!" The kid says."Sorry,I'm Vanare."I say."Im Zahq,the kid says.
I start to move on,then time stops except for me and Zahq."Wow.." |
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justin44Join Date: 2008-05-26
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Still epic |
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I stare,then 3 18 year olds,thats what they looked like,appeared around us.Keys appeared in our hands."0.o""Join Org. XXIII"THe man says."No!"I blurt out.
The men attack,one witha ring shaped sword,one with a guitar,and one with a regular sword.I leap as one attacks me."Zahq!!Whats happening??!?!" |
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justin44Join Date: 2008-05-26
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im gonna put a link to this on OT |
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GrolalaTop 50 PosterJoin Date: 2007-11-09
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XD Lol...Lets see...(Im only gonna say the first letter of their name :3) A , D , and S? (I dunt want to spoil it :D) |
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Just one thing. you can't have two different people talk in the same paragraph. It has to be like:
John said, "I don't think we should go that way."
Sarah turned to look at him, "What do you mean?" |
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:D
Chapter 2:No hope.
I sat there,tied up."Awww...I had homework..""Shut up...." Zahq said."WHAT DO YOU WANT!!" The man replied;"We want you,Sora."H-How do you know my name?"
"We know..."I sigh,not the best answer."Join Organization 13."I sigh."NO!!" |
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My three fav Org XXII members: Axel,Roxas,Xemnas. |
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GrolalaTop 50 PosterJoin Date: 2007-11-09
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MOSTLY everyone likes Axel X3 |
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XoronXXTop 100 PosterJoin Date: 2009-03-22
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can juu put me in :3 |
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Hes awesumes..u wunna join,if so,whuts ur name?" |
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GrolalaTop 50 PosterJoin Date: 2007-11-09
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I have many characters...My main is Gigi though ;3 |
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;3
I sit there,gaping."How am I gunna get out...."A girl burst through the door,wielding a key."HOW THE HELL DO I HAVE THIS????"I stare at her,then the three guys turn to her,and i somehow break the ropes and wield a black key."oo.." |
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XoronXXTop 100 PosterJoin Date: 2009-03-22
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Can juuuu put me in >.<
Niokos :D |
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Then a kid follows the girl."...." more of the men appear,13 of them."I run next to the kids."I am Vanare."The girl Says,"Im Gigi."The guy says,"Im Niokos."
I stare at the keys in theere hands."Wow.."I turn the the men.I fall backwards,staring at the blonde one(Roxas). |
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O hai plz add me.My name is Luma and I want to be an evil character >=D good story by the way! |
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XoronXXTop 100 PosterJoin Date: 2009-03-22
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Oh and make it so my char. becomes a traitor in the end >:] |
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XD
A fourteenth appears,,same as the others,a blade.I wake up and the smaller onegrabs me."WHO AM I?"My mind goes blank.And i appear in his body."...." |
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