Rise & Fall - Indiella

Indiella

Join Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603

#156404598Friday, February 20, 2015 10:33 PM GMT

"but still, if you need help anytime, im always here" Thanks so much, 92. That means a lot. :)

llPreston9911ll

Join Date: 2014-03-28
Post Count: 2294

#156405860Friday, February 20, 2015 10:47 PM GMT

could be better 7.5/10 good job, you been doing great lately

Indiella

Join Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603

#156406159Friday, February 20, 2015 10:51 PM GMT

"could be better 7.5/10" I totally agree, I didn't spend as much time on this song as I should have tbh. "good job, you been doing great lately" Thanks! :)

llPreston9911ll

Join Date: 2014-03-28
Post Count: 2294

#156406356Friday, February 20, 2015 10:53 PM GMT

my pleasure

xTrillxImagesx

Join Date: 2011-05-23
Post Count: 534

#156562078Sunday, February 22, 2015 9:24 PM GMT

9/10

iiLxuren

Join Date: 2012-07-03
Post Count: 34

#156567409Sunday, February 22, 2015 10:34 PM GMT

im using your first 3 lines for my chorus :P

TheUnknownZodiac

Join Date: 2012-06-28
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#156569735Sunday, February 22, 2015 11:03 PM GMT

Really dope, second verse was better rhyme scheme vise, doe, first verse had simple end rhymes, second actually had a decent rhyme scheme, loved the metaphores, it has a depressing feeling to it that alot of people can relate to, so i'd give it a 9/10, only cause of simple rhyme scheme at the first verse.. gl with getting better doe.

Indiella

Join Date: 2011-07-15
Post Count: 2603

#156575262Monday, February 23, 2015 12:18 AM GMT

@Devilish. Thanks :) @Lxuren. I didn't give you permission tho.. O_O