Half a heart - Roblox Forum Archive

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#156232279Wednesday, February 18, 2015 1:37 AM GMT

You f***ing slammed the door in my face. Damned to hell, how could you embrace me before, and you tore my heart into pieces, threw me out like I'm just a spare part. So how about we start with how I'm dead, I'm lying on the bed with a bullet in my head, my shirt is stained red, I bled, wait, I'm alive, my heart full of great hate. So I grabbed a backpack, put a roll of duct tape and a nine, then ran down the fire escape. Revenge is all that I seek, I'm avenging myself, I was weak, But now I'm strong and angry, You did me wrong, b****, and I'm hungry for justice. Going to start some ruckus. Walk up to house, peek through the window. Your buttoning you blouse, mystique, i continue. Waiting for you to put your head on the pillow, Then I walked through the door, ready to attack, I explore the floor, leaving dirt tracks. Then I creep into your bed room, your angelic face hiding that devil you assume. Take the tape, wrap it around your mouth, the one you kissed me with, The fear in your eyes, are you trying to shout? You writhed. Hit her with my knuckle, let out a little chuckle. Throw her in my trunk, next to all my junk. How could I ever love you, you worthless s***. Nothing you said was true! So I shut my trunk and start to drive. I never felt so alive. It like five. Stop at the river, the water roars with pain. The cold made me shiver, but I'm insane. It's begging me to throw you in. So I open the trunk and begin. I kick your bruised torso, I feel no remorse, I love your screams, pleading for me to stop, streams of tears flowing, but I don't care, I don't give a s*** about your despair. So I take my axe and start to hack, Start to hack your back in half. Slowly I remove every limb, Hope you can swim, Throw the pieces of your body in the sack, And toss it into the river, this is how I get back. But I remembered to take and keep you heart, because you stole mine.

lunafanplace

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#156232965Wednesday, February 18, 2015 1:46 AM GMT

Stop.

Indiella

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#156234051Wednesday, February 18, 2015 2:00 AM GMT

............ now I'm not gonna go on my feminist mode but yo....................................... this is NOT okay :((

Indiella

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#156234131Wednesday, February 18, 2015 2:01 AM GMT

He sayin' half a heart when hes sittin here choppin her limbs off..You ain't got a heart boy :((

shades1256

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#156235782Wednesday, February 18, 2015 2:20 AM GMT

Deep meaning, rhymes were ok. 7\10

TixxTheRapper

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#156238975Wednesday, February 18, 2015 2:53 AM GMT

After the first few lines I thought this was good, but then I read the rest. Sorry dog, this is whack.

DustonKunoi

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#156261683Wednesday, February 18, 2015 4:40 PM GMT

7.5 for the rap towards the midel you lost me with the rhyms but for the meaning and story you stayed in detail and on track thats not easy to do so overall this rap to me is a 8

Yadoking

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#156273235Wednesday, February 18, 2015 8:46 PM GMT

Fact: You would not be able to live with half a heart :I

lunafanplace

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#156274272Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:03 PM GMT

@Jingle Naw, Grinch lived with half a heart... Size. This is what the devil plays before he goes to sleep, some food for thought, some food for death, go ahead and [Cencored] eat.

bunnybun8

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#156275381Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:17 PM GMT

This is messed up wtf? A song about beating a woman WTF?

awesomejuan36912

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#156275442Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:18 PM GMT

stop just stawp

lunafanplace

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#156276680Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:34 PM GMT

I didn't read it all, but, I think it may be about a break-up and his releasing of anger, only in this song he kills and beats the women @person-who-said-this-was-a-song-about-beating-women. Either way, it's still pretty bad. lel This is what the devil plays before he goes to sleep, some food for thought, some food for death, go ahead and [Cencored] eat.

bunnybun8

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#156277117Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:40 PM GMT

Still you don't write songs about murdering and beating a woman.

lunafanplace

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#156277538Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:45 PM GMT

Eminem, and alot of people have wrote songs about that specific topic in general. I don't have a problem with it, unless it's reenacted by the same person who wrote it. Otherwise it's nothing but poetry, no matter bad, or violent poetry, but, still poetry. Freedom of expression and writing are great things, and a great release of anger and different emotions. I don't agree with the overall subject of this, but, I mean, as long as the dude isn't actually beating on his ex and stuff, I don't care. This is what the devil plays before he goes to sleep, some food for thought, some food for death, go ahead and [Cencored] eat.

bunnybun8

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#156277675Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:47 PM GMT

Another reason why rap is bad.

lunafanplace

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#156277906Wednesday, February 18, 2015 9:50 PM GMT

Rap isn't the only thing that this is displayed in. Pumped Up Kicks is about a f*king kid shooting up a school and the kids with the "pumped up kicks". Once my friend Alice showed me a song *forgot name* that was highly not at all rap based on real life events of people dressing up as clowns and murdering kids in their sleep. Like. Rap isn't the only thing known for violence. So, don't try to use the "this is why rap is bad" excuse here because this is in all genre's. This is what the devil plays before he goes to sleep, some food for thought, some food for death, go ahead and [Cencored] eat.