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Indiella
#157444832Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:01 PM GMT

It's a four-verse song so it's a bit long to read, I get that. I tried to make it as short as possible but still get the point across. Since the song is long, I had to lap the instrumental so I apologize for you having to skip to several different parts. ---------------------------------- Beat: http://gotinstrumentals.com/singles/NickiMinaj-TheCryingGameInstrumental-326396.htm [Verse 1] 0:13 Bell rang from the school, call rang from her cell Every day that was over, thank God they didn't yell The air was so tight, how the tension was felt "We're just discussing," was a phrase I knew too well But the days that they fought, I ran into my room Took my little Minnie and hid us both in a cocoon Put Coldplay on repeat, I'd press pause then I'd resume These other girls were handed silver when I was given the greasy spoon [Pre-Chorus (young girl's voice)] 0:37 "Are they done, did she finally lose? Oh it only begun? My God, what did they do Was that a glass, was mommy hurt? Is this the last, did she pull a Kurt?" [Kurt Cobain] [Chorus] 1:00 This is so, old school Please stop, acting cruel Here they go, being bold Can you stop, it's getting old! Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh Go back to two-thousand, Go back to two-thousand, Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh Go back to two-thousand, 2009 [Post-Chorus x2] 1:35 The tears just won't end, The wounds I'm trying to mend, Go back to two-thousand, 2009 [Verse 2] 2:02 They always were yelling even if a friend came over You bet I was wishing on stars, I was picking four leaf clovers Wishing one day the fighting would end, would come to a closure I know they're tired and all outta lives, just call it game over But no they was never arguing, they'd call it "discussing" Since when did discussing involve slammed doors and cussing? Since when did it involve her saying words so disgusting? Since when did it involve me feeling like nothing? They say the grass is always greener on the other side, No wonder I was always staying by my mother's side Ever since his arms closed hers were open wide He moved back to Florida and brushed me aside As I snuck around the corner, quiet as a mouse I was tryin so hard not to open my mouth But as I was about to, that's when things headed south And I heard the 4 words, "Get out my house" - small pause- [Pre-Chorus (young girl's voice)] 2:49 "Are they done, did she finally lose? Oh it only begun? My God, what did they do Was that a glass, was mommy hurt? Is this the last, did she pull a Kurt?" [Chorus] 3:12 This is so, old school Please stop, acting cruel Here they go, being bold Can you stop, it's getting old! Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh Go back to two-thousand, Go back to two-thousand, Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh Go back to two-thousand, 2009 [Post-Chorus x2] 3:48 The tears just won't end, The wounds I'm trying to mend, Go back to two-thousand, 2009 [Verse 3] 2:02 Bell rang from the school, call rang from her cell Every day that we've been over, nobody would yell They're getting along better, I think the move did well They've had time to sit, think, reflect, and dwell Now the tension is gone, the foggy clouds have faded All the sins have left, God it all was so jaded No more angry words, no one was degraded "Will you move back in?" Is what she now persuaded I'm so glad we're all getting along, we left the fighting zone No more back-bending arrows, no more shots being thrown The friendships were mutual, the relationship had grown Thank you, God, that we finally left the fighting zone [Bridge x2] 2:49 Who-o-o-oh, Who-o-o-oh, Gp back to two-thousand, 2009 [Verse 4] 2:02 January twenty-fifth, it was twenty-twelve Been a good three years since the escape from Hell Mom and grandma are best friends, glad all is well The bell rang from the school, my call rang from her cell Didn't answer the phone, two hours I called again But she still didn't answer, it was just 4 PM Played it off as if she was out, I didn't complain Until it was 8 that Wednesday and the ring still remained So we drove to her house, passed all of the stores Saw people walkin in and out with [s] they didn't pay for, This place got sketchy at night, that was for sure I saw the house lights weren't on, so I rushed to the door Her car was outside the house, her 2002 Toyota TV shone against her eyes, body propped up on the sofa Saw my little Minnie on her lap looking at her in dismay "Oh, she's just asleep" I said and went to turn away But my mom didn't see her breathe, didn't hear her snore I went to look at the time, is was 9:34 I turned around again to face the woman I adored But when I looked at her, my knees dropped dead to the floor I saw my Minnie on her lap looking at her in confusion Her skin was pale and clammy, she didn't look human Her breath wasn't felt and her chest wasn't movin' Is this all just dream or is this all an illusion? [Chorus x2] 3:12 This is so, old school Please stop, acting cruel Here they are, being bold Can you stop, it's getting old! Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh We're back to two-thousand, 2009 Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh We're back to two-thousand, 2009 [Outro (young girl's voice)] I miss you grandma.
XYoungTygaX
#157445004Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:03 PM GMT

Catchy 8.8/10!
Icyclez
#157445219Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:06 PM GMT

This is actually pretty good. I really like this. Wait scratch that not pretty good this is fantastic actually. 10/10 Do things like this more often, cause this was great.
Indiella
#157445817Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:14 PM GMT

Thanks guys!
TruH4WK13
#157447200Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:33 PM GMT

0/0 <----- That's eequivalent to 10/10 Liked it a lot
basechad1234
#157447347Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:35 PM GMT

This is a 3 minute song, Indiellanati confirmed!1!1!1!1
Earlko
#157447405Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:36 PM GMT

someone doesn't know how fractions work...
TruH4WK13
#157447468Sunday, March 08, 2015 5:37 PM GMT

Lmao
LeCanadianDude
#157449997Sunday, March 08, 2015 6:08 PM GMT

Amazing verses, one of the best songs i've seen so far. 9/10
MetrixVEVO
#157450094Sunday, March 08, 2015 6:09 PM GMT

Hit me up for a collaboration on , "Orlando".
KingHurrican3
#157451983Sunday, March 08, 2015 6:35 PM GMT

Hit me up on East Coast Ghost before I sl1t somebody else's throat c:
Gethype111
#157453938Sunday, March 08, 2015 7:00 PM GMT

9/10 Nice job!
Indiella
#157455379Sunday, March 08, 2015 7:17 PM GMT

Thank you everyone and I'll think about collabs soon.
Indiella
#157466805Sunday, March 08, 2015 9:41 PM GMT

Bump.
LonelyTree
#157470436Sunday, March 08, 2015 10:29 PM GMT

this is some cringy stuff 'This is so, old school Please stop, acting cruel Here they go, being bold Can you stop, it's getting old! Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh Go back to two-thousand, Go back to two-thousand, Whoh-oh-oh-oh, whoh-oh-oh-oh Go back to two-thousand, 2009'
Indiella
#157470772Sunday, March 08, 2015 10:32 PM GMT

If you heard the song the beat is to, aka The Crying Game by Nicki Minaj, you'd understand that the chorus in my song was to the beat of the chorus to hers.
Supreme_Kevin
#157476777Sunday, March 08, 2015 11:53 PM GMT

"These other girls were handed silver when I was given the greasy spoon" > Lives in suburban area, middle class in America.
Indiella
#157477177Sunday, March 08, 2015 11:59 PM GMT

Just because you live in a middle-class area doesn't take away the pain of seeing your two guardians fighting all the time. That line wasn't even about being middle classed, it was about families who have both parents that never argue. I had my mom and my grandma who argued a lot. Be informed before you make an opinion.
Supreme_Kevin
#157478603Monday, March 09, 2015 12:17 AM GMT

Oh boy! Your mom and grandma argued alot! Wow! What a struggle!
PUSH5
#157479317Monday, March 09, 2015 12:26 AM GMT

all parents argue
Indiella
#157486300Monday, March 09, 2015 1:52 AM GMT

"Oh boy! Your mom and grandma argued alot! Wow! What a struggle!" Idk why you have to be an ass about everything. Accept the song as it is, this is how I felt. I don't care about how you feel about it.
TixxTheRapper
#157486799Monday, March 09, 2015 1:58 AM GMT

I've got a ton of respect for your lyrics, but I feel this song is too repetitive. The verses were too short, and there is honestly no need to do a prechorus, and a postchorus, in my opinion. I feel like this would be a hard song to listen to, honestly. But as far as lyrical content, good job!
Indiella
#157486968Monday, March 09, 2015 1:59 AM GMT

Thank you Tixx! The only reason why I did the song like this (pre-chorus, short verses, post-chorus, etc) is because the original artist, Nicki Minaj, did so herself and I didn't want to mess up the beat by not doing so.
TixxTheRapper
#157487404Monday, March 09, 2015 2:05 AM GMT

Right, that's understandable. Do you produce your music in real life? Like audio, or just trying to get a start here?
japandroid
#157487471Monday, March 09, 2015 2:06 AM GMT

you still do this? why dont you just make actual music already

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