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justin12paddy
#158568557Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:27 PM GMT

I don't envy you, your nothing new, infact I'm being friendly to you, I'ma attend to your funeral, laugh and dance all over your grave, spit some [S] Even make you quit this game, gonna make you lose it I'm on top of this summit, Commit the crime, you was my prime, what do you need some extra time? This is just like your nursery rhyme, I'ma give you some relaxation time, Nope, [F] that [S] as you said I should be praying, but why are you concussing, Please don't be abandoning this game, because I'm just activating, Your [BS] is just annoying, infact your just amusing, reading these essays, Meet me in the alleys, your just like the strays, you must love them g[]ys, Let some good people teach you how to write some bars,[B] just look up to the stars, Kiddo probably in a couple of years, you might just see some scars, I'm just changing gears, Just let me go to reverse, my words are just like a curse, why can I see your corpse? Let me just go bury that [S], this rhyme will get benefit you, May thou please go and shoot himself, Got all your discs on my shelf, just looking for the lighter, A little eager are you? Its not even easter, so why am I getting these absolute [S] presents? Go and carry on advertising yourself. but after this song you will be absent for a long time, Infact you should be just like no comment, its just like an advent, a suprise after each door, Your behaviour is getting better, even getting authenticator, your just an actor, stealing some [S] I'm in Bangor, waiting for your P[]ssy []ss gang, why are you wearing some armour? I've got the Excalibur, your just there waiting on the hour, your rhymes are so sour So please and stop with your [S] , actually I'll just get the last seven digits from your mother within an hour.
justin12paddy
#158568658Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:28 PM GMT

Ratings?
DXZ0MBI3117
#158568776Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:30 PM GMT

Metrix beat you, there's hardly a single rhyme here but your last 2 bars
TheUnknownZodiac
#158568803Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:30 PM GMT

Bad/10. not saying cause im mentoring Metrix, this was sh[]t. btw. you stole a lil of KHs work. second bar dancing and sh[]t on funreal. ~Or.gy Maker that's also a drug dealer and a goat.
justin12paddy
#158568824Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:30 PM GMT

@Kinq not every rhyme is at the end of an sentence.
justin12paddy
#158568858Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:31 PM GMT

@Devilish Never even heard of him. Also if I did thats my bad.
lunafanplace
#158568963Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:33 PM GMT

The rhymes are present, but presented very basically - in two ways. 1. The rhymes in general are basic 2. The scheme to this is put together very simply. Maybe a 4.5/10 I won't say who won, because I haven't even seen Metrix's nor do I really care. I clicked this randomly because it was on the front page. I'm bored.
OsirinKing
#158569240Tuesday, March 24, 2015 9:37 PM GMT


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