Hell nah kid, what I want you to do is quit tryin so hard to come up with bad raps.
Take 10 minutes, actually work a couple lyrics through. Take another 10 minutes and read over em, revise em, make them better if you can. Once you're satisfied with a line move on to the next one.
Ain't nobody impressed with all you wannabe ro-rappers going around and dissin one another, tryna talk a big game but can't deliver. You want people to recognize you, you gotta start acting like someone worth recognizing.
Put some effort into your work instead of this generic crap and maybe you can have something goin for you.
That's my own two cents anyways, take it as you will. |