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Rootling
#159575243Monday, April 06, 2015 10:19 PM GMT

Instrumental :: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4OJiYrxMny8 Mind brighter than Glow sticks when you Pop killer instinct With that one chick I don't go H.A.M., I Only go O.C.E.A.N. Overly Califragilistic Expi Alidocious Notion Of flows easily Regulated with Accordance of osmosis And with that I feel I'm the Perplex-est of poets With a tolerance for bad raps As opened as closed fists Best to bet your bottom dollar I coast with the eye posted Within the pyramid on the backs Of legal tender - And so I'm Occasionally greener than The attire of Earth benders "Finna be the Riddler" Even when I'm bluer from the Usual one or two Dudes that have trouble Comprehending my moves like Reprehensible moods one Would usually read through Entering rooms where the Auras are brood.
JorDandere
#159576546Monday, April 06, 2015 10:32 PM GMT

Raptor Reviews :: JRaptor +Analysis -Great references all around -The rhyme scheme was advanced -Flowed pretty nicely when read aloud -The beat syncs well with what was written +Total Scores ~Verse 1 -10/10 ~Verse 2 -7.4/10 +Comments -Never thought I'd say this to a 'Ro-Rapper' but keep it up > Hnnnngh!
TheUnknownZodiac
#159577206Monday, April 06, 2015 10:40 PM GMT

9.6/10 man, this is actually really dope.
Wobull
#159578871Monday, April 06, 2015 10:59 PM GMT

aye jordan weren't you a "ro-rapper" before? correct me if i'm wrong, though.
JorDandere
#159579119Monday, April 06, 2015 11:01 PM GMT

Aye, I was when it wasn't as bad as it is now and people were more accepting of it.
Rootling
#159616470Tuesday, April 07, 2015 4:20 PM GMT

Thanks for the feedback guys, big ups!
JordanMokin
#159637885Tuesday, April 07, 2015 9:42 PM GMT

Hmm...
PUSH5
#159642149Tuesday, April 07, 2015 10:28 PM GMT

hey you're back
pringesarenotchips
#159644281Tuesday, April 07, 2015 10:50 PM GMT

A rap that's not trying to be edgy by putting unneeded swears, not cancer
TheUnknownZodiac
#159646235Tuesday, April 07, 2015 11:10 PM GMT

^Heeey ;-; did u even see mine, i dont even swear ;-;..well i compared myself to 2 serial killers but..thats for a diffrent story, plus i recorded it ;-; But this was really dope tho.
Rootling
#160281057Thursday, April 16, 2015 4:22 PM GMT

Much respect everyone!
Rootling
#160341336Friday, April 17, 2015 5:14 PM GMT

I could use more ratings on this one fam.

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