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LozKidBay
#160086252Monday, April 13, 2015 12:04 PM GMT

Verse 1 Teachers come to the door with a warrant, Cause lets be honest, whats more important? Make jokes no stress, love, live life proceed progress. And that's all honest you rap nonsense , Im not really a rapper im more an artist. Hide in the darkness, Came collected me from school in a cab went and seen. Only a teen, could have been the next prom queen. Verse 2 I'll smack you up with words, instead of cutting my heart in half, you cut it in thirds, the prodigy as me. It kills me inside and i know you can see, Im the only prodigy, these tendencies that's consciously, its another flaw in my design, Defecting aint got no protection, he's like an affection. Verse 3 It's the return of the king. There's still so many places i haven't been, I might just, spread like virus, the lyrics will cause a crisis, I'm the computer, the king of devices, My rhymes strangle rappers which is , why they're called choke artist. I'm the real savage. Verse 4 My flow is pure power, I step out of the shower in about one hour, money power respect, everything i know. So look out now, while the legend starts to grow. When you see me you think of the flash, running laps around you so fast, physical time on this earth short, but my legend will last.
TheUnknownZodiac
#160088674Monday, April 13, 2015 1:52 PM GMT

Call me suprised, this is actually not horrible, you should leave Loz tbh.. Make verses longer too, try making better bars too, like fill them with wordplays, punchlines, metaphores, instead of just focusing on rhyming, even tho its important.
LozKidBay
#160094852Monday, April 13, 2015 5:02 PM GMT

Well thanks it means alot. and alright ill do that.
LozAngelesJr
#160101719Monday, April 13, 2015 7:35 PM GMT

;o, I'm actually suprised, gg LozKid, U Should be a legend, In the future.
UniversalDanger
#160105625Monday, April 13, 2015 8:39 PM GMT

LKB!
OsirinKing
#160105934Monday, April 13, 2015 8:44 PM GMT

This makes me proud that I know to mentor. LKB , T Dope & BKLYN Flight are Hustle Center Records future.
BlazingLines
#160118897Monday, April 13, 2015 11:38 PM GMT

Nice dude
pittsy1
#160227284Wednesday, April 15, 2015 7:25 PM GMT

Not bad. 7.5/10
Chichland
#160237088Wednesday, April 15, 2015 9:56 PM GMT

You must look like a well dried raisin if you were in the shower for that long..

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