Why are you turning to me for help?
'Eh, anyway.
I think, as of now, you've improved drastically from when you first came to RP
Your writing in particular is much better
I haven't seen any of your most recent RPs, however, so I'm not in a position to tell you exactly what needs improving
But, if you'd link me to a couple, I'd be happy to give you a bit of advice and/or criticism
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