Let's redo this sh*t

poisondart59

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#164718704Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:31 AM GMT

My grammar isn't THAT bad. And also,if the roleplay I set up is SO BAD,what does a GOOD roleplay look like?

bebithetuffle

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#164718814Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:32 AM GMT

Plots and features and everything that this doesn't have.

PickachuGirl

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#164718964Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:34 AM GMT

this is entertaining to watch

LED_ZEPPELlN

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#164719054Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:35 AM GMT

I'll just give an example on how it should look in the actual roleplay-wise. Your way: -is confronting a victim- ???: N-N-No! Please spare me! Jeff: Too late,my mind is set on killing you. -the victim shakes in fear,knowing that this is the last day of his life- -slowly strarts to draw my knife out from the sleeve of my hoodie- Jeff: Now,why don't you go to sleep? ------------------------------------- Jeff is approaching a victim, when a few seconds later, he tackles the hopeless man. The victim soon gets scared out of his wits from the confront of a mad man. "N-n-no! Please, spare me!", he shook with fear. "Too late, my mind is set on killing you." The victim shakes with horror, for he is about to die, knowing that his last moments were being confronted by a serial killer. The victim was wide eyed, staring at Jeff's face in horror as he drew the knife out from the sleeve of his hoodie. "Now, why don't you go to sleep?", Jeff soon sank the knife into the victim, ending their life. This is at least a decent example. "Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!" — Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)

poisondart59

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#164719682Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:41 AM GMT

Oh,WELL I DIDNT KNOW I HAD TO GO FULL FREAKING DETAIL,AND TYPE OUT A FIVE-LINE PARAGRAPH ABOUT IT. IM SORRY,I DIDNT KNOW THIS WAS WATTPAD,I THOUGHT THIS WAS THE ROLEPLAYING COMMUNITY. I MUST BE IN THE WRONG PLACE,GOODBYE,GOOD DAY,HAVE A NICE LIFE WRITING FULL-ON STORIES!

poisondart59

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#164719729Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:42 AM GMT

I'm done with this thread,goodbye.

lncrediboy

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#164719989Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:45 AM GMT

Yeah,your grammar is AMAZING.I'm suprised you don't use spaces in commas nor periods, that's a totally common grammar mistake!!!!

LED_ZEPPELlN

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#164720059Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:45 AM GMT

Lol, I was just giving an EXAMPLE. It does not mean you have to write a paragraph. I know this is not wattpad. But atleast put effort into it. I only wrote a paragraph to give you the idea. Not like you have to do it. "Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!" — Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)

PickachuGirl

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#164720076Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:46 AM GMT

lol

bebithetuffle

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#164720173Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:47 AM GMT

Dude. Like. Roleplay isn't supposed to be nonsensical idiocy. It's supposed to be a story played among multiple people.

LED_ZEPPELlN

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#164720368Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:49 AM GMT

And dude, my paragraph was freaking easy to write. Don't overreact about it. "Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!" — Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)

poisondart59

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#164720383Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:49 AM GMT

I said I'm done,so stop posting on this thread.

LED_ZEPPELlN

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#164720543Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:51 AM GMT

Alright, alright. I get it. You don't like people helping you out. This is why I don't help people on the forums much. "Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!" — Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)

bebithetuffle

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#164720647Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:52 AM GMT

Aw, he pressed the do not allow replies button. How cute. Also, if you wanted to stop using this post, then why do you care if we keep posting?

poisondart59

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#164720755Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:53 AM GMT

screw you -.-

bebithetuffle

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#164720867Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:54 AM GMT

Aren't you just the edgiest little nard.

InfraredChasm

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#164721128Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:57 AM GMT

Instead of being a mouse-brain (anybody?) at least take these into consideration. I understand that you're a greenie (Eh?) to the forums but come on. This is ridiculous.

poisondart59

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#164721149Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:58 AM GMT

I'm done for real this time,I'm tired of you,I'm tired of everyone else on this post. See you all in hell,goodbye!

LED_ZEPPELlN

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#164721314Wednesday, June 17, 2015 2:59 AM GMT

I just tryyy to give you some advice, and this is what these people get. 'See you in hell'. That's just fantastic. "Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!" — Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)

InfraredChasm

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#164721389Wednesday, June 17, 2015 3:00 AM GMT

My dear lord. I wonder how this kid's teachers and parents are... On vacation?

LED_ZEPPELlN

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#164721508Wednesday, June 17, 2015 3:02 AM GMT

Never helping the roleplay thread again. People just get mistreated to helping people. "Virginia! Hanging around with little boys in spandex, I see!" — Lord Frisbee, AKA Freezy Pop (Frieza)