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Yeah like I thought and remembered the stories are a bit cheesy and cliche, especially the second one, the Spring Formal. Highschool, horror through text, takes place in a dance, it just screams cliche. It's pretty weird though, the Strange Pictures story is way better than the second story, and you'd expect a recently written story to be better because you've improved, but it's the other way around. Also haha look at me from a month ago
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i can make a cool story
"hey" crystalgems said
"wanna be friends" i said
"no" crystal said with a annoyed tone
"ok im sorry for asking" i said as i pulled out a gun and shot my self in the head
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yeah i know spring formal is bad (well i know that now at least)
i'm just not good at plots, i posted an opinion thread (http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=173117455) a while ago, and i just went with doing the high school horror story
strange pictures was only better because i had some help from tardy, if i had wrote that on my own, it wouldn't have been good at all
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ultra that story was better than anything i could come up with at least
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thanks it was inspired by the author pinkpinkbaby |
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thanks glad to know my awful writing is starting trends
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You should really stop destroying your confidence, this is coming from a thirteen year old that's spent three years writing and at least half his life role playing, you're amazing. I thought I was good when I was twelve and so did a lot of people. I don't even believe you're ten, ebin troll or not. I think you should take writing seriously because I'm doing that because a lot of people I know think I'm good, you're only ten and at least half as good as me.
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Crystal, you act like a adult most of the time. Act your age, foolish 8th grader, im in high school noob, get on my level! |
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i mean atleast pink acts like she is a 10 year old and doesn't try to be someone else :L |
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I'm not even trying to be someone else m8
It's either this or me being like the rest of the kids in my class and saying "xbox one is better than everything by the way what does pc gaming mean" and "i like listening to ghetto music even though i am a white with good grades and a stable family and childhood" and "i use mainstream social network websites" and lastly and most cringiest "Subscribe to my youtube channel with 20 subscribers"
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you don't know their life, you're probably just some kid with no friends. |
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Well yeah I kind of assumed their life in the stable family part but the rest is really accurate but yee k
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also since you're such a good writer, link me a story of yours so i can read that piece of sht. |
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I haven't properly written anything, just plans for stories I'd rather not share, some people will probably know that I'm an okay writer here if you ask around and say I'm hydre. Also kek I just realized you just made the biggest contradiction ever saying I "don't know their life" and then assumed I'm "just some kid with no friends"
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K at least I can come up with proper insults rather than just saying shut up kek bye m8 going to go do slightly better things
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wow my feelings were hurt by someone younger than me again :*(
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Jin150Join Date: 2013-11-01
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Crystal, if you haven't officially written something then you can't say you are good. GET OUT, SKRUB!!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! OH BABY A TRIPE!! WOMBO COMBO!! MOM GET DA CAMERA!! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHH!! |
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help the flames are too high
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ultra stop being an ignorant.
most people learn to accept defeat at the age of 12-14
so ur young
like
rlly young.
http://www.roblox.com/test-2-item?id=301502229 |
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the flame says most people dont like to admit defeat |
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You act like a 4 year old that's a kindergarten "freshman". |
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ultra loses 100% hp from infarechasm's attack
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