leRiddler
#168906425Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:07 PM GMT

no, loads of people say its bad
TheGamingCinema
#168906463Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:07 PM GMT

@pawz the 'its a child!'/'its for a child!' excuse is terrible I had some roleplays and they were MUCH MUCH better than this. And i'm OP'S age. "Dont kill my vibe." Said TheGamingBadgerCinema as he lobbed grenades at everyone.
pinkpinkbaby
#168906513Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:08 PM GMT

but that doesn't mean that other loads can't say it's good
leRiddler
#168906722Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:09 PM GMT

just stop it
xbikeman
#168908153Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:21 PM GMT

Pawz I'm actually probably younger than her. My roleplays are more interesting as this. MY ROLEPLAYS.
pinkpinkbaby
#168908261Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:22 PM GMT

i'm 10
TheGamingCinema
#168908343Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:22 PM GMT

im actually months younger than op lmao "Dont kill my vibe." Said TheGamingBadgerCinema as he lobbed grenades at everyone.
xbikeman
#168908390Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:22 PM GMT

Yep Older den` me.
xbikeman
#168908493Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:23 PM GMT

Also, I liked the first chapter, but after that, with the angel stuff, it made me rage.
lagio
#168908596Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:24 PM GMT

this story is terrible
pinkpinkbaby
#168908624Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:24 PM GMT

what's wrong with the angels? and they were introduced in the 3rd chapter i think
xbikeman
#168908863Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:26 PM GMT

I'm not a religious person, and when I see stuff like 'God' and 'Angel' I rage becuase science is the answer to Earth being livable.
pinkpinkbaby
#168909085Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:28 PM GMT

i didn't say anything about god and they aren't really angels they just have powers and can fly like a superhero
leRiddler
#168909090Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:28 PM GMT

Being "livable" you are so f--cking stupid
foIie
#168909551Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:32 PM GMT

this girl is way too young to be exploring yuri i mean come on you guys isnt it obvious the main character and lucy are in love its like way obvious ~~ this is your captain speaking - you are all about to die ~~
pinkpinkbaby
#168909635Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:33 PM GMT

what's yuri
leRiddler
#168909911Sunday, July 26, 2015 9:36 PM GMT

its a troll its really l-sbi-n por-o
Kipec
#168913626Sunday, July 26, 2015 10:12 PM GMT

wow good story please write more
Kurt_Schuschnig
#168914734Sunday, July 26, 2015 10:23 PM GMT

roblox highschool: od edition ~a touching true story~ i was walking then i saw hot guy i od him "bbi hrdr" and then i wus all leik "wher braking up" i am also rlly hot single girl 16 cool -Have a dictionary-
mizozizo
#168916171Sunday, July 26, 2015 10:37 PM GMT

pls die u need grmr lesns ur nob wtf this is in the wrong subforum we dont rite stories here we rite stories in boks not in rp forums nob sfiduoidfiusdhfiusdfhusfd die irl pls ur adopted the only reason ur a angel is becuz ur parents sed u wer 2 ugly so put u in adoption center they couldnt tak u nobody wud so we thrw u away along with a gun and a mirror so u checked urself out and tok gun and kil urself cuz ur ugly asf ugly shet pls die my frends bro who is 6 writes better then you fr atleast he uses grammar as much as he can he just asks me and my frend for spelling errors lol and hes creative ur adopted *cooks eggs* I cannot shoot up a school on a empty stomache!
leRiddler
#168916642Sunday, July 26, 2015 10:43 PM GMT

applause
TheLegoGamerDude1
#168918903Sunday, July 26, 2015 11:08 PM GMT

"I'm not a religious person, and when I see stuff like 'God' and 'Angel' I rage becuase science is the answer to Earth being livable." I hate to go off the subject of pissing all over OPs cereal But please, don't insult someone simply for being religious And don't let it be the bases for your argument Religious arguments are absolutely ridiculous, and accomplish nothing aside from making both sides look like idiots Thank you, good day. "It sounded like Satan's ass demons were chasing us." ~ WiFiKing42
xbikeman
#168919451Sunday, July 26, 2015 11:14 PM GMT

Lego, Ik, but am I not aloud to rage because of something?
leRiddler
#168919698Sunday, July 26, 2015 11:16 PM GMT

let this die
TheLegoGamerDude1
#168919741Sunday, July 26, 2015 11:17 PM GMT

You're aloud to rage, sure But don't make it the bases of your arguments