Tr_ppyJoin Date: 2013-05-02
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~Beat~
•Verse 1,Trippy•
A Whole new..
Oh this sht is makin' me crazy
Like I came from the doc uncured from rabies
But man I ain't no damn rabbi
I wasn't involved with the shootings or drive bys
I'm just an innocent normal ass black guy
I'm just as innocent as a ngga comes by
A Whole new..
Btch you think that I am lying
Chill yo ass I didn't say I'm denyin'
I didn't say I'm denyin'
Before I start screaming shouting like I am a lion
Lion it up , more like btch I'm sighing it up
IMA start crying it up, just kiddin' ima retry it all up
•Hook, Trippy•
I ain't in piece FAM ignore me I'm broken
Get myself up run away from the open
Ima add it all and get myself a quotient
Then from my quotient made preety ass potion
To make..me..a..whole..new..
~beat
Whole new part to Aladdin
Pm to help me finish this
Looking for partners and duets
~Trippy
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"Like I came from the doc uncured from rabies
But man I ain't no damn rabbi"
Instantly ruined everything this song ever had if it had anything. 2/10 at best.
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Tr_ppyJoin Date: 2013-05-02
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Why its called a freestyle Ben. |
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"Why its called a freestyle Ben."
It being a freestyle doesn't give it the right to be horrible.
This isn't even a freestyle.
It's written. lol. |
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"Why its called a freestyle Ben."
It being a freestyle doesn't give it the right to be horrible.
This isn't even a freestyle.
It's written. lol. x2
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Tr_ppyJoin Date: 2013-05-02
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Explain written |
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Typed, written, same thing. Doesn't matter which one. If it's a free-style you just think up the lyrics on the spot.
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black people = animals
10/10 |
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Tr_ppyJoin Date: 2013-05-02
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what i did man, lol thanks at above |
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"what i did man"
No, you already had the lyrics down or you had like forever to think of them. Not a freestyle.
"lol thanks at above"
He called black people animals, you racist.
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i dunno dude op sounds like he really wants to be an african american so i just said lion
just pulled it out my bootyhole dud |
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Tr_ppyJoin Date: 2013-05-02
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Ben I didn't proof read or do anything to this. I legit typed what I had in mind. Look at the top where it states freestyle smh y
Tryna start a nitwitted convosation |
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"Ben I didn't proof read or do anything to this."
ik yer grammer sucks m8.
"I legit typed what I had in mind. Look at the top where it states freestyle smh y
Tryna start a nitwitted convosation"
yes, and it took you 5 hours to do it and think of the lyrics, thus defeating the purpose of a freestyle.
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I wrote this in 5 min. Its funny you're telling me what I did and did not do when I'm the writer of this rap. Pray for this Little kid |
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"I wrote this in 5 min. Its funny you're telling me what I did and did not do when I'm the writer of this rap. Pray for this Little kid"
Aww, aren't you a tough little poser? Are you mad that I know this isn't a freestyle and it sucks?
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Um no.. |
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"Um no.."
Adorable.
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being a 'freestyle' isn't an excuse to suck OP |
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PUSH5Join Date: 2009-06-06
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don't let these fuccbois hate on u man
they all suck themselves so their criticism means nothing, trust me I've seen a lot of their work |
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ScribbosJoin Date: 2010-03-11
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Shut up |
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PUSH5Join Date: 2009-06-06
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and also ben has no knowledge in hiphop. all he does is sarcastically glorify the "n-word" making him the edgiest kid on the face of the planet. dont let his weak words hurt u |
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"and also ben has no knowledge in hiphop. all he does is sarcastically glorify the "n-word" making him the edgiest kid on the face of the planet. dont let his weak words hurt u"
Lol who are you? I know more than this kid knows about freestyles apparently. You and your wigger boyfriend can rub eachother all you want about how "good" your "raps" are, and how everyone who criticizes it is a "hater."
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PUSH5Join Date: 2009-06-06
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woah man no need to get butthurt. all I was doing was informing op that you know nothing about hip hop, which you don't, so why so angry? lol |
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"woah man no need to get butthurt. all I was doing was informing op that you know nothing about hip hop, which you don't, so why so angry? lol"
and like I said, who are you?
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