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http://www.roblox.com/games/334148440/Wings
can you rate it
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AecTalekJoin Date: 2008-10-09
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1. this isn't your first build
2. your cinematic is anticlimactic
3. if it has no point and it has no story then it has no quality
rating 4/10
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since when did builds have to have a story in it
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WoodFlareJoin Date: 2011-05-21
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since when did builds have to have a story in it (2) |
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thats like building a toilet and putting a caption above it saying
This toilet represents my goldfish named jj he was a very good goldfish i flushed him down this very toilet.
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AecTalekJoin Date: 2008-10-09
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you misunderstand due to your lack of experience and i don't have the time required to explain it to you as i'm going out to eat in about 10 minutes
good luck
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WoodFlareJoin Date: 2011-05-21
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I have 4 years of experience and I'm with tedthewizard, perhaps you misunderstand building, AecTalek? |
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AecTalekJoin Date: 2008-10-09
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for someone with 4 years of experience you seem very naive
perhaps it was just 4 years of calling yourself a builder
in any event, i am leaving now
chili's here i come
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i have 2 months of building exp
im confused
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WoodFlareJoin Date: 2011-05-21
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"for someone with 4 years of experience you seem very naive
perhaps it was just 4 years of calling yourself a builder"
http://www.roblox.com/users/29589046/profile |
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WoodFlareJoin Date: 2011-05-21
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please look into someone before you talk trash about that person |
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YurisakiJoin Date: 2015-04-19
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i think aec needs some jesus, jake
well here i am |
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EventiveJoin Date: 2011-07-28
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Aec,
You must be confused? Building something doesn't need to have a story behind it. I built a Greek Ruins for fun, no story. Please don't call someone naive when your ignorance level is high. |
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AecTalekJoin Date: 2008-10-09
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a man can't go out to eat w/o having a buttbuddy club on his back;
i've returned,
much to your pleasure i'm sure.
well i guess we'll start from the top:
i did look into you before i said anything about you. i do think before i speak, despite what you may think. i called you naive because you strawman'd my statement to suit your own needs, and because you don't see the benefit of storytelling in a building creation. also, i didn't 'talk trash' about it, though the more you argue with me over the semantics of building ethics the more i find that you may actually be trash.
jesus can't help you or i, let's leave the deities out of it.
'you must be confused'? interesting, i was thinking the same about you. your implicated claim is that i said, "all buildings require a story", which is simply false.
i went to see your greek ruins and was far, far, *far* from impressed. you stole a lot of your building techniques from other more competent constructors. how you believe you're able to speak on this topic, i'm not sure, but let's act like you are --
the depth of a story will have a directly positive correlation with the overall perceived quality of the story itself. i don't speak on the length or manner of speaking taken in the oration of the story, but rather the complexity and thought required to first think of and then comprehend the afforementioned depth. if for some reason you prefer Dr. Seuss books over The Clockwork Orange, then that speaks volumes about who you are; everything is relative. simply said: a place with a backstory and history will be more likely to be of higher perceived quality within the community. but as all things in life: there are no absolutes. not all great places will have a story or even a lick of thought behind them, just as some of the most deep and meaningful places may not have cframe increments down to the 100th of a stud bringing to life every square measurement of the place.
your first mistake was assuming that i was assuming,
your second mistake was having no basis in which to call me ignorant.
good day.
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i dont know what going on anymore
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EventiveJoin Date: 2011-07-28
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Oh my, you really are confused. I didn't steal anything from anyone you ignorant peasant. Seriously look into someone before judging. You wouldn't even be able to know if I did or not. You have not seen me build. |
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SirenoobJoin Date: 2012-12-14
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"Ignorant peasant"... is this the 18th century? Like for real.. |
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AecTalekJoin Date: 2008-10-09
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why must you prolong and extend your own embarrassment?
i thought it was pretty clear that i did look into you, all of you, before passing any judgement.
if your argument is that "you don't know how I build because you haven't seen me build", then i'm afraid to say that no one knows how you build; thus removing any authority you have to speak on the topic.
is your 'greek ruins' place not ample illustration of your building capabilities? i mean, you did cite that place yourself. it's also the only one we can hope was an attempt.
what more do you want?
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VaepersJoin Date: 2012-09-22
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Gives me a good "Insidious" feel. You could make a good horror game tbh |
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iagrusJoin Date: 2009-05-31
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let's put this in terms an 11 year old can understand without thinking there's a deeper meaning to what aec over there is saying.
• the structure of the only line of dialogue you have is reminiscent of a first grader trying to draw a straight line without a ruler.
• there's typos in the only line of dialogue you have.
• there is a random "=" symbol in the only line of dialogue you have.
• there is incoherent rambling in the only line of dialogue you have.
• the only line of dialogue you have is rendered meaningless by the way it is written.
• the camera is aimed on the exterior of what i can only assume is a house, when the build itself is in the interior of said house.
• the build itself is subjectively ugly (to myself) and looks plastered together. the bed in particular is hideous and the outside of the house clips with itself.
i've got two incomplete builds you can look at if you don't think i'm "qualified" to critique that mess you call a completed build.
http://www.roblox.com/games/13469435/unnamed
http://www.roblox.com/games/16279082/unnamed
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TigeonJoin Date: 2013-05-24
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aec is trying to say everybody stupid except him. sometimes, a mirror is the worlds most seful thing |
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TigeonJoin Date: 2013-05-24
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useful* |
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iagrusJoin Date: 2009-05-31
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no aec is just a narcissist who is completely right while you are wrong |
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