ExosumJoin Date: 2015-12-24
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Before I give my input, I have one question to ask you:
How long have you worked on this? |
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@Del
2 Days of building, 4 days of planning or thinking about something like this
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ExosumJoin Date: 2015-12-24
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A showcase that only took 2 days to finish is not a successful showcase. You're not looking at today's standards, which takes far more than 2 days to work on. |
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ExosumJoin Date: 2015-12-24
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You can't release 2 days of work and expect people to think this is a quality showcase. |
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Oh gosh you people were right... looks better with ST
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UPDATE: ST was fully added, and pants has come to Bob's store!
ALSO
Free access again (not friends only)
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it has a really deep meaning but its not very detailed
7/10 |
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@Aqua
Thanks
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UPDATE: There is now a construction site with construction workers...(NPC's doing something to hep)
@Suray
Checklist is completed! Now PLEASE change that dislike to a like!
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2 things;
Make it so u don't fall if u go into water, maybe just die?
In the store, make it so that it looks rusty, and characters are on floor, rusty, and have dead faces. |
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ZSXDFV5Join Date: 2015-11-29
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is this really the peak of your building skills
since thats what showcases are supposed to show |
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@ZS
I only been doing this for 2 days (not in a row of course just small hours of time)
Also what happened to your main?
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ZSXDFV5Join Date: 2015-11-29
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banned for a day |
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ZSXDFV5Join Date: 2015-11-29
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and ill post a model i made in 15 minutes once i can access my main |
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What did you get banned for? |
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@Suray
Her bina gittikçe kısalıyor fakat köprüyü daha kısaltamıyorum lütfen beni anlayın!
Translate
my problem plz
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i would recommend grabbing all of the buildings, raising them up and working on the smooth terrain below. i get you don't see most of it but it would really help and probably let the buildings be placed much better.
maybe make the river kill you? like a lava kill type script?
make some models yourself more, even if they don't look the best, people will see it as what you can build and not what others contribute to your place.
in all, 6.5/10
edge master right here am i right ladies http://www.roblox.com/edge-master-2k16-item?id=327566411 |
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Thanks, made a KillOnTouch script & Thanks that tip worked for leveling the ST
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zeon05Join Date: 2010-06-26
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ok shark i think you're gonna need to start rebuilding this place from the ground up because im going to be honest with you, this is a terrible showcase. no, im not saying this to be an asswipe or anything but showcases are supposed to be HIGHLY detailed and well, it's not exactly that highly detailed.
i built this on my main (which is currently banned.)
http://www.roblox.com/games/182192323/Forthwind-of-Leofrick
this is what people like to see. when you're building make sure you put in as much detail into your work as possible. a couple tips for when you're building:
- set form factor in bricks to custom
this allows you to make tiny parts that you wouldn't be able to create by default
- use the 1/5 increment setting
this lets you place parts more precisely
- turn collisions off
this allows you to c-frame parts, meaning parts can intersect with eachother when you're building.
**TL/DR version**
re-make your whole game and remember for showcases it's about quality not quantity. |
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Sad_nessJoin Date: 2014-02-28
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extremely ugly
joined to dislike |
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s_oJoin Date: 2011-04-20
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Please, don't label this as a showcase. This is nothing close to a showcase at all. In my opinion, this place of yours is not good at all. The message is good, but seriously, you need to work on it more. A lot more. |
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