OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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Hello, it's Ortanique. I ran into some trouble while writing this story; 3 chapters total were deleted by myself on accident. Now I'm doing a rewrite and I can't tell if it'll be as good (because the actual Chapter 2 was really good) or short or what. The first chapter was well recieved, so here goes nothing.
Chapter One: http://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=180611509
A party. A party from the person who sent me a strange message reguarding the current Egg Hunt. It might have been a troll, but the last part of the message creeped me out and I wasn't too keen about it. But I anxiously accepted the invite anyway. I stare blankly at the party chat, waiting for a word to be said.
"Hello, NameOfFear." Filers says.
"Are you ready?"
I squint in confusion. "For what?" *john cena joke here*
"The Egg Hunt, of course."
I loosen back up. "Oh. Yeah." I then think of what to ask him.
"Hey, what was that thing about the 62 Eggs. It said 25 on the blog post."
It was as quick as lightning when I received the reply, he was anticipating me to ask that I bet.
"I am a hacker, I went into the code for ROBLOX's upcoming events and saw coding for the eggs."
My eyes open wide. This guy is a hacker! I can get hacked! I quickly spam click the "Leave Party" button.
"Hey. Don't be scared." he responds. "We could get famous for this."
I loosen up again.
"We could get known for being smart ROBLOX users who dig deep into code, and they could hire us for our intelligence."
"Or, they could just call us dirty hackers...and...well, it wouldn't be good."
I stop. "Hey, how do you know this isn't a coding bug? They could say this was a coding bug or it was misread and patch it-"
I recieve a link mid typing. It's like he can see what I'm typing.
"Creepy hacker." I reply, clicking on the link. But what comes to my eyes is surprising. It's a blog post. I scroll down the list. It's all the eggs, yet they were not listed on the actual 25 egg post. I gawk, and I go to copy the link up top. I receive a party message. "Remember, I'm a hacker. Don't do this." Filers says. I take my cursor off the url and go scroll down and read all the eggs.
I then receive a party message. "Keep refreshing the front page. It's 4:28 PST, almost 4:30." I look at my clock and it's actually 4:28! I quickly go to the front page and spam f5. And in a minute less, there it is, Egg Hunt 2016. I click on it and click play. I am taken to the gray loading screen. My vision gets blurry, my arms are looking blocky and pixelated, and then I look like liquid almost. I am dragged into the screen. I knew I was in trouble.
*Hey, Ort here. Just finished rewriting this. It actually turned out well. Thanks for your support and hopefully you enjoyed this one!
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4321qwereJoin Date: 2014-01-17
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gr8 m8 i r8 8/8 |
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OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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It's not m8, it's m-a-t-e. We're doing grammar, not bingo. |
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This story is getting VERY VERY interesting.
Keep up the good work man.
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SageDaveJoin Date: 2014-01-11
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Ooooh! Keep it up :)
"Just don’t do it man." - NobleDragon |
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gg
#code print("sigys r 4 noobz") |
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lolnoJoin Date: 2008-11-29
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Moderators will probably delete this, should've posted this in RT or something. |
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ChoasStarJoin Date: 2012-07-31
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who are you? this is not story class |
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OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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It's not m8, it's m-a-t-e. We're doing grammar, not bingo. |
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OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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bump
It's not m8, it's m-a-t-e. We're doing grammar, not bingo. |
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OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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It's not m8, it's m-a-t-e. We're doing grammar, not bingo. |
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NerdUFERSJoin Date: 2012-04-12
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alt bump |
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NerdUFERSJoin Date: 2012-04-12
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OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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part 3 ples
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koenjo123Join Date: 2013-01-29
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Pretty decent story |
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OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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@ultra
I'll rewrite later or early tomorrow |
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alright.
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where is part III
#code if EggHunt.Sponsored == true then Roblox:remove() |
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part 3 plz
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wheres chapter 3?????
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shoortJoin Date: 2010-12-04
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tl;dr
is siggy an instrument? |
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CHAPTER 3 CMON
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OrtaniqueJoin Date: 2011-07-13
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sorry school is screwing me up so idk if ill make it
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