PickachuGirl
#18242289Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:18 AM GMT

:-D. Yeay! 10/10
goxapollo
#18242374Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:19 AM GMT

(Pickachu,(lols) you seem to like this alot.)
shockvolt
#18242468Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:20 AM GMT

Awesome!!!!!
goxapollo
#18242482Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:20 AM GMT

(Mah heart is beating really fast for some reason....)
PickachuGirl
#18242493Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:21 AM GMT

(I just like the transformation.)
shockvolt
#18242539Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:21 AM GMT

Man I wish I had that good of an imagination...Oh wiat I do I just don't use it :P
FelinaGabe
#18242544Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:21 AM GMT

alot of glowing XD I love this
PickachuGirl
#18242608Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:22 AM GMT

(THe writing style is great!)
shockvolt
#18242643Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:23 AM GMT

I want my guy to be like silent and strange actually...
goxapollo
#18242652Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:23 AM GMT

~~~Uyd, Part One the Transformation~~~ Uyd was with his father in a forest, they were sitting by the fire. Uyd was watching it fliker
goxapollo
#18242701Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:23 AM GMT

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! I wasn't done!!!!!!!
PickachuGirl
#18242711Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:24 AM GMT

(O_O.)
SkyLight
#18242758Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:24 AM GMT

I'll start by standing on a bridge, watching someone catch a fish. Then my character would lean over the railing on the bridge and fall over. Then the glowy-thingy happens and.. yea... (I don't know anything else... P.S. HI GROLALA!)
Grolala
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#18242793Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:25 AM GMT

(XD)
Aesura
#18242871Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:26 AM GMT

Epix.
Aesura
#18242968Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:27 AM GMT

Why did I get the shortest one :P
SkyLight
#18243034Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:28 AM GMT

LOL.
goxapollo
#18243107Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:29 AM GMT

Sorry for the explosion. ~~~Uyd, Part One the Transformation~~~ Uyd was with his father in a forest, they were sitting by the fire. Uyd was watching it flicker as her sat on a log, his father was staring at it as well. This had been the first time he had seen his father in months, his mother hadn't wanted him to see his Father. "So..." they said at the same time, Uyd chuckled and started again, "So, how has life been for you...dad?" he paused before he said dad, he hadn't said it in the longest time. His father shrugged and got up, as he did her knocked over some gasoline into the fire and it spread everywhere.Uyd stood up and his shirt got licked by the flame, he gasped, the where and light and the fire was out, he was in a dark red dress shirt and black pants. Uyd took off running ,not know what his father would say. He ran until he got the the tree where the other were. ~~~Uyd,Part One the Transformation~~~
Aesura
#18243212Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:31 AM GMT

Cool :D RUNNING ON FIRE!!!
Grolala
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#18243296Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:32 AM GMT

XD
goxapollo
#18243305Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:32 AM GMT

He wasn't running on fire, his original shirt got light on fire, the fire went out after he transformed. Your parents were divorced.
shockvolt
#18243349Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:33 AM GMT

mMMMMMM Hello new person XD
Aesura
#18243490Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:35 AM GMT

@Goxapollo I actually like that story :D
jaykliewer
#18243588Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:36 AM GMT

CS: Name:Jay Gender: Male Looks (before transformation): White hair that goes over eyes, black hoodie, black etc. Black scarf over eyes Powers: ice Personality: Outgoing, protective and cold.
goxapollo
#18243884Wednesday, December 23, 2009 12:40 AM GMT

~~~Yuuki, Part One the Transformation~~~ Yuuki was looking down at the water, fishes were everywhere,so were poles. She looked up at the setting sun, she sighed. Her father patted her back and said, "Just a little bit longer. he said, "Thats what you said two hours ago." she said to him. Her father chuckled and handed her a couple dollars, "Why don't you go but a coke or something. He said pointing to a vending machine at the end of the bridge. She walked over there and bought a coke, she opened it and chugged part of it down. She wiped her mouth with her sleeve, she walked back to her father and leaned on the railing again, a person was running and knocked her, she almost fell over the edge, put she held on the railing ing with one of her hands. He arms was turing black, her father was trying to pull her up. She closed her eyes and she heard a sound, she opened her eyes and saw that her father had stepped away. She saw that she was wearing a black dress on her. She pulled herself up and saw that it went to her knees. Her father was looking at her weirdly, she began to run away, she ran until she was at the tree. ~~~Yuuki,Part One the Transformation~~~ (My head hurts...)