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Characters:
Light Side
Zachary Bender, a 13 year old boy.
Mr.Bender,zachary's dad
Mrs. Bender, zachary's mom
Jason Bender, 16 year old boy and zachary's brother
Amelia Bender, 11 year old girl and zachary's sister
Mrs. Harriet
Mr. Elliot
Edward Jones, Mr.Jones son
10 fighters for the light side
Dark Side
Mike Rider, Zachary's long lost twin from the dark side that is owned by Mr.Rider
Mr. Brown, the first police officer
Mr. Johnson, the second police officer
Mr. Jones, the doctor
10 fighters for the dark side
Mr.Rider
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Zachary is the main character. This roleplay will begin when every role is taken. If you choose a fighter role you can name them whatever you want. I will be the narrator.
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AbsxlveJoin Date: 2012-06-21
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Ok, attempting to post an RP with no experience and a small post count was brave enough, but this is just going too far. Get out.
Nothing is finite, not even the potential amount of alts I can make in the next few years! |
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What do you mean "No experience"? And also you can't tell me what to do |
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egonoiaJoin Date: 2015-09-16
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I don't even know the story!
What the characters are/do!
The rules!
The CS! |
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Rules:
The roblox rules
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CS for fighters
Name:
Age:
Dark or Light?:
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egonoiaJoin Date: 2015-09-16
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I don't even know the story!
What the characters are/do![2] |
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Actually don't use that CS use this one. And all characters need to make a CS
Name:
Age:
Dark or Light?:(if you are not a fighter skip this)
Appearance: |
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egonoiaJoin Date: 2015-09-16
Post Count: 917 |
I don't even know the story!
What the characters are/do![3]
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Diamond this is REALLY vague. What's the story? What do the characters look like? not trying to be mean, like someone I know... But this needs more detail. I'd be glad to help |
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The story is about the light side and dark side fighting for the planet. The light characters are the good guys and dark characters are the bad guys. |
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What's the planet's name..? |
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These things could have been in the description... |
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Hon, this entire post needs a few (thousand) things to make it better.
1. Better and more od/troll proof rules
2. A more in-depth and interesting story
3. A REASON they're fighting for the Earth
4. A reason it's a rip-off of Star Wars
5. A better writer
6. A more precise time, year, and setting
7. People would respond to it if it was written by someone who didn't make a West Oaks School RP where she was the diplomat.
8. There are no mafia, or better known as the red chinese c0mmunists
9. WHAT IS THE PLOT
10. WHY ISN'T EVERYTHING NEEDED TO BE KNNOWN ABOUT IN THE FIRST POST
11. It's made by the person who made a High School RP. That would be acceptable in the early 2006/2007s, but not now. |
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ugh why do you haters keep on posting |
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You should write a much more descriptive plot, to be honest. This just won't cut it if you want people to join, especially people from this forum.
It's much too vague.
You also might want to add more than just "the roblox rules". Don't you want to prevent godmodding? Or other boundaries you think people might try to overstep? |
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AbsxlveJoin Date: 2012-06-21
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We didn't hate to begin with, but this is getting persistent.
Nothing is finite, not even the potential amount of alts I can make in the next few years! |
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diamond they're just trying to help you by giving you advice on how to make this rp be the best as it could be. i know you can be great, and i know you can do great things, but you just have to listen and learn.
they aren't hating on you, they're just giving you criticism so you know what to fix. please listen, alright? we'd like you to stay and improve as a person and as a writer.
*Sitting Alone In A Corner* [Diary Entry #932] Well Im Here, Last Man On Earth I Used The World Scaner No One's Here, No one to Talk To, No One To Go Outside With Me I Think This Is It For Me, Goodbye World. |
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Someone who thinks constructive criticism is hate needs to learn what life is. We are helping you, we're telling you that you need to do more. We aren't trying to be mean. Hate is mindless, but the points people are making are true and helpful. Please PLEASE listen. |
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AbsxlveJoin Date: 2012-06-21
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And with the negative attitude against me for making a point made me start to see you in a negative image, OP.
Nothing is finite, not even the potential amount of alts I can make in the next few years! |
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evilboo10Join Date: 2011-09-20
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I thought this was gonna be a Star Wars roleplay at first. |
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@evil
Same though.
Who wants to join the RPquisition? |
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benzo2Join Date: 2008-06-02
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^ Still working on that. Looot of Codex entries to copy over, and I broke my monitor screen, sooo gonna take even longer via phone.
I'd say almost a quarter of the way? lol |
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oh jeez benzo that sounds like a story
how did you break your monitor screen?
*Sitting Alone In A Corner* [Diary Entry #932] Well Im Here, Last Man On Earth I Used The World Scaner No One's Here, No one to Talk To, No One To Go Outside With Me I Think This Is It For Me, Goodbye World. |
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benzo2Join Date: 2008-06-02
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Haha, it's actually rather simple; Too much 420 one night and tried to carry it downstairs to do a wee bit of writing.
I dropped it along the way. |
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