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PashedMotatoes
#188844282Monday, May 09, 2016 5:32 AM GMT

https://www.roblox.com/games/410543085/Building-2 This is going to be a map on my new sword fighting game. Would love to hear your opinions! thanks! - me
SilencedArchangel
#188844348Monday, May 09, 2016 5:34 AM GMT

From the thumbnail it looks really good! I wasn't able to go in-game due to the permissions being set to private. --Captain_Clockwork
PashedMotatoes
#188844433Monday, May 09, 2016 5:38 AM GMT

AHHH im sorry I forgot I had it set to friend only! I changed it to everyone
GetTheJobDone
#188844534Monday, May 09, 2016 5:42 AM GMT

I like it, music would work well with it. Bit of the ground feels a bit empty, maybe a path there?
PashedMotatoes
#188844931Monday, May 09, 2016 5:57 AM GMT

Was thinking either a path or putting more trees there. I will figure it out. Keep in mid though it needs to be a bit open as it belongs to a sword fighting game. @Get Appretiate the feedback from both of you!
PashedMotatoes
#188848991Monday, May 09, 2016 10:26 AM GMT

Bump
udayk8139
#188849251Monday, May 09, 2016 10:42 AM GMT

=O
RobloxSpartacus
#188849977Monday, May 09, 2016 11:27 AM GMT

I believe it should have different trees, instead of the same ones copy/pasted. A mix would bring it out more. -Ghost
PersuasivePanda
#188850599Monday, May 09, 2016 11:58 AM GMT

those cherry blossoms tho ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
PashedMotatoes
#188850686Monday, May 09, 2016 12:04 PM GMT

You guys like it?
jdogmad2
#188850714Monday, May 09, 2016 12:05 PM GMT

yes
PashedMotatoes
#188855257Monday, May 09, 2016 3:15 PM GMT

Anyone have any other suggestions?
masterreblex
#188860202Monday, May 09, 2016 5:38 PM GMT

Well, the quality of building is nice to people that just comes to play (actually I think the map lacks of this to cover and jump on) but, right here I've got some stuff that you should fix Your map looks really good from far awat, but once you take a close look, it starts to feel bad, look at the following screenshots 1st: https://gyazo.com/23acd66f1a9d3b420387731f9c461d6f Most things here had cylinders of random ends, you made them all symetrical in a side, but the other side is just a roaller coaster. 2nd: https://gyazo.com/1432915aef140db1c7ed06a7b8f39099 Now, take a look at this, we have got some evident errors here, even if the building looks right from far away, this things sure don't look right, fix em' whit negative unions or do something whit them. 3rd: https://gyazo.com/02e1e93db69252546cd6e0db12c5049d Here's a thing you have to totally fix, it just was so easy to see, and it's also easy to fix. Principal error: Player's first action when joining this map will be jumping on the building's. No excuse they won't see the roof, make the roof beautifull! Also, make a more interactive map, or a parkour way to get to a roof or something, you need corners, stairs and a flat space, that's crucial for a sword fight map -Master
Zititus
#188862124Monday, May 09, 2016 6:29 PM GMT

^ Constructive comments like a sir. Senpai please rate mine: https://www.roblox.com/games/406888289/Second-Innovation
PashedMotatoes
#188876574Monday, May 09, 2016 11:05 PM GMT

yeah I got a little lazy towards the end of the build as I had been building that map for the whole day. I will certainly change those small things and just simple clean it all up.
PashedMotatoes
#188895222Tuesday, May 10, 2016 4:31 AM GMT

Bump
PashedMotatoes
#189136029Saturday, May 14, 2016 11:01 PM GMT

Bump
Philadelphiia
#189136327Saturday, May 14, 2016 11:06 PM GMT

Nice... :)

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