Yung Slaya- My Life( 1 verse)

Join Date: 2016-02-19
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#188981287Thursday, May 12, 2016 12:02 AM GMT

(verse) I once was that kid that was bullied I got punched in the face call me the goalie I once the kid at school that wasn't popular Now I'm writing about it call me a biographer Nothing is cool unless you hop on the bandwagon All these kids stink like a box of salmon I once was a kid that got bullied a lot I was a bball player but was treated like the mascot No matter how weird I was I loved being me This is my life if you don't believe it then disagree

DesiredShark

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#188982009Thursday, May 12, 2016 12:16 AM GMT

This is horrible and peculiar. You don't even rhyme. You're not a biographer. A biographer is someone who writes about a different party's life. Instead, you'd be an autobiographer. Kids? Judging by how you type your "ro-rap", I'd say your posture of writing is elementary and childish. A box of salmon? If anything, salmon is delicious.

YungSlayamusic

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#188982237Thursday, May 12, 2016 12:20 AM GMT

^I know I love salmon but it smells gross and I meant Auto biographer and I do rhyme

YungSlayamusic

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#188982295Thursday, May 12, 2016 12:21 AM GMT

And Also it's not about how I type my Ro Rap it's about real life

davidisamazing25

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#189022272Thursday, May 12, 2016 10:17 PM GMT

Well I don't care about your real life...at all...whatsoever...and thats not even an insult I have never met you so why would I care whole heartedly. Thats expecting a little much from the audience. So yes it is how you type your "Ro-Raps". Also if your as "REELZ!!!!" as you say you are? Record it, make a beat (or take one free most rappers don't make there on beats so I wouldn't judge you too much( and actually record.

MatthewCastagna

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#189027198Thursday, May 12, 2016 11:45 PM GMT

ro rap is dead