To be fair...it's bad. I know you worked a long time on it, but still, it's just bad. I'm not trying to say this to sound rude, but I'm saying this so you can try and improve. Things you should work on are less auto-tune, be more up-beat, and to also try to stay in-tune so you don't have to rely on auto-tune. Then, focus on keeping a steady rhythm and don't sidetrack from the beat, other than that, you did well. |