MY NEW MINI SHOWCASE! (NEED SUGGESTIONS!)

Join Date: 2009-06-20
Post Count: 566

#193299698Sunday, July 10, 2016 6:03 PM GMT

Spent 2 hours building a tiny cave with the F3X tool and 15 minutes for the icon/thumbnail. It's called "The Cave of Reality". This is my first showcase that i have built and i need some suggestions for the showcase since i don't think that it is really impressive. PS. If you like the showcase, leave a like, i would appreciate it alot! :-) Link to game:https://www.roblox.com/games/447652611/The-Cave-of-Reality-MINI-SHOWCASE

FracturedLegs

Join Date: 2012-12-27
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#193299893Sunday, July 10, 2016 6:06 PM GMT

try to union some of those stones (laggy a bit) My models: https://www.roblox.com/users/36133282/inventory/#!/models

Climaty

Join Date: 2009-06-20
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#193300010Sunday, July 10, 2016 6:07 PM GMT

Thanks alot! By the way, your models are very awesome.

pidgey

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#193300755Sunday, July 10, 2016 6:17 PM GMT

i stole the statues sword beep beep +1 post woohoo get this if ur the coolest person on earth https://www.roblox.com/pidgey-item?id=452893611

USArockssoccer15

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#193300867Sunday, July 10, 2016 6:18 PM GMT

It's a great place. But, I believe showcases are supposed to showcase (or show off) your building/scripting skills. A cave like yours can easily be created by using a few rotated parts, then copy and pasting them, making a lot of unnecessary parts. I think it's pretty obvious that you had followed a process similar to this. 5,000 parts is a bit too much for such a small place. I'm not saying you should restart your cave, I'm just saying that there are a lot of unnecessary parts hidden behind what the viewers will see. Try to remove those. Also, I recommend you fix your center. It looks really awkward and messy.