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DeVici
#193602556Thursday, July 14, 2016 4:10 AM GMT

https://www.roblox.com/games/455310236/Memories-WIP not complete ofc, wanna see what i should change b4 i go any further w/ it turn your roblox sound on if you want the full ambience lowkey a tryhard
cfiredog
#193603620Thursday, July 14, 2016 4:27 AM GMT

It's fairly spooky and I like it. The only thing I would say to suggest changing is the particles that fall from the ceiling. I can actually see a square outline of each image falling. Maybe changing it to a circular image would help. Also there were some grey parts on the upper level that I didn't know what they were supposed to be.
DeVici
#193604397Thursday, July 14, 2016 4:39 AM GMT

ahh, those grey parts were supposed to be part of a train set, but i forgot to put the wheels on them. fixed it though. i'll see what i can do about the particles lowkey a tryhard
pidgey
#193606351Thursday, July 14, 2016 5:08 AM GMT

https://gyazo.com/7e190c3c15bf7ca1b72f3fde4fa51245 THEM TREES THO pidgey is my name sh##posting is my game
jdogmad2
#193606500Thursday, July 14, 2016 5:10 AM GMT

THEM TREES o:
Otherworldliness
#193606568Thursday, July 14, 2016 5:11 AM GMT

Bro those trees look like people flailing around in chaos
DeVici
#193607464Thursday, July 14, 2016 5:28 AM GMT

they're the souls of the dead desperately clawing for release of their woody bodies lowkey a tryhard
DeVici
#193631510Thursday, July 14, 2016 4:41 PM GMT

b lowkey a tryhard
DeVici
#193643326Thursday, July 14, 2016 7:24 PM GMT

b2 lowkey a tryhard
DeVici
#193658892Thursday, July 14, 2016 11:02 PM GMT

;^) next person to give an opinion keeps their soul lowkey a tryhard
Otherworldliness
#193665179Friday, July 15, 2016 12:35 AM GMT

Doesn't become a tree*
DeVici
#193665530Friday, July 15, 2016 12:40 AM GMT

^ accurate lowkey a tryhard
Scottifly
#193668698Friday, July 15, 2016 1:22 AM GMT

Yeah if you were going for a 'falling dust' type of particle I'd just use very small single particles falling very slowly. You can make the rotations and velocity variable so they go different directions instead of straight down. Also, the "boards made of wood planks" ceiling looks a bit strange. I'd suggest just using the wood material on each board.

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