DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19 Post Count: 480 |
https://www.roblox.com/games/455310236/Memories-WIP
not complete ofc, wanna see what i should change b4 i go any further w/ it
turn your roblox sound on if you want the full ambience
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cfiredogJoin Date: 2008-05-30 Post Count: 228 |
It's fairly spooky and I like it. The only thing I would say to suggest changing is the particles that fall from the ceiling. I can actually see a square outline of each image falling. Maybe changing it to a circular image would help. Also there were some grey parts on the upper level that I didn't know what they were supposed to be. |
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DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19 Post Count: 480 |
ahh, those grey parts were supposed to be part of a train set, but i forgot to put the wheels on them. fixed it though. i'll see what i can do about the particles
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pidgeyJoin Date: 2008-01-16 Post Count: 2739 |
https://gyazo.com/7e190c3c15bf7ca1b72f3fde4fa51245
THEM TREES THO
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jdogmad2Join Date: 2012-06-29 Post Count: 681 |
THEM TREES o:
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Bro those trees look like people flailing around in chaos |
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DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19 Post Count: 480 |
they're the souls of the dead desperately clawing for release of their woody bodies
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DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19 Post Count: 480 |
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DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19 Post Count: 480 |
b2
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DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19 Post Count: 480 |
;^) next person to give an opinion keeps their soul
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DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19 Post Count: 480 |
^ accurate
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ScottiflyJoin Date: 2011-01-30 Post Count: 9180 |
Yeah if you were going for a 'falling dust' type of particle I'd just use very small single particles falling very slowly. You can make the rotations and velocity variable so they go different directions instead of straight down.
Also, the "boards made of wood planks" ceiling looks a bit strange. I'd suggest just using the wood material on each board. |
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