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https://www.roblox.com/games/454451700/Wilderness-Obby
Going To Sponsor it soon as a DEMO only 1 level on the demo
also if you like it leave a thumbs up and maybe a comment
Donation: https://www.roblox.com/Group-Logo-Shirt-item?id=431725595
i would love some feed back :)
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KorniakJoin Date: 2013-08-09
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just another stupid boring obby 0/10 |
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:/ prob didnt try it but thx anyway |
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MarezerJoin Date: 2008-03-03
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There's two things I think you should look towards doing.
- The camera shakes even when you aren't sprinting. You may/may not have done that intentionally, however, it's annoying and I think you should look into changing it.
- Change the sprint key - a lot of people use MouseLock when they do obstacles. It's even more difficult when your camera moves when you try to MouseLock, and I think it'd draw players away from the game.
Overall, it looks great so far. I like the amount of detail - it's not too detailed, but not too simplistic either. Keep it up. :)
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Just fix he thigs they said and don't do it for money and dont use free models and ur good.
Derpy the formal derpy inventing wizard |
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thanks and the shaking was suppose to be heart beats and ill edit the sprint script |
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Ocks67Join Date: 2009-03-07
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It's an obby like the others but it doesn't look like the others.
You actually put effort in it.
Just keep adding to it. Maybe add some puzzle section to it so it feels more different. Maybe a small narrative. It's up to you. |
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ok thx for the feed back :) only 2 full days of work soo .... xD hasnt been a week of work yet |
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and it's kinda hard to make obbys different from the others when obbys only have like one objective |
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LorddJennJoin Date: 2011-11-06
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Thank blox you bumped this, I played a bit of the obby and IT WAS AMAAAZING! When I saw the first comment I was skeptical about clicking it, but I never expected to see such a well built course! Can't wait for full release, be sure to post about it, and keep up the amazing work!
~The king of snowball fights since 1872 |
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LorddJennJoin Date: 2011-11-06
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One thing though, is this like an alternate account, or is the game on Team Create, because it says someone else owns it?
~The king of snowball fights since 1872 |
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it is on team create and you should leave a thumbs up :D |
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LorddJennJoin Date: 2011-11-06
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I'll be sure to! Already added it to my favorites!
~The king of snowball fights since 1872 |
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thx for the support :) will be sponsoring it |
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KorniakJoin Date: 2013-08-09
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stop bumping fool
~Korniak |
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thx for the thumbs down btw |
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DeViciJoin Date: 2014-09-19
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Korniak, let's be >polite and >helpful, like this forum was meant to be.
Keep up the good work Ice, you could certainly add more details to make it more realistic. E.G The volcano spill over doesn't look right and could be changed, the walls could look rougher, etc.
lowkey a tryhard |
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thx and ill get straight to detailing the lava |
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