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Nothing really gets me low when you say your at home. But everytime i show up at your door it turns there was something mo Thought we something special but you went ahead and sc#######t . When i was about to apoligize, But not had to be more than mine. Go ahead and talk sh####bout me. It's gonna get you
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Nowhere. We can be anywhere and you chose no where! What can I say? Is there something more. Better hurry up I got one foot out the door. I bet you anything when you your going it's justs gonna be nowhere
nothing to me will get under my skin until it's up to one of my friend. To stand up to you because you called them #### too.oo. Right you better run because me and squad are going to come. Yea that's right I have them too. Because I wonder if they turned them backs on you too. All the anger you put out on 'em well i can you your gonna get
Nowhere. We can be anywhere and you chose no where! What can I say? Is there something more. Better hurry up I got one foot out the door. I bet you anything when you your going it's justs gonna be nowhere.
You chose you cried even said sorry about you life. Shotgun pointed to your head. One click then your dead. Suci####### just denial. Shotgun pointed to your head. One click then your dead. After that you are gonna be.
Nowhere. We can be anywhere and you chose no where! What can I say? Is there something more. Better hurry up I got one foot out the door. I bet you anything when you your going it's justs gonna be nowhere.
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-cringes-
I mean it's not TERRIBLE but it sounds like a 14 year old wrote it. |
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14 year olds who are not idiots could do better, trust me, I'm 14.
Honestly, it isn't terrible, but it's not near good. The suici.d.e came out of nowhere (pun not intended), the title would make more sense as nowhere rather than nothing, it doesn't have a flow to it that I can find, there are lines that are obviously missing words because they don't make sense, it seems like the writer is trying to write about something they've never experienced, and flaws are obvious. There are flaws in every song, and this is an example. Though genre bias probably plays a role in my disliking.
The last man on earth sat alone in a room... There was a knock at the door... |
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lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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^ two people who dont know talent above
this is great...might i say its....gold (get it hehehe)
Lobstery, God of Infinite Wisdom and Cruelty, King of the Pop Fans |
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Well actually im 11. This song is nowhere near bad! thanks ######## but really guys haters are gonna hate. Taylor Swift didnt start out as a famous popstar. She had good songs and bad songs. I noticed my bad songs guys. And im writing one right now. |
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xabiJoin Date: 2008-08-31
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the formatting makes me cry |
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Boo, if you're eleven, don't be acting like you're song is amazing, adult quality, or comparable to Taylor Swift. I'm a 13 year old graphic designer, I think my work is pretty good but I don't go around bragging about it and acting like it's comparable to Van Gogh. Know your place.
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Loyal2OneJoin Date: 2012-06-24
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Comparing yourself to Swift is completely different than to Van Gogh ;)
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even I think I could do better |
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Why would you even compare yourself to Taylor Swift? That's not a good thing. |
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I wasnt comparing myself to her. All i was saying is that she didnt always write good music. And she worked at it thats all i said |
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^it looks like you didn't even work at it anyway and taylor swift is pretty generic now so you should not be talking about her or compare yourself to her cause there is a much better artist then taylor swift or melanie Martinez at that. |
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lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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"taylor swift is pretty generic now"
"now"
HA!
Lobstery, God of Infinite Wisdom and Cruelty, King of the Pop Fans |
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^ I meant is generic I did not mean to put now |
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I beilieve that this song and all my others are amazing. And you can think whatever you want but i think that this is good and that this is one of my best work |
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^ what you believe and others believe are two different things |
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YadokingJoin Date: 2011-08-15
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"Boo, if you're eleven, don't be acting like you're song is amazing, adult quality, or comparable to Taylor Swift. "
LOL Taylor Swift?
She is one of the most mediocre artists to this day! |
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lobstery7Join Date: 2009-07-02
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Everyone needs to shutup because awsome is an amazing artist
Lobstery, God of Infinite Wisdom and Cruelty, King of the Pop Fans |
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Loyal2OneJoin Date: 2012-06-24
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Ayy Tiger it's been a while
I'll never get board of chess puns! |
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Everyone needs to shutup because awsome is an amazing artist x3
stop bulling awsome ok, let he be what she
wants to be and do what she wants to do
gosh this is why i hate mt
everyone is so mean and pretentious
also van gogh is just as mainstream as
tayler swift
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