made my first ever track

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#201760437Thursday, November 17, 2016 11:44 AM GMT

it's not great and i came up with the topic a while back, if i started it recently it wouldn't be this edgy trying to develop my timing cause i sound offbeat, i stutter once or twice too but i'm fairly proud of it ######################################################

xabi

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#201760452Thursday, November 17, 2016 11:44 AM GMT

/adam-s-581457025/who-goes-there on the old cloud of sounds

VitoDonatelli

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#201771904Thursday, November 17, 2016 5:01 PM GMT

👌 Five more minutes mom, I'm talking to my toxic internet friends about whose music tastes are superior.

captc

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#201772273Thursday, November 17, 2016 5:10 PM GMT

👌 Congrats. i know like rap User-Generated! | Branded As: Rock | Boop

OMGITSTWIZZY

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#201772803Thursday, November 17, 2016 5:22 PM GMT

your voice is majestic.

xabi

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#201772891Thursday, November 17, 2016 5:24 PM GMT

it's p bad, might re-record it at some point but thank u if u genuinely listened to it regardless of if u liked it or not

OMGITSTWIZZY

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#201773092Thursday, November 17, 2016 5:29 PM GMT

i listened to it. it was a little hard to understand you because your voice was kind of low. you also didnt sound comfortable recording it. not to sound or picky, but thats just what i heard. but it was pretty dope other than that.

xabi

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#201773178Thursday, November 17, 2016 5:32 PM GMT

^ thank u for genuine feedback bruv i appreciate it

leeralalo

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#201780601Thursday, November 17, 2016 8:44 PM GMT

i love the hints of genres, the poetic rap was amazing, defo liked it. however, the mic quality wasn't the best, and you might want to change up some of the repeated words [yeah, he never ****ing was x4 could be switched up]. other than that, amazing, 8/10. great lyrics, great flow, amazing all around. is a so salty, a very very salty

xabi

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#201780781Thursday, November 17, 2016 8:47 PM GMT

^ thank youu yeah i'm working with a headset mic atm lmao