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NarutoFox12
#20554632Friday, February 05, 2010 4:14 AM GMT

Guys I have to go to bed so sorry! Thanks for enjoying my first book called "Afghan"
MasterChief13371
#20555114Friday, February 05, 2010 4:33 AM GMT

Aww!
NarutoFox12
#20569765Friday, February 05, 2010 8:24 PM GMT

Back writing Chapter 5 (I think)
phoneguy
#20573846Friday, February 05, 2010 9:42 PM GMT

If a new char is accepted then... Name: Lucas Specialty: Stealth (With Alpha 2) Weapons: Armalite AR-50 (Sniper) Caliber: .50BMG (12.7x99 mm) Operation: bolt action, single shot Overall length: 1499 mm Barrel: 787 mm (31" tapered, 8 groove rh 1:15 inch twist) Weight: 18.61 kg Muzzle device: cylindrical multiflute recoil check Desert Eagle (Pistol) Type: Single Action Chambering: .357 Magnum Length overall: 10.24 in. Weight: 62 oz. - 1,715 g empty Barrel length: 6 in. Magazine: 9 (.357) rounds Knife (I gave alot of info on the weapons, I know.)
NarutoFox12
#20591381Saturday, February 06, 2010 2:37 AM GMT

Chapter 5: The Unseen Marine(Continued) Blake ran upstairs. The silent footsteps he made was impossible for us to be comprimised. Blake and I ran down stairs unheard. The ghillie suits made us almost impossible to be seen. We ran out of the house. We ran to the front gate of the base. I can see 4 guards and 1 German Sheperd. "Watch out. 4 guards, I think there splitting up. Hold up." I commanded. Blake and I can see the guards splitting up seeing only 2 guards left and no German Sheperd. "Go for the left. I got the right." I said. I scoped my aim to the guard on the right. My finger was tempting to pull the trigger. "Hold up... I can see contact, more men are coming. Darn!" I said. We waited until there was only 2 men left, which was long. "Go!" I commanded. Blake shot his sniper on the guy to the left in the head. (Uncensored Sentence) I then shot the guard on the right. Both of guards were down. "Move up" I said. I then saw 2 guys on the right. "Same plan, go." Blake shot the guy onthe left in the head. I shot the guy on the right in the head. A guard noticed the dead guards but I shot him before he told his team. I then saw 5 snipers at the roof of the base. "You get the left 2" I said. "Go." I then shot 3 guards on the right in the head. I reloaded my sniper. We entered the base with caution. Blake and I then went prone when tanks started driving. Then troops came out. More snipers went to the roof. "We're spotted!" I said.
phoneguy
#20592910Saturday, February 06, 2010 2:59 AM GMT

(Am I going to be in next?)
NarutoFox12
#20659946Sunday, February 07, 2010 5:28 AM GMT

I stopped writing this story. You can continue if you want.
phoneguy
#20659980Sunday, February 07, 2010 5:29 AM GMT

Aww... why did you stop?
NarutoFox12
#20660678Sunday, February 07, 2010 5:50 AM GMT

Because it's pointless, only 2 people like it :l. I'm sorry. WAnna be in my Movie? It's called Stealth. It's the mission in this story. Kind of.
phoneguy
#20660752Sunday, February 07, 2010 5:53 AM GMT

Yeah!
phoneguy
#20660792Sunday, February 07, 2010 5:54 AM GMT

As long as my name can be Maxmillan Dunn. Cause you know that anyone named Max is a multimillioniare guy who was seperated from his twin at birth.

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