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Chapter 6: KATE!?
Eventually, James woke up and was feeling better.
I began trying to make shelter, although I did not really know how. "You know what I will FInd Shelter!" You suck! Keith started lauhing. I hoped he meant it in a friendly way I thought. "Ok, Blake Blade, and Blaze try and find fresh water. "Caine, Smantha, and James try and find food." "Kate and Carlytry and find firewood. " "Ok I'll make the fire Lets go everybody!" I said to them all. Blake headed over to a high hill, Blade looked around the planty area, and Blaze decided to go with Blake. Blade looked around, he did not have any weapons with him he believed it was cheap. Immediately, something grabbed him it began to pull him, it was undescribable it would send chills down your spine, but Blade tried to keep from screaming and rapped it between the eyes. The creature quickly slithered away. Blade tried to keep calm and came running to up the hills to Blake. Blake and Blaze heard running water, but did not know where it came from. Suddenly, something grabbed Blake's shoulder. "AH!!!" Blake screamed. It was Blade. "R-R-Re-Relax it-it was just me" Blade said to him with a scared voice, still frightened from before. Finally, they found a waterfall. "Yes!!!! fresh Water!!!" Blake yelled. They scopped it up with whatever they had, shirts hats, they just wanted water. They began to walk back to Keith and Ben. "Ok, me and Samantha look for berries, James you go get animals for food." Caine said to them as he walked off with Samantha into the forest. You'd expect James to be mad, but he was happy! "Cool!" james ran off looking for animals. In a couple minutes, James was dragging a deer to the camp. "Hey!, I did my job!" I said to ben and Keith. I felt like laughing as I looked at their shocked faces. "DANG!" I said out loud. Kate and Carly began getting wood, when suddenly something crawled up. Kate and Carly screamed, and quickly the slimy creature grabbed Kate dashed away. Carly grabbed the wood and ran back to camp. "Oh, hey Carly! Where's Kate?" I asked her. "This hideous slimy creature grabbed her and took her!" Carly told me. "WHAT!?" I asked her. "Ya!, it grabbed her and dashed away too quickly!" Carly told me. Soon, everyone came to camp and had done their job. I told everyone to look around and try to find Kate, but eventually they all reported unsuccesful findings and we couldn't serach any longer it was 1:00 A.M. Tears rolled down my cheeks as I tried to choke them back, but I couldn't she was gone and that was that. Later, when everybody was waiting for the food, I tried to start the fire. I Continued to try and Make the fire.....It was 1:00 A.M. It continued to rain hard. I heard a scream from nearby. "Kate? KATE!? IS THAT YOU!?" I called out as I followed the noise. No.. that was not Kate.. Was it? The Slimy Creature began to step toward me, then broker into a quick crawl. "KATE WHAT!? AHH!!!!!!"
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viva12Join Date: 2008-03-23
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Bravo! |
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viva12Join Date: 2008-03-23
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Gimme an M
Cheerleaders:M!
Gimme a O!
cheerleaders:O!
Gimme an R!
Cheerleaders:R!
Gimmme an E!
Cheerleaders:E!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
Cheerleaders & me:REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Crowd:WOOOOTERS! |
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viva12Join Date: 2008-03-23
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Right... he logged off, That is the sign of story writing!
...i think |
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And you are correct, but most of the time I keep myself logged on so you don't keep posting that.. lol and yes I do come up with ideas and think about the story whenever I am offline. |
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awolfTop 25 PosterJoin Date: 2007-07-11
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Wait, where did I go? Hmm... |
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keller501Join Date: 2008-10-28
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whazzam, Roman isn't in the chapter.. |
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I know.. He is going to be missing.. |
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keller501Join Date: 2008-10-28
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:P I get unbanned tommorow, so keller500 will be back |
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keller501Join Date: 2008-10-28
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And it fine by me, if he lives and Colin and Audrey are still with yall |
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I made some people go missing some of this chapter will show their view from inside the lair of the smily beast. |
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SLIMY beast not Smily lol |
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viva23Join Date: 2008-06-17
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mmmk
viva12's alt is not impressed by your typo
Bloody Mse6, she thinks everyone loves her, Tell that to her 500 screaming PROTESTERS! |
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I will now post Chapter 7 |
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Chapter 7:The Slimy Creature (PART 1)
The creature jumped onto me as it began to try and bite me when suddenly. " DIE YOU LIVING SWAMP!" Keith screamed as it got it in the side with a knife. The creature sent out a loud shriek and dashed off. I got up, I began to cry again. "What is it?" Keith asked me. I pointed at the creature running away, "Thats Kate's Bracelet....She never would take it off" I told Keith. "Oh no.." He said. I headed back to camp, as Blaze already made the fire for me.(Anybody get the joke?lol) We sat around as keith tried singing a song to brighten the mood, however the words were EXTREMELY Explicit and just I could not write it here. Caine and Samantha were covering each others ears, and finally when they took out their ears all they heard was "-Itches!". Keith agreed to take the night shift of staying up over night, along with Caine. The next morning, I woke up feeling around for Kate, but then I remembered. I got up and sighed as I lied back, the only thing that made me laugh a little was to find out Keith fell asleep. I hoped they were gonna come out safe.
Chapter 7:The Slimy Creature (PART 2)
Cedix, Kate, Colin, Audrey, and Roman woke up in a pit of slime. "Ugh... Where am I?" Kate asked. Colin and Audrey were just still in a happy mood saying, "ITS LIKE A HORROR MOVIE! :D". Cedix, tried to look at one of his radars, and other machines, but EVERYTHING was shut off. Roman got up and looked around at the dark hallways. They walked through a big door, towering what they estimated to be 50 feet. They opened the door, and walked through, and saw a HUGE nest. It was full of these huge eggs, and Audrey was the first one to say, "They must be from the Creature. If we smash them, there won't be anymore!!!". They agreed, but Kate was a little shaky on the idea. After, all the eggs were smashed, they saw a shadow walking through another door. That door was the exit, or for the thing an entrance, they quickly hid behind a door, so that when the creature wasn't looking they would run out. The creature walked over and saw the eggs smashed, it screamed in horror. Kate tried to hold her breath. Suddenly, Roman sneezed. The Slimy Creature stared at them, at jumped at them when immediately!- |
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viva23Join Date: 2008-06-17
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And where might James be? |
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james was quiet in this Chapter, and didn't do much, so I didn't mention him. |
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carlygirl77Top 100 PosterJoin Date: 2008-10-16
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ish okai, viva.... carly was quiet tooz...
(good job though, by the way!!) |
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Chapter 8 will be posted soon.. The story ends on Chapter 20
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viva23Join Date: 2008-06-17
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ok... a 20 chapter story is just fine. |
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coolblueJoin Date: 2007-08-13
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20 chapters... hopefully this doesn't get abandond... |
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Drsteak81Join Date: 2009-03-29
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To bad it isn't my charater who is dead(which I wanted him to be alive)came back to life somehow like magic or something and he tackled the creature.By the way I didnt say anything when he asked who was gonna die because I have a guardian who works at my school and we don't leave at about 6:00PM in my time. |
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Sorry I didn't post a chapter Yesterday |
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