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soundcloud . com/yung-gat/2-im-actulaly-not-sure |
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Holy... The first minute is very interesting from what I can actually decipher.
B U T W H Y |
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Everything about your track is godly.
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BlockeusJoin Date: 2012-05-21
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lit |
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xabiJoin Date: 2008-08-31
Post Count: 6836 |
wow incredible |
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nice
BRI WILL NOT DIVIDE US |
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thanks guys so basically i just need to push bricks and rhyme hard and fast |
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None of what I've seen is "legitimate criticism."
The song is broken, that meaning there's little to no music theory involved with this, your rapping is even off key to the synth and beat.
Aside from most of this track being terribly made, the sound design is alright.
I've peeked at your other tracks, and everything is clean mix/master wise, but I'd assume you're just using clean samples in all of your tracks and just rapping over it.
This is clearly a joke, and the fact you've been popping this out since a month ago means you aren't looking for improvement, or even looking into music production as a hobby for you.
Unless you put out something somewhat decent with whatever DAW you use, you're not going to gain any traction on this and instead you'll just be getting lies garbage attempts to pretend to like your music from other people saying "sounds great man!" or "keep it up." as means to make it seem like you did a good thing.
All in all, try harder. Maybe plan out your song before actually making it so you know what you're going to be getting yourself into instead of just mashing a beat together with some lyrics you wrote in your free time and thinking it'll be a hit.
None of your tracks are remotely comedic in any sense either, if you're just doing this to mess about, so good luck getting traction on making purposefully terrible songs. |
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nah man i just gota push bricks itll turn out alright
for real doe this is just a joke its my ironic rap account |
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Aight, cool. Try being creative with it instead of just purposefully-bad-for-luls. |
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chill out baitmaniac
Here are all asleep. There is no one to evaluate your funny jokes. |
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:^) Ain't no joke with essays jajaja. |
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,"So, you going to act black?" A voice was heard from
a man in his white suit in the
office. He was sitting
in his seat,
glaring all the
other business men.
And, silence just filled
the room.
Idk if he was being the R
word or he was just
being completely
random about
if black people
were sufficient.
Anyways, a girl
in the corner seated in
her chair explained, "Uhm,
sir I don't think
you're understanding the
question here".
The suited man was odd this time,
his voice changed, and suddenly, ripped off
all his clothes and became this Rhino mixed
with a cat yelling, "Aye girl,
wanna come to the bar with me tonight!".
Was this dude for real, he just deliberately
transforms into a Rhino and
tries asking a girl out.
Me, I was in the way back row just
like, "My eyes have deceived me".
Here are all asleep. There is no one to evaluate your funny jokes. |
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He locked his arm around me and told me to say
Hard R
N word
Thumbs up, N word. |
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2etlisJoin Date: 2016-12-09
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GARBAGE LOL WTF ARE YOU SAYING OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG |
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LeylandSpitfire
Joined: 25 Oct 2014
Total Posts: 2366
Pawn Stars Fan G…
01-30-2017 10:21 AM
nah man i just gota push bricks itll turn out alright
""""""""""for real doe this is just a joke its my ironic rap account""""""""" |
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acylliJoin Date: 2016-05-01
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trash
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All of these replies are ironic |
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nhelooe idness frieneends |
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it sounds like the voiceline files of a Core from Portal put over a fl studio hip-hop beat made in like half an hour.
please don't do hip-hop even ironically |
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Why did you necro-bump? :^( |
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idk i was just looking through my previous threads |
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